tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post1547972434348200040..comments2024-03-28T15:32:26.808-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): JAMA to this, motherfuckersFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27784938368120410852018-02-17T06:20:28.254-05:002018-02-17T06:20:28.254-05:00You're one of the few poets I know who can hum...You're one of the few poets I know who can hum so merrily while filing her teeth. Satire that is wickedest delight. And such carrion! cooked to perfection! the juices peal as the pearlies sink in.Brendanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983584155125369291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63361792741952041272018-02-16T19:59:39.576-05:002018-02-16T19:59:39.576-05:00Digging the dead smile! Thanks for the added bonu...Digging the dead smile! Thanks for the added bonus of music.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15581699756221267712018-02-16T16:31:33.510-05:002018-02-16T16:31:33.510-05:00Curl up with JAMA (which I have actually scanned a...Curl up with JAMA (which I have actually scanned a few pages before bedtime before - don't recommend) or curl up with poetry... I know which I choose. Liked the line "so sought the cure prescribed in pop songs..." those lyrics can be convincing at times.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59010652072559448922018-02-16T15:16:20.513-05:002018-02-16T15:16:20.513-05:00There is a cure for everything... but where would ...There is a cure for everything... but where would poetry be...<br /><br />reminds me of Lady Lovelace, lord Byron's daughter who was brought up as far as possible from any poetry... she ended up as a very skilled mathematician brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85128413232303536782018-02-16T15:01:43.918-05:002018-02-16T15:01:43.918-05:00That contrary data made me giddy ... in fact the e...That contrary data made me giddy ... in fact the entire poem did!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1891271620442231342018-02-16T11:04:56.451-05:002018-02-16T11:04:56.451-05:00Rama Jama, you know.
"Dig my dead smile
prom...Rama Jama, you know.<br /><br />"Dig my dead smile<br />promising nothing,<br />desiring nothing,<br />done and cured after all,<br />patient X back at ground zero, sick of love but medically cleared--"<br /><br />That kicks ass.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39826222655309720412018-02-16T09:03:50.624-05:002018-02-16T09:03:50.624-05:00Oh, for that immunity, for that once and for ever ...Oh, for that immunity, for that once and for ever cure. For the final get the fuck out a here...<br /><br />Three cheers and mazel tov to those who get it right.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2046948728189392632018-02-16T03:11:34.070-05:002018-02-16T03:11:34.070-05:00Wow, Shay, this poem blows a storm, slowly and the...Wow, Shay, this poem blows a storm, slowly and then like a hurricane.<br />I love the way you tell the little swimmy endorphins which followed my boat after you'd been aboard' to 'kindly fuck off' and the final denial: <br />'patient X back at ground zero, sick of love but medically cleared'.<br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24832032008879469602018-02-15T23:02:17.698-05:002018-02-15T23:02:17.698-05:00Your poems always have a kick to them. And this di...Your poems always have a kick to them. And this did not disappoint. A for attitude...all the way.Vivian Zemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09588008375525403964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-140422628522525632018-02-15T15:01:16.311-05:002018-02-15T15:01:16.311-05:00JAMA = "The Journal of the American Medical A...JAMA = "The Journal of the American Medical Association." Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30270314446666393152018-02-15T14:52:03.641-05:002018-02-15T14:52:03.641-05:00Is that an Alabama reference in the title?Is that an Alabama reference in the title?✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78032964871315935832018-02-15T14:34:58.522-05:002018-02-15T14:34:58.522-05:00Oh yes, this is why some of us swear off loving hu...Oh yes, this is why some of us swear off loving humans and turn to dogs, who know how to love for real, and forever. Sigh. I knew your poem would be perfect. We have our doctorate in pain in this particular area.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50956608953103823062018-02-15T14:32:43.015-05:002018-02-15T14:32:43.015-05:00Patient cleared....like, how do MDs know this stuf...Patient cleared....like, how do MDs know this stuff, right? One can only clear oneself and it looks like you have done it. I love the repetition of and you.....like a record skipping.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2055238061055860092018-02-15T14:25:09.798-05:002018-02-15T14:25:09.798-05:00I had hoped you'd play along because I like yo...I had hoped you'd play along because I like your style with topics like this. I was not disappointed. Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78579065451512653622018-02-15T13:08:10.981-05:002018-02-15T13:08:10.981-05:00As always, a complex, lyrical, and scathing ride t...As always, a complex, lyrical, and scathing ride through the dark of the heart, with a guide who never fails to point out the worst or the best. Your last stanza is beyond chilling.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73642148642165586202018-02-15T12:46:30.815-05:002018-02-15T12:46:30.815-05:00This has such splendid teeth! If I started quotin...This has such splendid teeth! If I started quoting most loved lines, I'd fill the page.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com