tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2082948925038330820..comments2024-03-28T19:31:00.203-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Pearl HarborFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84825866309287774272016-03-14T08:52:59.661-04:002016-03-14T08:52:59.661-04:00To me, this poem as an analogy between what is hap...To me, this poem as an analogy between what is happening to a woman's health and Pearl Harbor. You nailed it.<br /><br />Pat<br />Critter AlleyPat Wahlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01138619912065680084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67869560760479228052016-03-06T23:41:19.394-05:002016-03-06T23:41:19.394-05:00brilliant ~brilliant ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39875397327824820272016-03-05T16:58:28.746-05:002016-03-05T16:58:28.746-05:00Really excellent take on Pearl Harbor!
Thought o...Really excellent take on Pearl Harbor!<br /><br /><br />Thought of you-<br /><br />"If there is a heaven, it's certain our animals are to be there. Their lives become so interwoven with our own, it would take more than an archangel to detangle them." Pam BrownCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-32992102765535894812016-03-04T14:24:11.220-05:002016-03-04T14:24:11.220-05:00"lazy as an umbrella in last night's drin..."lazy as an umbrella in last night's drink." Lord, that's brilliant.<br /><br />Again: Everything is going to be just fine.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82102627905023484842016-03-04T13:20:45.746-05:002016-03-04T13:20:45.746-05:00Bleak, you can't help but feel for the stunned...Bleak, you can't help but feel for the stunned protagonist. Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58309690883631628722016-03-04T09:41:59.756-05:002016-03-04T09:41:59.756-05:00'lazy as an umbrella in last night's drink...'lazy as an umbrella in last night's drink..' You make the bleak coruscate with vicious skill here--and highlight the random, even arbitrary, nature of our good/ill fortunes--and of evil. The last line completely rules. Bitter as a chewed root and twice as potent.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49340463011037389602016-03-03T11:36:31.466-05:002016-03-03T11:36:31.466-05:00Yes, fatalism....you have nailed it. I just read a...Yes, fatalism....you have nailed it. I just read a blog title asking "Has the world gone batshit crazy?" and I would have to reply, in a word, yes. I, too, hope this is story, not autobio. You write life real, that's why I love your work so much.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52726012089387672002016-03-03T11:16:22.117-05:002016-03-03T11:16:22.117-05:00Sometimes our lives do turn into a battle zone thr...Sometimes our lives do turn into a battle zone through no fault of our own. The fatalism of this piece seems very real and appropriate to me.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43409768693009590242016-03-03T09:13:37.618-05:002016-03-03T09:13:37.618-05:00I can see the whole thing.I can see the whole thing.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-32773924453620591892016-03-03T06:58:12.315-05:002016-03-03T06:58:12.315-05:00I hope this is all you putting yourself in someone...I hope this is all you putting yourself in someone else's place...<br /><br />It's powerful. The images come flying at the reader, and pain pierces the narrator's puzzlement...<br />Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.com