tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post154175472646241088..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Ballet For Dry GrassFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70234427351288529312009-03-17T21:40:00.000-04:002009-03-17T21:40:00.000-04:00Boudica Jolie? She of gorgeous full-lipped super-...Boudica Jolie? She of gorgeous full-lipped super-fame?<BR/><BR/>I like this one a lot.Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75295748297186340272009-03-17T18:58:00.000-04:002009-03-17T18:58:00.000-04:00Scarlet, my dear friend and fellow poet Kelly Dick...Scarlet, my dear friend and fellow poet Kelly Dickson is always saying that I make her snicker in the middle of my dark poems. I just can't help myself, I guess. ;-)<BR/><BR/>And don't forget the title refers to dance, Pouty. ;-) Thank you as always for your wonderful replies!<BR/><BR/>I've written before about the Tower tarot card, Vicarious. I'm just drawn to the idea of people being blasted out of their comfort zone by a strike of lightning. Plus, it's my card, or so I'm told. <BR/><BR/>My work images, Shadow? I'm not sure what that means, but i always love to see that you've visited. :-)<BR/><BR/>K, I debated about that verse, but in the end I liked it a lot. I had thrown out a section about seeing which angels could fly, and ended up with that. I'm pleased you liked it!<BR/><BR/>Daryl, I try to paint a picture as succinctly as possible, and i just thought that did. Thanks for your many great comments!<BR/><BR/>My dog comes up with them, RK. I am simply his human mouthpiece. ;-)<BR/><BR/>Thanks so much, Sarah. I had to find a way of describing lightning that hadn't been done to death. ;-)<BR/><BR/>oOo, welcome back, T, you were missed lots! :-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47965223291586431012009-03-17T16:05:00.000-04:002009-03-17T16:05:00.000-04:00Hi Shay, I sent you an email. I haven't read this ...Hi Shay, I sent you an email. I haven't read this yet, as I have a lot of catching up to do, so i will be setting time aside this afternoon for *Shay Time*. :)Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06089318003200939942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9378264002221713982009-03-17T13:43:00.000-04:002009-03-17T13:43:00.000-04:00Thought provoking, you.And I shall savour that ima...Thought provoking, you.<BR/>And I shall savour that image of 'lightning ripped down out of Heaven like an endless diamond'<BR/>Beautiful you, just beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10904995536311387032009-03-17T12:54:00.000-04:002009-03-17T12:54:00.000-04:00How DO you come up with these? Amazing as always.....How DO you come up with these? Amazing as always...Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22053399686212995012009-03-17T10:21:00.000-04:002009-03-17T10:21:00.000-04:00'two baying bitches' .. I love this image ...'two baying bitches' .. I love this image ...Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69760904907044094152009-03-17T07:34:00.000-04:002009-03-17T07:34:00.000-04:00I like the part about ugly wings that can fly.I like the part about ugly wings that can fly.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36234157908505411832009-03-17T05:28:00.000-04:002009-03-17T05:28:00.000-04:00i love your work images herei love your work images hereShadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37883324245780378182009-03-17T00:56:00.000-04:002009-03-17T00:56:00.000-04:00I love the way this one sounds, but I'm not sure I...I love the way this one sounds, but I'm not sure I understand it. Is it about angels being cast out or the tarot tower falling down or am I trying too hard? I feel like I came in after the main event and am left clueless in the punishing aftermath.Judithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16354890444410748967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34791378782703311412009-03-16T22:44:00.000-04:002009-03-16T22:44:00.000-04:00You have so much going on in this poem I don't kno...You have so much going on in this poem I don't know where to start. You have the lightning strophes and you have the thunder banter. It makes the fall very rhythmic and the ending is perfect when they land on their feet. Standing O.Susan English Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05661766173970296173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81483763545617211932009-03-16T21:57:00.000-04:002009-03-16T21:57:00.000-04:00Beautifully done...and the last verse made me gigg...Beautifully done...and the last verse made me giggle for some reason.Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17560614073319109150noreply@blogger.com