tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post2714413507104129154..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Bad-AssFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6944094701103935102017-12-11T12:31:04.463-05:002017-12-11T12:31:04.463-05:00This is wonderful, Shay. So many lines I LOVE, but...This is wonderful, Shay. So many lines I LOVE, but most especially, I appreciate the voice.. it chimes the way all voices should, in recognition of one's inalienable right to be heard.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53351213852464621822017-12-11T08:03:48.363-05:002017-12-11T08:03:48.363-05:00This is such a simple declarative masterwork that ...This is such a simple declarative masterwork that the amazing, skillful language, the mirrored word plays, are like an afterimage in the brain--I love the ending, because it is so true, and so you. It's good that Athena's owl, born from her father's forehead, has found her wings at last.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69485224243090079902017-12-10T22:41:05.807-05:002017-12-10T22:41:05.807-05:00Brings memories, unpleasant ones. Bam, bam, from m...Brings memories, unpleasant ones. Bam, bam, from my dad, boxing ears was his thing. Bullied in school, harassed by the 'ladies' at work, more. What was wrong with me? The norm?<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26367190266370474942017-12-10T15:44:23.148-05:002017-12-10T15:44:23.148-05:00Just a bit nonfictional?
Wonderful poem, as alway...Just a bit nonfictional?<br /><br />Wonderful poem, as always.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29408728890846223592017-12-10T15:42:27.580-05:002017-12-10T15:42:27.580-05:00I feel very connected to this piece, starting with...I feel very connected to this piece, starting with the picture.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33546499122692557982017-12-10T15:42:08.711-05:002017-12-10T15:42:08.711-05:00OH! MY! GOD! Yours is the poem I was waiting for, ...OH! MY! GOD! Yours is the poem I was waiting for, hoping for. Thank you. I so relate - the kick me sign. Oh, yes. I love "Momma's dead, both inside and outside my head." LOVE the talons and feathers. That is woman-strength for sure. "Can't stand lies, so I'm still lonesome". That is as true as it gets. My new favourite of yours, Shay. Thanks for writing to the prompt. You are one of the strongest women I know. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.com