tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2536215142484373160..comments2024-03-28T17:44:41.989-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Moonlit LullabyFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64377612101041123412011-04-22T06:14:18.921-04:002011-04-22T06:14:18.921-04:00"restless wind" and
"sorrowful moon..."restless wind" and<br />"sorrowful moon"<br /><br />such beautiful imagery, fluidity and melody in your words.<br /><br />another stunning poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35271393099861828382011-04-18T09:02:55.176-04:002011-04-18T09:02:55.176-04:00Absolutely lovely!Absolutely lovely!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46894175151466179402011-04-17T21:19:34.985-04:002011-04-17T21:19:34.985-04:00Wow, this is so old school elegant. The last stanz...Wow, this is so old school elegant. The last stanza is a fabulous surprise.patriciacaspershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17048071609997739569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57044295299184221612011-04-17T20:32:34.975-04:002011-04-17T20:32:34.975-04:00No kidding - were you reading my mind again Shay?
...No kidding - were you reading my mind again Shay?<br /><br />love ya from the Moonmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26039517649419167422011-04-17T13:25:23.362-04:002011-04-17T13:25:23.362-04:00Precious and lyricalPrecious and lyricalAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71161280695283496242011-04-17T12:39:03.744-04:002011-04-17T12:39:03.744-04:00It is a wonderful lullaby :-)It is a wonderful lullaby :-)machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69818171713909783512011-04-17T12:37:40.271-04:002011-04-17T12:37:40.271-04:00Oh I so love this one. A true lullaby, the moon st...Oh I so love this one. A true lullaby, the moon stanza is simply amazing.........and my fave line is "restless child of shifting sky". Beautiful and, as always, your words are put together like no one else can do!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25129316375950604492011-04-17T12:33:42.062-04:002011-04-17T12:33:42.062-04:00Just beautiful, Shay! I love the rhyme of this one...Just beautiful, Shay! I love the rhyme of this one, perfect lullaby, even down to the "sorrow" so often found in those songs. Your imagery is stunning--the wind, the moon, so much longing in both.Ami Mattisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391930163467566669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67131542157873714912011-04-17T10:24:44.531-04:002011-04-17T10:24:44.531-04:00bewitching lullaby.bewitching lullaby.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17998875024066383482011-04-17T10:07:08.813-04:002011-04-17T10:07:08.813-04:00Beautiful, Shay. The wind is wild and so is the mo...Beautiful, Shay. The wind is wild and so is the moon, but together they rock the world to sleep in this piece. I especially like the rhyme scheme, and the ending.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69816248449619878492011-04-17T09:55:06.669-04:002011-04-17T09:55:06.669-04:00The rhythm of this piece is lovely. Your choice of...The rhythm of this piece is lovely. Your choice of words always amazes me.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29013990924496272962011-04-17T06:53:46.374-04:002011-04-17T06:53:46.374-04:00i know how that wind feelsi know how that wind feelsBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17227924520284116192011-04-17T03:54:54.870-04:002011-04-17T03:54:54.870-04:00Wonderfully original lines. You have connected so ...Wonderfully original lines. You have connected so many entities in such short lines! Thanks.Rajeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04899689846101356598noreply@blogger.com