tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2393941885647702881..comments2024-03-28T05:18:54.680-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Double Toad Post!Fireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10533539269649272152012-06-17T09:44:06.558-04:002012-06-17T09:44:06.558-04:00I love that second piece. "Comforting and co...I love that second piece. "Comforting and companionable."Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49821102005301506272012-06-15T03:12:40.441-04:002012-06-15T03:12:40.441-04:00i love them both......
i'm not jealous, no......i love them both......<br /><br />i'm not jealous, no...<br /><br />not even a teensy-weensy bit...<br /><br />no...my heart's love songshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13629303520695044479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76031464175951364042012-06-12T20:59:29.058-04:002012-06-12T20:59:29.058-04:00The rest of us struggle to produce one mediocre wr...The rest of us struggle to produce one mediocre write, and you slap two down like the finest cuts of beef. I particularly like Haven. Reminded me of "the sparrows are flying". You have some serious talent....I feel lucky to be on the receiving end of it.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77671083337405195612012-06-12T11:58:30.635-04:002012-06-12T11:58:30.635-04:00I want to see a Mad Moon! Beautifully done~ Glad y...I want to see a Mad Moon! Beautifully done~ Glad you are feeling better!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69486511646399600412012-06-11T19:06:29.364-04:002012-06-11T19:06:29.364-04:00Shay, my dear, you capture the birds, you capture ...Shay, my dear, you capture the birds, you capture the fields and all the swaying action therein. It is beautiful and I don't know God is a woman, and but I know she's not a man, for sure. These two writings are wistful and beautiful - like looking at a lovely day, knowing it won't stay that way. firm embrace to you, MoskBuddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59330998678414312882012-06-11T11:27:37.259-04:002012-06-11T11:27:37.259-04:00If I would be told that I could be as creative wit...If I would be told that I could be as creative with words as you I would accept having two sore shoulders. Not intended to make light of your malady but I'm glad you recovered enought to give us these two lovely and inspiring pieces. Gracias!Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84385545047999360942012-06-11T10:55:14.043-04:002012-06-11T10:55:14.043-04:00SO glad you are better .. and in such fine fine fo...SO glad you are better .. and in such fine fine form .. xoDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39159298863146407732012-06-11T00:40:51.353-04:002012-06-11T00:40:51.353-04:00Gosh you knock me OUT!
Aloha from Waikiki,
Comf...Gosh you knock me OUT!<br /><br /><br /><br />Aloha from Waikiki,<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> > < } } ( ° >Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17801639447281167962012-06-10T23:43:46.576-04:002012-06-10T23:43:46.576-04:00Such charm and beauty in this piece...I looked at ...Such charm and beauty in this piece...I looked at the field of forget-me-nots and couldn't find the words, but you did so brilliantly.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62480276546041958772012-06-10T23:20:06.659-04:002012-06-10T23:20:06.659-04:00Shay, YOU charm the old shiner out of the sky. I w...Shay, YOU charm the old shiner out of the sky. I will forget you not, chica.Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72990643460818370862012-06-10T21:10:20.887-04:002012-06-10T21:10:20.887-04:00Oh, Shay, I'm so sorry you were hurting...I...Oh, Shay, I'm so sorry you were hurting...I'm glad that you were able to get back to writing..I imagine that lapse might have been even more painful than the injury...or maybe not. Any way, glad you're back in working order. <br /><br />"is that I am starling, chattering, saying;<br />and that you are haven, holding me, swaying."<br /><br />I really love this from the first one, I enjoy taking on POV of different creatures, plants even an inanimate object sometimes! ;)<br /><br />I love what you did with the image!! Especially the neat thing you did with the navy dress with white accents...I enjoyed the contrast placed in that moment. Also I really like where you went with God is a woman and even if there isn't one She's there anyway. <br /><br />Excellent, Shay!! Much enjoyed! Continue to heal... :)Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40469549205440074202012-06-10T20:55:53.348-04:002012-06-10T20:55:53.348-04:00"They have the orderly roll me to the fence l..."They have the orderly roll me to the fence line,<br />Then he heaves me over it--<br />Woman overboard--<br />Into the forget-me-nots."<br /><br />This instantly had me hooked. Well done!HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53251696327426799442012-06-10T15:23:34.239-04:002012-06-10T15:23:34.239-04:00A lovely combination... could actually be two part...A lovely combination... could actually be two parts to one poem. Of course they stand alone, too. I especially like the first two stanzas of the first one and the last two of the second one. Glad your shoulder is better.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61966880324732578052012-06-10T14:22:43.113-04:002012-06-10T14:22:43.113-04:00Two flawless gems. I adore Haven: "you charme...Two flawless gems. I adore Haven: "you charmed the old shiner right out of the sky"....... and the haven, "holding me, swaying." Sigh.<br /><br />I so enjoyed the romp through the forget-me-nots - the woman heaved overboard into the blooms, the "tilted trees", and especially the "bright mad moon". Glorious writing and yay, your shoulder is better!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70925936812068404752012-06-10T13:14:13.453-04:002012-06-10T13:14:13.453-04:00Both are beautiful and brilliant, my recovered Sha...Both are beautiful and brilliant, my recovered Shay dear.<br />I particularly like the final stanza of the first poem, and then the idea of being thrown overboard into a field of forget-me-nots is so perfect, I hope it happens to my old carcass when the world is done with me.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70278026420255634782012-06-10T12:09:30.428-04:002012-06-10T12:09:30.428-04:00If I am to be dumped anywhere .. please let it be ...If I am to be dumped anywhere .. please let it be in a field of forget-me-nots ~ leaving mere traces of my old-fashioned grace behind! So good to know you have mended that shoulder. My sister has torn her rotator cuff, surgery looms.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82455448207384685442012-06-10T11:58:39.745-04:002012-06-10T11:58:39.745-04:00LOVE "establish raucous bedlam in the trees&q...LOVE "establish raucous bedlam in the trees" and especially "I practice a similar lunacy." Oh, man. So much. <br /><br />And this: <br />"It will likely rain this afternoon,<br />And, after that, a bright mad moon." <br /><br />I just love your voice. These are wonderful. <br /><br /><br />De Jackson (WhimsyGizmo) <br />WhimsyGizmo@wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31928396117406653072012-06-10T11:23:10.447-04:002012-06-10T11:23:10.447-04:00Charmed right out of the sky! What am image. And...Charmed right out of the sky! What am image. And being dumped in a field of forget-me-nots... Just loved, loved this.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28966438819233752012012-06-10T10:46:30.020-04:002012-06-10T10:46:30.020-04:00i liked the second one - peaceful, in a sad sort o...i liked the second one - peaceful, in a sad sort of way.TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5669628540777466872012-06-10T10:36:13.302-04:002012-06-10T10:36:13.302-04:00Certainly pausing for a brief pain-laden interlude...Certainly pausing for a brief pain-laden interlude has done nothing to alter your own unique way with words--both of these poems are musical, oddly serene despite images of chaos and distorted identity, unified by love and yearning to be as simple and intoxicating as the wildness of birds or the beauty of a field of flowers. Fine writing on both fronts, but I admit the first one, being a bit darker, resolves into a very tasty sweetness at the end for me.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19578636086162408252012-06-10T09:45:27.316-04:002012-06-10T09:45:27.316-04:00like you use of "idee fixe" and the whol...like you use of "idee fixe" and the whole thing, delicate, searching, loving. both are very nice, good for you for catching up & hope you are feeling 100% now.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2138972710513492632012-06-10T09:08:09.678-04:002012-06-10T09:08:09.678-04:00I so wanted to write a poem that would do the fiel...I so wanted to write a poem that would do the field of forget-me-nots justice... but you have done it for me. Thank you. This is perfection. <br /><br />.... Also loved your starlings looking for safe haven.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com