tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post282148428835700744..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): The Perspectives Of An IdiotFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9958998618533105322013-01-21T14:42:36.679-05:002013-01-21T14:42:36.679-05:00I was just fixing to write to one of Jasmine's...I was just fixing to write to one of Jasmine's lists and found you in my inbox with this one!! Wow. The tone in this is intimidating and the word usage throughout is rich...I don't even know what the words were but you've spun an amazing piece with them!! Funny, I just, literally just titled the piece I wrote for you, "Perspective." <br /><br />Excellent poem, Shay!! xoHannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66662122247190049402013-01-21T08:30:00.473-05:002013-01-21T08:30:00.473-05:00Oh this is fantastic! The form you have chosen rea...Oh this is fantastic! The form you have chosen really rocks, and I like how you switched it up in the middle stanza. You have the ability to take the preconceived and upturn it in our palms.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23052956698051050272013-01-21T05:52:02.933-05:002013-01-21T05:52:02.933-05:00Great one!It's now one of my favorites...:)Great one!It's now one of my favorites...:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11213895832127088168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66471660466495176082013-01-21T04:31:37.363-05:002013-01-21T04:31:37.363-05:00a certain beauty sure, but rather than locks, i...a certain beauty sure, but rather than locks, i'd rather keep them under lock and key, hee hee heeShadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53648388266356706732013-01-21T00:58:51.752-05:002013-01-21T00:58:51.752-05:00gotta stay out of their clutches, always known tha...gotta stay out of their clutches, always known that....<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Happy Aloha to YOU<br />from Honolulu, <br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> ~ > < } } ( ° ><br /> > < } } ( ° >Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59073509592841831582013-01-20T22:37:45.376-05:002013-01-20T22:37:45.376-05:00good one
good one<br />ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91030787335916175552013-01-20T22:30:32.377-05:002013-01-20T22:30:32.377-05:00Beautiful! My mind was reading this like a Shakes...Beautiful! My mind was reading this like a Shakespeare play :-)HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46642075148860836262013-01-20T21:25:35.489-05:002013-01-20T21:25:35.489-05:00Did you see I made another list?Did you see I made another list?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19278931067484878302013-01-20T21:25:18.300-05:002013-01-20T21:25:18.300-05:00Ha! That is awesome. Love these lines:
"fed ...Ha! That is awesome. Love these lines:<br /><br />"fed on flung incivilities, poxy blackbirds in the air"<br /><br />"Confess to us<br />what you are capable of; healing, harlotry and heresy"<br /><br />"The choreography of the somber<br />may dark comedy conceal"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28423448205914878582013-01-20T19:45:52.809-05:002013-01-20T19:45:52.809-05:00YOU do tongue and cheek? What a surprise. ;) The m...YOU do tongue and cheek? What a surprise. ;) The music is a perfect musical choice.<br /><br />I loved the "stocks and locks" pair.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9691569372928724872013-01-20T19:11:32.099-05:002013-01-20T19:11:32.099-05:00This does everything but growl!This does everything but growl!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11876461865708920632013-01-20T17:47:35.382-05:002013-01-20T17:47:35.382-05:00GREAT song choice, SP!
this poem is bewitchingly ...GREAT song choice, SP!<br /><br />this poem is bewitchingly brilliant! <br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51716215815046011812013-01-20T17:13:28.257-05:002013-01-20T17:13:28.257-05:00It's chilling!It's chilling!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15163988538517404852013-01-20T16:48:54.179-05:002013-01-20T16:48:54.179-05:00'Talk to me,' baby. Not that anyone ever s...'Talk to me,' baby. Not that anyone ever said you were the kind to bite her tongue. I love the whole thing, of course, but the first stanza is the most bald-making (in keeping with the play on locks and shorn hair)while the choreography lines are measured and scathing. The rhyme here is the chocolate coating over the poison pill--my favorite is ash/mask. in fact that whole phrase--'under pretense,purpose and mask, purified by flame...' is pretty flooring.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87298613705471196962013-01-20T15:42:24.431-05:002013-01-20T15:42:24.431-05:00Creepy photo! Seems like the perspectives of idiot...Creepy photo! Seems like the perspectives of idiots run rampant these days! Women who can't be tamed have always been feared.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.com