tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2027782053286469860..comments2024-03-28T05:18:54.680-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Two RondeletsFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68472571986310378972017-11-13T14:34:55.293-05:002017-11-13T14:34:55.293-05:00Love the mystery that flows through both your Rond...Love the mystery that flows through both your Rondelets!!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47426594651883889882017-11-13T00:38:31.096-05:002017-11-13T00:38:31.096-05:00I will be more than a bit crazy if I can get my we...I will be more than a bit crazy if I can get my weight in daisies. May I? Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44203755865572523712017-11-12T18:34:45.618-05:002017-11-12T18:34:45.618-05:00Wow, those both have some real snap and zing to th...Wow, those both have some real snap and zing to them. Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56644534908956293572017-11-12T13:51:03.886-05:002017-11-12T13:51:03.886-05:00Oh, my gosh, both of this hit me right where I liv...Oh, my gosh, both of this hit me right where I live. I've faced the first one too many times with my family, and the second with my mother's Alzheimer's.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60313307384068073072017-11-12T13:24:17.023-05:002017-11-12T13:24:17.023-05:00You can pack a wallop and tell a tale in so few li...You can pack a wallop and tell a tale in so few lines. I loved the mad then calm daisies best.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82874857764684512412017-11-12T13:20:06.111-05:002017-11-12T13:20:06.111-05:00Loved both, looks like second one hints at what th...Loved both, looks like second one hints at what the doctor isn't saying!Namrathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459190888629470886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49178602352908850702017-11-12T10:54:36.059-05:002017-11-12T10:54:36.059-05:00These burn... ouch. Read together or separately. I...These burn... ouch. Read together or separately. I love them, especially the first, which I imagine read through clenched teeth.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85536207090064667242017-11-12T10:37:22.961-05:002017-11-12T10:37:22.961-05:00In the second one I do think of Drusilla from Buff...In the second one I do think of Drusilla from Buffy... how pretty daisies can feel ominous... in the first one I feel other darkness rippling.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39301795948110467052017-11-12T10:13:32.212-05:002017-11-12T10:13:32.212-05:00I love how in each one, you hid a little something...I love how in each one, you hid a little something beneath the surface.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9536108097990222562017-11-12T09:44:10.104-05:002017-11-12T09:44:10.104-05:00Shay--
Another form I've never tried--rondelet...Shay--<br />Another form I've never tried--rondelets. I will have to check out this poetic form.<br /><br />And thanks for the box of shit you sent me. It's terrible when a person--me--sends someone (you) a package of poop, and then the poop comes back. (Did the postal service know they were delivering such toxic material? I doubt it.) The book? Ah, that was like icing on the... well, it was a delightful surprise. I will savor, enjoy and then review...Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15003537510078015012017-11-12T09:14:07.011-05:002017-11-12T09:14:07.011-05:00Nourishing little pastiesNourishing little pastiesCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40490863049098155032017-11-12T08:31:41.618-05:002017-11-12T08:31:41.618-05:00Very handily built, Shay where the form is invisib...Very handily built, Shay where the form is invisible, and I think it's a difficult form to make that happen. I can relate to both.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82977291373475821862017-11-12T08:16:00.721-05:002017-11-12T08:16:00.721-05:00Eek!!❣️ Leave it to you to bring the magic to the ...Eek!!❣️ Leave it to you to bring the magic to the page! Love, love, love this especially; "Pretty daisies soothing agitated crazies their natures all to hell and gone mad in evening, calm at dawn." Beautifully executed!❣️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.com