tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2676754735485239145..comments2024-03-28T08:35:27.826-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Woman In A Coffee BarFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64439166129343551072016-08-29T19:43:18.756-04:002016-08-29T19:43:18.756-04:00If I were to say this, I'd get slapped:
"...If I were to say this, I'd get slapped:<br /><br />"You'd like me, if only you'd release your carnality into my custody."<br /><br />Only you can pull that off - la la moskBuddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90766933366988975612016-08-29T14:43:58.979-04:002016-08-29T14:43:58.979-04:00the smell of pussy on the pillow, one's finger...the smell of pussy on the pillow, one's fingers (nails trimmed short) and...... especially love this line. ;))Jasminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09437907985252465564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47041248621723815472016-08-29T12:18:05.845-04:002016-08-29T12:18:05.845-04:00This packs that Shay punch, for sure. LOVE.This packs that Shay punch, for sure. LOVE.De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15271611304102598562016-08-29T11:57:36.654-04:002016-08-29T11:57:36.654-04:00and, especially, the aftermath predicted for my be...and, especially, the aftermath predicted for my bedding<br />by the tarot card I keep in my bag to notify<br />handsome firefighters and lady doctors of my special conditions.<br /><br />Those are my favorite lines. Hell, yeah.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45146799231638400792016-08-29T07:05:12.525-04:002016-08-29T07:05:12.525-04:00Love what you did with those words... so much to l...Love what you did with those words... so much to like, but somehow the prayerbook you jam into the door is especially good... to me it's air we need not crypts.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73257061787474474272016-08-29T05:57:26.770-04:002016-08-29T05:57:26.770-04:00love that your bounds are 'none'
wonderfu...love that your bounds are 'none'<br /><br />wonderfulMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7076637844430266752016-08-28T23:32:16.112-04:002016-08-28T23:32:16.112-04:00As Joy notes, too many good lines to quote but I e...As Joy notes, too many good lines to quote but I especially loved "things I want to declare at the border of your beauty."Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15041308901288048962016-08-28T20:42:04.562-04:002016-08-28T20:42:04.562-04:00Holy moly.
I thought the "carnality and cust...Holy moly.<br /><br />I thought the "carnality and custody" line was incredible, and then I read the rest, and had to call 911.<br /><br />That poem is on fire! (I could sing it to you, but I wouldn't sound at all like Alicia Keys, so I will refrain.)Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35104152585672147432016-08-28T18:45:55.628-04:002016-08-28T18:45:55.628-04:00as contained as a coconut,
as cool,
as necessary a...as contained as a coconut,<br />as cool,<br />as necessary and as removed<br /><br />so many good lines, but that one clicked for me--adroit, intelligent and almost slick at times, this piece really works its way under your skin with its all too genuine, jittery images and locusts under the lid--great transformations from the word list, and an unsettling yet somehow tender residue left behind in the reader's mind.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8623186871772599932016-08-28T18:45:12.509-04:002016-08-28T18:45:12.509-04:00The definitive Shay quote!!!!
"I don't l...The definitive Shay quote!!!!<br /><br />"I don't look like much, but when I open my mouth, <br />they send the bomb squad and a priest." <br /><br />btw, I find your looks quite enough for any weather!<br />Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.com