tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post1133544413615766384..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): BellsFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6633664633112620472014-12-10T16:30:28.188-05:002014-12-10T16:30:28.188-05:00Your story poems are definitely my favorites! This...Your story poems are definitely my favorites! This was a delight and so very funny. Laughter is GOOD!!!<br /><br />Good thing I went back and read the poem again. On my first reading, I read these lines incorrectly. Here's what I read: <br />"At the Office For Americans With Disabilities,<br />Quasimodo has a desk. <br />Or it is a telephone which converts voice into text." LOL the difference between "On" and "Or" can be major:~)<br /><br /><br /><br />Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23071537936465847722014-12-09T08:21:00.030-05:002014-12-09T08:21:00.030-05:00oh, i love this, SP!
i've been trying to writ...oh, i love this, SP!<br /><br />i've been trying to write something to your prompt ~ can't seem to get more than a line or two. i'll keep trying even if it takes a year cuz i really like your prompt!<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13629303520695044479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77422875634224759902014-12-08T00:04:59.680-05:002014-12-08T00:04:59.680-05:00And that's how it's done. A mash-up. I w...And that's how it's done. A mash-up. I will continue tinkering with an idea but so far it is pretty awful. Maybe it will appear in one of the "Play it Again" prompts. BTW, I LOVE Quasimodo - my oldest son, the actor, would love to play him on Broadway - and he nails all the songs too. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86835694142524099782014-12-07T17:09:19.279-05:002014-12-07T17:09:19.279-05:00Love, love, love this. You got me! I had to try on...Love, love, love this. You got me! I had to try one of my own.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59954659734782176692014-12-07T02:11:00.703-05:002014-12-07T02:11:00.703-05:00Aw, poor Quasi.
"Alexander Graham ____.&qu...Aw, poor Quasi. <br /><br />"Alexander Graham ____." 4 letters.<br />He doesn't know this one, --ha!!Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53055424013872675622014-12-06T15:35:02.435-05:002014-12-06T15:35:02.435-05:00Wow...goosebumps and sigh...this is the kind of tr...Wow...goosebumps and sigh...this is the kind of true beauty that goes on beneath the radar for so many. Shay, this is a moving piece. <br /><br />Thank you, for the challenge. :)Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57018287812641579312014-12-06T13:40:23.029-05:002014-12-06T13:40:23.029-05:00Wow. Only you, lady.Wow. Only you, lady.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79845095444997402902014-12-06T11:40:23.796-05:002014-12-06T11:40:23.796-05:00Wow! I love your mind!Wow! I love your mind!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11001611449547630702014-12-06T10:43:14.211-05:002014-12-06T10:43:14.211-05:00Different than I ever imagined but a good differen...Different than I ever imagined but a good difference Well doneGailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80812161372390324032014-12-06T10:10:42.821-05:002014-12-06T10:10:42.821-05:00Deaf in a universe of bells, yet the vibrations re...Deaf in a universe of bells, yet the vibrations remain to sing the message, and those gypsy girls...well, they never quit. A very original 'mash-up,' these two, but it feels totally right.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73708247131099786592014-12-06T09:36:35.562-05:002014-12-06T09:36:35.562-05:00This has a great deal of plaintive sweetness in th...This has a great deal of plaintive sweetness in the comedy. I am glad Eddie and Quasi got together-- The crossword on the bus has a special sweetness. Thanks. k. (http://Manicddaily.wordpress.com.)<br /><br />Only an old blogger ID that I never used comes up here, which is fine. K. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24387491059528002752014-12-06T07:19:25.134-05:002014-12-06T07:19:25.134-05:00I laughed at Quasimodo at the Office for Disabilit...I laughed at Quasimodo at the Office for Disabilities receiving poems from Eddie but the ending is tender as Quasimodo thinks of a girl and the poems and calls them lovely. It's the spirit in the plaintive song as well. Nice combination.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23684954467637294682014-12-06T00:26:52.931-05:002014-12-06T00:26:52.931-05:00Bells, bells, bells, bells--this one by Poe I love...Bells, bells, bells, bells--this one by Poe I love reading aloud. I love the driver as Raven. Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43073238422240811782014-12-05T23:10:14.777-05:002014-12-05T23:10:14.777-05:00Quasimodo on a bus, quite an unlikely scenario..lo...Quasimodo on a bus, quite an unlikely scenario..love it!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76809294625032069832014-12-05T15:09:04.676-05:002014-12-05T15:09:04.676-05:00such a delightful mash-up
much love...such a delightful mash-up<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34217496424222043912014-12-05T14:34:18.792-05:002014-12-05T14:34:18.792-05:00A wonderful tale. I can see them. I have a raven f...A wonderful tale. I can see them. I have a raven flapping around in my head this morning too. I see she took a side trip to pick up your buddy. Smiles.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79102023652810387452014-12-05T14:33:31.211-05:002014-12-05T14:33:31.211-05:00Indeed.. I think that no-one would allow Quasimodo...Indeed.. I think that no-one would allow Quasimodo to ring the bells.. probably a back-breaking job.. interesting character to put into a modern gritty environment.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com