tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2689249438791361136..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): The Crap PoetFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82154607106309040502012-10-04T04:37:48.696-04:002012-10-04T04:37:48.696-04:00why don't i win any awards then? i can dish ou...why don't i win any awards then? i can dish out crap with the worst of 'em!<br /><br />♥ Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89329132697544127652012-10-03T21:04:24.900-04:002012-10-03T21:04:24.900-04:00Woah! Great poetic irony!Woah! Great poetic irony!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33137456978056234852012-10-03T20:23:27.425-04:002012-10-03T20:23:27.425-04:00I guess we've all read her, pulitzer prize and...I guess we've all read her, pulitzer prize and all. <br /><br />You captured truth with such good humor: talent is not what always gets rewarded. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23237879904905659372012-10-03T15:48:14.786-04:002012-10-03T15:48:14.786-04:00this is fresh n zippy with bona fide substance. yo...this is fresh n zippy with bona fide substance. you put a new slant on my day ...jane heweyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10089757266999986550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53211283396311282142012-10-03T12:37:48.859-04:002012-10-03T12:37:48.859-04:00damn. maybe I shouldn't have given up so easi...damn. maybe I shouldn't have given up so easily.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61416832206903153102012-10-03T12:23:24.071-04:002012-10-03T12:23:24.071-04:00I hope you've got the grills out of the oven a...I hope you've got the grills out of the oven as an ear can get caught in one of those things and nothing like a caught ear for impinging upon head's freewheeling loll. <br /><br />Very funny. I think some Sweetest Blogger on the Planet btw name 7 others is in order. k. <br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19535351305676910042012-10-03T12:01:48.961-04:002012-10-03T12:01:48.961-04:00I love Stanza 4, followed by its sidecar in the ne...I love Stanza 4, followed by its sidecar in the next stand-alone line.<br /><br />Also, very clever detailing her "rules" in Stanza 6 (line breaks after prepositions, no articles) and then providing an example of her work in Stanza 7.<br /><br />Funny stuff, girl.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15121659757744790032012-10-03T11:38:24.688-04:002012-10-03T11:38:24.688-04:00Hey, it took me more than 2 1/2 seconds to read th...Hey, it took me more than 2 1/2 seconds to read this! Shay, you've got the sharpest tongue since Dorothy Parker! Love you, girl!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45869073892452804212012-10-03T11:02:31.529-04:002012-10-03T11:02:31.529-04:00But I thought you liked my poetry!But I thought you liked my poetry!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84243754178904700392012-10-03T10:17:22.972-04:002012-10-03T10:17:22.972-04:00Girl you are killing me--good thing I didn't r...Girl you are killing me--good thing I didn't read this last night when my back was hurting or I would have ruptured a disk. Thank you for avenging my bleeding eyeballs with your spot on analysis of all that causes brain damage in the poetical blogosphere--children, please--do not try these tricks at home!hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46915692303491453902012-10-03T03:39:39.979-04:002012-10-03T03:39:39.979-04:00...like the work of art that sold for millions, pa......like the work of art that sold for millions, painted by a monkey and 3 tubs of paint.Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75243083760544122102012-10-03T03:15:13.808-04:002012-10-03T03:15:13.808-04:00I see your satirical wit has been sharpened to a k...I see your satirical wit has been sharpened to a keen edge again... Such a piece must cause every would-be poet to choke on an in-drawn breath, and think...Ouch, I hate too many articles in poetry too (Well, that was me). The world is a fickle place for poets: some pass unnoticed, some get more attention than they deserve. These days it's all about marketing yourself on social networks, and if you don't join them, they'll beat you.<br /><br />PS: I saw what you did here:<br />Perhaps adherence to a form no one gives a framed, numbered, limited edition shit about...<br /><br />:P<br /><br />Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41123740166539092252012-10-03T01:05:35.935-04:002012-10-03T01:05:35.935-04:00If I learn to smoke maybe I can write crap poetry ...If I learn to smoke maybe I can write crap poetry too? Do the cigarettes have to be French or could I just smoke American and French inhale?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47580794898575971692012-10-02T22:20:45.585-04:002012-10-02T22:20:45.585-04:00Hmmmm, I wonder who this could be!! LOL.Hmmmm, I wonder who this could be!! LOL.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82610680803304444102012-10-02T22:18:21.997-04:002012-10-02T22:18:21.997-04:00i think i know her...
smiles...your wit is ever ...i think i know her...<br /><br /><br />smiles...your wit is ever as sharp shay...deflating overinflated egos everywhere...<br /><br />brilliantBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59604175977044462932012-10-02T22:09:32.273-04:002012-10-02T22:09:32.273-04:00Hey, catering to the lowest common denominator sur...Hey, catering to the lowest common denominator sure can pay off. Keep 'em comin' ;-)HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51051303002725404902012-10-02T21:34:04.631-04:002012-10-02T21:34:04.631-04:00Ha!
You are the brave one who voices what others o...Ha!<br />You are the brave one who voices what others only mutter in the back of their minds. <br />Brava.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79745751130010426402012-10-02T21:27:33.309-04:002012-10-02T21:27:33.309-04:00So do the spirits point to demise? You weave a sin...So do the spirits point to demise? You weave a sinfully delicious piece with a venomous tongue...is there a challenge whispered here, or a warning for the piece penned as the free fall of one so lofty eventually kicks-in. It almost always does. Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6062133965809507812012-10-02T20:53:36.636-04:002012-10-02T20:53:36.636-04:00And yes, a week to write
Oh holy hell, shay, if i ...And yes, a week to write<br />Oh holy hell, shay, if i can ever stop laughing, i'll comment. (brb)<br />Ok~back<br />Did she mention bluebirds and springtime flowers? Ocean waves and butterflies?<br />Shit, trouble is, i've been guilty of the mile high love fiasco and the ten lane highway to hell.~but w/out the applause and ribbons.<br />But i'm reformed, i swear<br />Goin back to read some cohen and get my tude back.<br />Damn this was good. A warning i intend to heed. Thanks, you<br />~rickFar Beyond The Ridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05854741339081490896noreply@blogger.com