tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post1778309086593191464..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): AliceFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13425028612004296102015-05-27T19:02:18.759-04:002015-05-27T19:02:18.759-04:00I love that Alice seems to have a split personalit...I love that Alice seems to have a split personality. And I'm dying to know what was in her purse. In this case, I presume it's fair to say "Alice" is hiding "all lies" amidst the lipsticks.<br /><br />The rhyming and rhythm sure made me smile, as did the arrival of the champion, who turned it all around for her. :)<br /><br />Morals, morals, morals. No matter where you look.<br /><br />I'd like to hear more about the sadist matron. And anything involving Kate!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19731708399180446202015-05-27T12:20:46.516-04:002015-05-27T12:20:46.516-04:00adorbs! .. no really adorbs! .. no really Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43950780026480337592015-05-27T11:05:59.725-04:002015-05-27T11:05:59.725-04:00I like that rhymin'! :)I like that rhymin'! :)Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35984866661189215782015-05-26T21:56:00.238-04:002015-05-26T21:56:00.238-04:00Ha! Did NOT see that coming. ;) Great modern take....Ha! Did NOT see that coming. ;) Great modern take. Love that she's headed for the pen, instead of college. Fun piece here. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-12520010390246115022015-05-26T18:08:13.607-04:002015-05-26T18:08:13.607-04:00You simply amaze me!You simply amaze me!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33764982064767587002015-05-26T13:20:13.900-04:002015-05-26T13:20:13.900-04:00a man with a queer
predilection for romancing mino...a man with a queer<br />predilection for romancing minors...<br /><br />It now appears the same is true of James M Barrie, and his Peter Pan muse.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16009886478545514792015-05-26T13:00:41.770-04:002015-05-26T13:00:41.770-04:00A twisted, updated re-cap of the Alice mythos, and...A twisted, updated re-cap of the Alice mythos, and probably just what would happen if it were set in the modern era. The rhyming is always a plus for me, and here it is decidedly original.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38339119445694246562015-05-25T23:42:09.879-04:002015-05-25T23:42:09.879-04:00i loved this brilliant rewrite on our modern-day A...i loved this brilliant rewrite on our modern-day Alice. I'm sure there's more than one of her.<br /><br />And the little rhymes here and there flowed in just the right places.<br /><br />Thanks for partaking in the prompt, it was a pleasure to have you stop by.Stacy M.S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17768743830360856158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76321090256995302152015-05-25T22:43:12.444-04:002015-05-25T22:43:12.444-04:00It is rather brilliant, rhyming sadist and that is...It is rather brilliant, rhyming sadist and that is, kiddo. I love it. Alice with a twist, what a cool prompt!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61241399844689601622015-05-25T22:22:13.709-04:002015-05-25T22:22:13.709-04:00Once again a fabulous perfectly carved opening, th...Once again a fabulous perfectly carved opening, then a poem to live up to it. Simple and profound. So good, the fools miss it; Like all genius. [alas]<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />( '><br />/))<br />//""<br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu, <br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">ComfortSpiral</a><br /> =^..^=Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.com