tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2154646438900353878..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): DescentFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49765858974229463252011-03-21T17:17:16.228-04:002011-03-21T17:17:16.228-04:00very vivid imagery her! Good stuff.very vivid imagery her! Good stuff.Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17770013944671340961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27680101441192134072011-03-19T20:58:14.967-04:002011-03-19T20:58:14.967-04:00Cats like crows around a reddening sun. I like tha...Cats like crows around a reddening sun. I like that...and the woodish hands sound appealing as well. Wonderfully written, Shay.Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84398690953247227842011-03-19T10:15:20.901-04:002011-03-19T10:15:20.901-04:00Like everyone else I'm struck by "crows a...Like everyone else I'm struck by "crows around a reddening sun" and "woodish hands," but what really gets me is the ending--how she disintegrates when called by her name, suggesting that she cannot be spoken. Not simply a fine write here, but intriguing and provocative.Ami Mattisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391930163467566669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9690015611572902052011-03-19T09:22:44.641-04:002011-03-19T09:22:44.641-04:00The reddening sun, burning against banishment, fu...The reddening sun, burning against banishment, futilely... Dusk never sounded so dramatic, Shay. Brilliant in every sense of the word.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33094655466404931932011-03-19T00:15:05.473-04:002011-03-19T00:15:05.473-04:00I think she lives near me...
Love the new look, S...I think she lives near me...<br /><br />Love the new look, Shay!TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70279918264637093102011-03-18T21:20:29.584-04:002011-03-18T21:20:29.584-04:00mmm... a madwoman with cats ~ sign me up :)
xxmmm... a madwoman with cats ~ sign me up :)<br /><br />xxLisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05321514984426181181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-32552699450096860232011-03-18T20:42:35.911-04:002011-03-18T20:42:35.911-04:00I don't trust smooth sky haters.I don't trust smooth sky haters.machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82584066535121315552011-03-18T19:32:24.525-04:002011-03-18T19:32:24.525-04:00She was asked one too many times about a Redbook ....She was asked one too many times about a Redbook . . .<br /><br />I really like the image of woodish hands.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89876298815623812772011-03-18T18:17:10.735-04:002011-03-18T18:17:10.735-04:00I didn't know that about crows and the sun.
I...I didn't know that about crows and the sun.<br /><br />I like the woodish hands thing. Reminds me of that woman in a novel describe as having 2 hands as big and as red as huge lobsters. "A Book Of Ruth", I think?<br /><br />xoxoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57174469340572151522011-03-18T13:17:26.829-04:002011-03-18T13:17:26.829-04:00Wowzers, Shay, this is SMOKIN'. I love the cro...Wowzers, Shay, this is SMOKIN'. I love the crows around the reddening sun, and her wooden fists at her side. Love this poem so much!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4755742475303415472011-03-18T12:13:17.762-04:002011-03-18T12:13:17.762-04:00You sure didn't need more than fifty-five word...You sure didn't need more than fifty-five words to make this one fierce.<br /><br />A downward spiral if ever there was one... and you built the staircase for it with these lines. <br /><br />Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68552949019411348352011-03-18T12:07:36.582-04:002011-03-18T12:07:36.582-04:00Mrs Stiltskin, I presume?Mrs Stiltskin, I presume?Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40834896705700991202011-03-18T11:56:57.120-04:002011-03-18T11:56:57.120-04:0055 words? Doesn't seem possible!55 words? Doesn't seem possible!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72792228048443941552011-03-18T11:07:04.149-04:002011-03-18T11:07:04.149-04:00super visual imagery,
I see her there and wow...
...super visual imagery,<br />I see her there and wow...<br /><br />very effective writing...<br />fabulous 55 to chew on and think about....<br /><br />Happy Weekend,Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38007447512483241532011-03-18T10:45:36.596-04:002011-03-18T10:45:36.596-04:00Portrait of a madwoman, getting there...That third...Portrait of a madwoman, getting there...That third line is instantly visual, and it carries the piece inexorably along to each next step of words, rung by rung on its downward progress into the black hole. Fine writing Shay--so intense it's hard to believe its just 55 words.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2765173463298455612011-03-18T09:57:23.977-04:002011-03-18T09:57:23.977-04:00Very cool, Shay. :)Very cool, Shay. :)Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46325201105398833062011-03-18T08:42:15.255-04:002011-03-18T08:42:15.255-04:00you will never take me with you...i silently screa...you will never take me with you...i silently scream into the night...<br /><br />my aluminum foil helmet protects me...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36607094020825009402011-03-18T07:45:09.938-04:002011-03-18T07:45:09.938-04:00Some go quietly, some go screaming!
Some leave a l...Some go quietly, some go screaming!<br />Some leave a lasting legacy of brilliance.....<br />Loved your 55 Shaysie..<br />I'm ALWAYS honored when you add to the fun.<br />Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...GG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.com