tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post1524564954272936635..comments2024-03-28T15:32:26.808-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Ballet At LakesideFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78737196029674198862010-12-18T11:57:15.831-05:002010-12-18T11:57:15.831-05:00Shit, Woman -- PLEASE write more crap!! This is t...Shit, Woman -- PLEASE write more crap!! This is the best poetry crap on the net.<br /><br />Funny, when we feel at the bottom of our creativity barrel, that's when it fills up fastest with swirls of meaty wordage.<br /><br />Lenny says he publishes less than 10% of his writing.<br /><br />Dying gypsy, so sad. <br /><br />xoxoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87427388970745961932010-12-17T07:17:24.971-05:002010-12-17T07:17:24.971-05:00came back and read it again
I guess if you can...came back and read it again<br /> <br /><br />I guess if you cant hold the one you love what's the point of bones<br />make the rejection complete<br /><br />feeling this one Shay - profoundlymoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54607166570102114092010-12-16T13:23:25.094-05:002010-12-16T13:23:25.094-05:00YES!!! Thank you Hedgewitch and Detroit Free Press...YES!!! Thank you Hedgewitch and Detroit Free Press. Without them this powerful pome would have never been born.<br />That "So I reject you" has a lot of power in it.<br />You have guts, flesh, bones and the heart of a tiger. <br />xoxo<br />Weasel-friend<br />p.s. I don't believe you are capable of writing crap.La Belette Rougehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05686717070120116918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73215733318994010732010-12-16T13:10:10.834-05:002010-12-16T13:10:10.834-05:00I watch the skeleton dance, cast aside by the gyps...I watch the skeleton dance, cast aside by the gypsy's hand... reads both tragic and uplifting.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49253287196201702532010-12-16T01:17:35.339-05:002010-12-16T01:17:35.339-05:00I like it.I like it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47333274691783044402010-12-15T22:16:44.020-05:002010-12-15T22:16:44.020-05:00And you said this was crap? Wish I could write su...And you said this was crap? Wish I could write such crap. I love the imagery you create with the bones dancing and the dirty work and a wink. So amazing!<br /><br />TeresaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83868963956326479442010-12-15T21:37:55.527-05:002010-12-15T21:37:55.527-05:00It's a damn good thing you listened to them ;-...It's a damn good thing you listened to them ;-)machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6458887739237670502010-12-15T20:24:00.146-05:002010-12-15T20:24:00.146-05:00I know I shouldn't ask, but I ask everyone all...I know I shouldn't ask, but I ask everyone all the time and it doesn't do any good...because it just doesn't..but what surprises me about all good work is the beginning. The beginning of this is genius..it carries the entire piece. I want to start at the beginning but all I ever come up with are the ends. I know where I'm going but find it so difficult to start. But with this opening your piece flowed so naturally to the elegy Joy noted. Excellent!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71479223189581074442010-12-15T15:58:38.908-05:002010-12-15T15:58:38.908-05:00Stark in its mood, effective imagery, tone blah bl...Stark in its mood, effective imagery, tone blah blah blah: exemplary.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41787239351749067182010-12-15T15:57:23.095-05:002010-12-15T15:57:23.095-05:00Well, after a day of no internet I am very relieve...Well, after a day of no internet I am very relieved to come in and find another masterpiece, which shows you are more than okay! Where to even start with lines I loved? they are all so incredibly powerful and amazing and original, I'd have to list them all. Absolutely STUNNING writing. Breathtaking - and like Hedgewitch said, tombstone-worthy - not that we're ready for that yet! The dancing bones and the bleeding are enough for now:)<br />Do keep writing. Because you must. No one else can write like you - on the planet. So consider it your gift and your duty, hee hee.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13502641147624831482010-12-15T14:47:20.309-05:002010-12-15T14:47:20.309-05:00Well, this certainly isn't crap. I'm glad ...Well, this certainly isn't crap. I'm glad you wrote.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3838891798832346132010-12-15T14:43:42.028-05:002010-12-15T14:43:42.028-05:00Very nice. I specially like the last line.
Keep w...Very nice. I specially like the last line.<br />Keep writing Shay.<br />xo jjJoanna Jenkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10836376588710862173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-32505780561186934932010-12-15T14:42:58.178-05:002010-12-15T14:42:58.178-05:00You can never go dark...every star is reborn over ...You can never go dark...every star is reborn over and over again...and that includes you..Shay...thank you...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44828104375814683102010-12-15T14:36:41.752-05:002010-12-15T14:36:41.752-05:00You can't go wrong with dirty words!You can't go wrong with dirty words!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59905174570097451802010-12-15T14:35:40.469-05:002010-12-15T14:35:40.469-05:00An interesting write, very deepAn interesting write, very deepKodjo Deynoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77388913500254002122010-12-15T13:39:29.753-05:002010-12-15T13:39:29.753-05:00I ADMIT IT Shay,i am addicted to your witty,so ver...I ADMIT IT Shay,i am addicted to your witty,so very cool way of painting with words..you never seize to amaze me..I AM SO HAPPY i get to read you!<br />clapping my hands so hard for this FANTASTIC write..damn you are so good!<br />;)<br />wink wink ;)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72114724052308617512010-12-15T10:59:14.437-05:002010-12-15T10:59:14.437-05:00Powerful .. impoweredPowerful .. impoweredDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52352289998155677312010-12-15T10:40:27.749-05:002010-12-15T10:40:27.749-05:00bones or no bones you are still very powerful.bones or no bones you are still very powerful.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5968816508571855012010-12-15T07:45:11.350-05:002010-12-15T07:45:11.350-05:00Sometimes we may think it's crap but we're...Sometimes we may think it's crap but we're wrong; this was just such a case.<br /><br />P.S. - Make up your own horoscope - it'll be far more accurate than someone else's guessing.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56682363668756650172010-12-15T06:00:58.504-05:002010-12-15T06:00:58.504-05:00Love the way you ended it "extinct" and ...Love the way you ended it "extinct" and "dirty word with a wink" and everything you wrote before that is brilliant! It's true what they say, when we feel a bit out of sorts, we become creative geniuses. (Ha...notice how I wrote "we" when I should've written "you!") ;)Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50535675070528195832010-12-15T05:56:47.865-05:002010-12-15T05:56:47.865-05:00holy moly, wish i could write some crap!!
i reall...holy moly, wish i could write some crap!!<br /><br />i really like this. it felt nice reading it. you're ok shay xxLisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05321514984426181181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38185101136791905182010-12-15T05:52:07.044-05:002010-12-15T05:52:07.044-05:00I like that dirty word with the wink. :)I like that dirty word with the wink. :)Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77414434941236198842010-12-15T02:57:16.236-05:002010-12-15T02:57:16.236-05:00hi shay-- this is powerful. A distinctive voice, ...hi shay-- this is powerful. A distinctive voice, a natural. xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31302893361776417652010-12-15T01:20:08.730-05:002010-12-15T01:20:08.730-05:00"And too proud to go dark without a dirty wor..."And too proud to go dark without a dirty word and a wink." And I should think so - no self-respecting Shay would do any less...TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6040358285998545542010-12-15T01:10:24.179-05:002010-12-15T01:10:24.179-05:00Wow! The bones spoke to me. Amazing stuff Shay.Wow! The bones spoke to me. Amazing stuff Shay.Tabitha Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08196816108272065974noreply@blogger.com