tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2516714842257872342..comments2024-03-28T19:48:05.247-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Exercises In LogicFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69011170886212865582014-06-07T03:05:44.529-04:002014-06-07T03:05:44.529-04:00ok, i am at my daily (weekly... yearly) limit of i...ok, i am at my daily (weekly... yearly) limit of imbibing the ambrosia of your writing, Sis! best. poet. ever.<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54672347575814902182014-05-29T19:48:49.757-04:002014-05-29T19:48:49.757-04:00These digo women would make a great topic for a po...These digo women would make a great topic for a poem, don't you think? Might you consider writing one?<br /><br />http://withonelongbreath.blogspot.com/2014/05/digo.htmlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14593545876802907732014-05-28T19:18:59.385-04:002014-05-28T19:18:59.385-04:00Ah, yes. The Little Bird.
Love that!
xo jjAh, yes. The Little Bird.<br />Love that!<br />xo jjJoanna Jenkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10836376588710862173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46645591379144569052014-05-28T16:39:22.445-04:002014-05-28T16:39:22.445-04:00This poem made me smile when I got to the part abo...This poem made me smile when I got to the part about the Great Siberian Fireball being "a" or "b".<br /><br />BTW I got curious about the GSF of 1908 and looked it up. I imagine it was rather scary at that time!!!<br /><br /> Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53392466250987165282014-05-28T15:19:47.667-04:002014-05-28T15:19:47.667-04:00I like how you will the words to come down from th...I like how you will the words to come down from the skies.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71130940046041856782014-05-28T13:02:11.778-04:002014-05-28T13:02:11.778-04:00I love it, especially the little birdy!I love it, especially the little birdy!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23708942450892485562014-05-28T12:19:16.575-04:002014-05-28T12:19:16.575-04:00Such a logical argument cannot be denied.
I loved...Such a logical argument cannot be denied.<br /><br />I loved this, Shay.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14895511198632784782014-05-27T23:20:38.011-04:002014-05-27T23:20:38.011-04:00careless giant birdy!
ALOHA from Honolulu
Comf...careless giant birdy!<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">ComfortSpiral</a><br /> =^..^=Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57923041963640752912014-05-27T21:44:04.016-04:002014-05-27T21:44:04.016-04:00Tantalizing piece and I grew up constantly hearing...Tantalizing piece and I grew up constantly hearing "a little bird told me" . . . those birds sure do get around.<br />Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33510227680260450742014-05-27T20:17:07.978-04:002014-05-27T20:17:07.978-04:00I can't help it. Whenever Siberia and love sto...I can't help it. Whenever Siberia and love story intersect, I think of Julie Christie and Omar Sharif.<br /><br />I know. Schmaltzy...Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91565317950369217532014-05-27T18:27:56.123-04:002014-05-27T18:27:56.123-04:00From "Therefore" to "little village...From "Therefore" to "little villages" is extra engaging to me.<br /><br />So, the relationship is the artwork. The one you're talking to is wearing black, so is either in mourning or pretending to be. If your love is secret, then maybe you're having an affair, you two have killed one of your spouses, and are currently under investigation. But it sounds like you've just been cleared if the report was filed and the police were pleased.<br /><br />"A global temperature rise of 1.5 °C (2.7 °F) above current levels would be enough to start the thawing of permafrost in Siberia."<br /><br />The fireball represents the temperature rise as you two sweat it out while being watched, waiting to see if you're going to get away with the crime. It sounds like it was a close call, but you've done it.<br /><br />Or maybe it's nothing of the like. This is just my best guess. If I'm right, then maybe the crime is also a piece of artwork requiring great patience.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60085365415794451252014-05-27T18:12:20.215-04:002014-05-27T18:12:20.215-04:00This just slays me. Seriously.This just slays me. Seriously.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70516969855172395472014-05-27T17:17:37.230-04:002014-05-27T17:17:37.230-04:00A lively interplay of elements makes this drily am...A lively interplay of elements makes this drily amusing but also a bit scathing around the edges. I've long felt that all surveillance is 90% extended opportunistic voyeurism, and the birds in this poem seem unconcerned about having their nests invaded or crushed--perhaps they are simply too resilient to let such things bother them. "Art requires patience, but patience does not necessarily result in art...I suppose the same can be said of love.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com