tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post170886133807202534..comments2024-03-28T08:35:27.826-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): The Lemon LaughedFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71854973548740375622011-05-23T14:17:35.483-04:002011-05-23T14:17:35.483-04:00I love this one! You blend philosophy and humour b...I love this one! You blend philosophy and humour beautifully.abhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10783096356557762193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81603822288466421392011-05-23T01:31:53.950-04:002011-05-23T01:31:53.950-04:00i adore your writing and your wit!
danii adore your writing and your wit!<br />daniAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25372828736574532662011-05-22T21:01:56.503-04:002011-05-22T21:01:56.503-04:00I have never read better poetry in my life, than y...I have never read better poetry in my life, than yours - FOR REAL. I love poetry because of you. FOR REAL. You've had to have written until the top of your head blew off - and I think of that when I think of writing today. How I need to let self imposed limitions drop away until all that is inside spews out. If you can do THIS with a lemon - come to my world, I have insanely untapped material here. xxLisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05321514984426181181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24219626049883930272011-05-21T07:27:32.182-04:002011-05-21T07:27:32.182-04:00Shay, this wa very cool!Shay, this wa very cool!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18896655890801835632011-05-20T14:15:20.757-04:002011-05-20T14:15:20.757-04:00not a sour puss at all-- a dance, a taste of lemon...not a sour puss at all-- a dance, a taste of lemonade in the throat-- you have such a wonderful touch, acrid and acidic humor but always loving-- I do miss that edge in my own work. xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39854026611918856672011-05-20T14:14:05.780-04:002011-05-20T14:14:05.780-04:00The yellow guy has a point ..The yellow guy has a point ..Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55837220695879230192011-05-20T10:20:26.558-04:002011-05-20T10:20:26.558-04:00Shay,
This was fun. I loved this line, "lik...Shay, <br /><br />This was fun. I loved this line, "like some sort of acidic gospel." LOL <br /><br />Only you could write a poem like this one featuring a lemon.<br /><br />I also liked the conversation. I say take that knife and use it. Then again, your lemon sounds a bit like the Black Knight in Monty Python's Holy Grail:~)Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67397975743824076982011-05-20T09:34:21.799-04:002011-05-20T09:34:21.799-04:00Might I suggest a goddamn salt shaker?Might I suggest a goddamn salt shaker?Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51671168084958318652011-05-20T03:51:07.562-04:002011-05-20T03:51:07.562-04:00Oh girl, that was phenomenal!! 'like some sort...Oh girl, that was phenomenal!! 'like some sort of acidic gospel' Fabulous!!Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03290572009221670011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35779566553308039412011-05-20T02:14:39.052-04:002011-05-20T02:14:39.052-04:00It published excessively...but did it have wild ad...It published excessively...but did it have wild adventurous drunken intercourse with hairy goatherds??? Of course not. It's nothing--nothing, I tell ya. A zero.<br /><br />Girl, you slay me.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87453023239608387132011-05-19T23:19:47.382-04:002011-05-19T23:19:47.382-04:00wow, a real gem!!!!!!!
Aloha from Waikiki
Comf...wow, a real gem!!!!!!!<br /><br /><br /><br />Aloha from Waikiki<br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /><br />><}}(°><br /><br /> <br /> ><}}(°><br /><br /><°)}}><Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23428185366679425562011-05-19T22:58:54.234-04:002011-05-19T22:58:54.234-04:00Would love to see what you would do with a pineapp...Would love to see what you would do with a pineapple ....Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31560493038391657262011-05-19T22:46:06.358-04:002011-05-19T22:46:06.358-04:00I'd chop it some more, then see if it's st...I'd chop it some more, then see if it's still such a sourpuss. Maybe I would even make lemon-aid from it. Or a car ;-)machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69746685611781517562011-05-19T22:44:47.782-04:002011-05-19T22:44:47.782-04:00Shay, you absolutely slay me. This just rocks. I l...Shay, you absolutely slay me. This just rocks. I love "it insulted me because that's how it rolls." You made my day with this!!!!!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-92132125242769337312011-05-19T22:44:00.300-04:002011-05-19T22:44:00.300-04:00you know what they say, when life give you lemons,...you know what they say, when life give you lemons, find someone with a papercut and squeeze it on them...oh wait, i got that wrong...when life gives you lemons, use it for zest so you can skip a shower today...no...noo...i will get it eventually....when life give you lemons....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42103673594115819702011-05-19T22:43:02.165-04:002011-05-19T22:43:02.165-04:00I used to think I had a lont of internal, pent-up,...I used to think I had a lont of internal, pent-up, angsty rage, but my doctor told me that I was simply lacking fiber in my diet. I'm much better now-a-days...HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38024026388717091292011-05-19T22:41:43.137-04:002011-05-19T22:41:43.137-04:00gosh such a sour puss...gosh such a sour puss...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52035443853397314302011-05-19T22:39:06.302-04:002011-05-19T22:39:06.302-04:00Shay,
If you're going to talk to the fruit, ma...Shay,<br />If you're going to talk to the fruit, may I suggest bananas-they're much more a-peeling! Or maybe oranges-they always have something juicy to say. While lemons can certainly be pithy, their wit is quite acidic.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-693957753230406962011-05-19T22:37:22.668-04:002011-05-19T22:37:22.668-04:00I'm starting to love your thoughts. Great one....I'm starting to love your thoughts. Great one.Aizahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02900320846839982533noreply@blogger.com