tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post121462724943764313..comments2024-03-28T15:32:26.808-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Bitter At All Winged CreaturesFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57171784152401063092009-04-10T15:26:00.000-04:002009-04-10T15:26:00.000-04:00Board up the sky.Shay, Shay, Shay, Shay, Shay, Sha...Board up the sky.<BR/><BR/>Shay, Shay, Shay, Shay, Shay, Shay. You got it going on, in oh so many ways.<BR/><BR/>xoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10632783483874140122009-04-10T10:46:00.000-04:002009-04-10T10:46:00.000-04:00You are going to love me now that I went to a writ...You are going to love me now that I went to a writing seminar yesterday, now I think I know what I'm talking about. Here goes: You used very few words but picked two words that carry heavy weight, expunge and die, and it packs a much bigger punch than if you had used 10 stanzas with all kinds of clever wording. Absolutely brilliant.Susan English Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05661766173970296173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4967726437006938752009-04-09T21:10:00.000-04:002009-04-09T21:10:00.000-04:00Strong impact with this compact photo. Love the w...Strong impact with this compact photo. Love the words you chose to get the image across.septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70701936022807988902009-04-09T07:27:00.000-04:002009-04-09T07:27:00.000-04:00I have something for you!I have something for you!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13481401958852123702009-04-09T04:53:00.000-04:002009-04-09T04:53:00.000-04:00Precise yet so deep!!! Fantastic!!!Precise yet so deep!!! Fantastic!!!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34755984793046735412009-04-09T01:33:00.000-04:002009-04-09T01:33:00.000-04:00Brave. Thanks for sharing.Brave. Thanks for sharing.listen for azurehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04300428777385011211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72976427517845049172009-04-08T19:58:00.000-04:002009-04-08T19:58:00.000-04:00I'll gladly accept the hug AND the chocolate, as w...I'll gladly accept the hug AND the chocolate, as well as all the very kind remarks. Thank you so much, everyone. <BR/><BR/>PS--love you toooo, Kelly K. ;-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57277481501141217682009-04-08T16:22:00.000-04:002009-04-08T16:22:00.000-04:00I think you might need chocolate. That will help:...I think you might need chocolate. That will help:)Debbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17480046958714954128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56074722842361659672009-04-08T15:45:00.000-04:002009-04-08T15:45:00.000-04:00Do you need a hug?Do you need a hug?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31955268054687896412009-04-08T13:09:00.000-04:002009-04-08T13:09:00.000-04:00I love the image of boarding up the sky.I love the image of boarding up the sky.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65695184188498251852009-04-08T11:43:00.000-04:002009-04-08T11:43:00.000-04:00Maybe one of your most effective poems .. and it w...Maybe one of your most effective poems .. and it works perfectly with that photo ...Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47711536227507597032009-04-08T10:31:00.000-04:002009-04-08T10:31:00.000-04:00Wow, how amazingly stated in so few words...thank ...Wow, how amazingly stated in so few words...thank you!<BR/>GAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15127343815869529555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-32537863688998770412009-04-08T09:30:00.000-04:002009-04-08T09:30:00.000-04:00Damn, I better remember not to fly north! ;)Dark, ...Damn, I better remember not to fly north! ;)<BR/><BR/>Dark, but as always, heartfelt and well done.Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17560614073319109150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26433029701327115052009-04-08T07:05:00.000-04:002009-04-08T07:05:00.000-04:00I'm feeling a bit bitter myself today. I'm hoping...I'm feeling a bit bitter myself today. I'm hoping some sweet tea will help. Really I just want to fly too.<BR/><BR/>Have a great Wednesday.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-32883062391690085112009-04-08T05:27:00.000-04:002009-04-08T05:27:00.000-04:00Fabulous... love the raw honesty. (((((((((Shay)))...Fabulous... love the raw honesty. (((((((((Shay))))))))) love you more xxxx foxylete (todays word verification! lol)Kelly https://www.blogger.com/profile/16136234174682473917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44111506721291515372009-04-08T01:31:00.000-04:002009-04-08T01:31:00.000-04:00very sad. very bitter. powerful words.and pop on o...very sad. very bitter. powerful words.<BR/><BR/>and pop on over here and pick something up pleeeez...<BR/>http://gsp-shadow.blogspot.com/2009/04/zombie-chicken-award.htmlShadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85870708788636529282009-04-08T00:36:00.000-04:002009-04-08T00:36:00.000-04:00Wow! Short and to the point, Shay. Very short, yet...Wow! Short and to the point, Shay. Very short, yet says so much!Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06089318003200939942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31207910886540854842009-04-08T00:08:00.000-04:002009-04-08T00:08:00.000-04:00Sheesh. Bad day?Sheesh. Bad day?Judithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16354890444410748967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39710050432973135422009-04-07T23:14:00.000-04:002009-04-07T23:14:00.000-04:00Wow. Short and powerful.Wow. Short and powerful.Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.com