tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post3081095409037356448..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): DesireFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger47125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21523338591992033952011-04-11T03:02:14.341-04:002011-04-11T03:02:14.341-04:00"I want to leave her soaked inside like churc..."I want to leave her soaked inside like church gloves left on the roof of the car in the storm." That is such a spectacular description. The whole poem is full of them. This is a beautiful love poem, Fireblossom.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63352579300525768612011-04-08T22:57:46.295-04:002011-04-08T22:57:46.295-04:00Wow the whole feeling of rain and the last line......Wow the whole feeling of rain and the last line...takes me back so quickly to those midwest Sundays...of spring and summer...a rainy Sunday...perfection....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5168654239047062122011-04-07T00:40:08.638-04:002011-04-07T00:40:08.638-04:00so beautiful.... my favourite lines-
When I was y...so beautiful.... my favourite lines-<br /><br />When I was young, I was blank blue sky;<br />Now I blow in where I will, brooking no argument, scattering the crows.<br /><br />Reading a poem after a long time... glad it was this.<br /><br />Cheers<br />PadmavaniPadmavanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16599409031618354347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41129153867981003392011-04-07T00:35:49.762-04:002011-04-07T00:35:49.762-04:00you took my breath away.....you took my breath away.....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-649412179750912822011-04-06T15:07:59.648-04:002011-04-06T15:07:59.648-04:00Wow, let me fan myself for a minute here :) I'...Wow, let me fan myself for a minute here :) I'm not a big poetry reader (by that I mean established poets), but this really reminds me of Walt Whitman. Except he'd be saying "he" not "she."The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66507853429180172242011-04-06T09:08:42.133-04:002011-04-06T09:08:42.133-04:00Your writing is incredible. Very sensual and beaut...Your writing is incredible. Very sensual and beautiful. I always look forward to reading your Magpies.Sharihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13842711799199331211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50516781597424649142011-04-05T19:22:22.064-04:002011-04-05T19:22:22.064-04:00This is both fabulous, and breathtaking Shay....yo...This is both fabulous, and breathtaking Shay....your metaphor of rain and love and longing is amazing....love every line! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68560142511147838682011-04-05T17:29:10.534-04:002011-04-05T17:29:10.534-04:00Romantic, tastefully erotic. Love this!Romantic, tastefully erotic. Love this!Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72846591761582294282011-04-05T16:16:33.895-04:002011-04-05T16:16:33.895-04:00great metaphors
such lustgreat metaphors<br /><br />such lustAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33266738888453129852011-04-05T15:34:15.840-04:002011-04-05T15:34:15.840-04:00I want to love her like a rainy Sunday.
I'm su...I want to love her like a rainy Sunday.<br />I'm sure Caddoc would agree with this sentiment!Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71259966413741017032011-04-05T15:23:44.507-04:002011-04-05T15:23:44.507-04:00Potent and personal. Very nice.
Poetry24…where ne...Potent and personal. Very nice.<br /><br /><a href="http://poetry-24.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Poetry24…where news is the Muse</a>Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494219959077922220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7782267430447053152011-04-05T15:21:56.311-04:002011-04-05T15:21:56.311-04:00Your words speak for many ...Your words speak for many ...Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-676053919751823452011-04-05T13:52:43.302-04:002011-04-05T13:52:43.302-04:00Gorgeous. You're giving me spring fever. I esp...Gorgeous. You're giving me spring fever. I especially love "I am older than late afternoon, and as plain as garden mud".Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86041699805309431002011-04-05T12:13:55.740-04:002011-04-05T12:13:55.740-04:00With words as rich as those you have reached a pla...With words as rich as those you have reached a place of loveliness in her eyes. Wow is all I can say to this and wish upon a star that someone would feel that intensity for me.Kristen Haskellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18340955957274385482011-04-05T08:42:08.998-04:002011-04-05T08:42:08.998-04:00Can smell it...!
misty dewCan smell it...!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/04/misty-dew.html" rel="nofollow">misty dew</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65232831296479137852011-04-05T04:12:26.397-04:002011-04-05T04:12:26.397-04:00Very sensual, very beautiful, very good!
Anna :o]...Very sensual, very beautiful, very good!<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89621658519854857612011-04-05T01:38:11.423-04:002011-04-05T01:38:11.423-04:00Beautiful... sensual, powerful piece of writing.Beautiful... sensual, powerful piece of writing.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61157930620468499872011-04-04T22:36:00.293-04:002011-04-04T22:36:00.293-04:00Beautemous!Beautemous!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16326344891300283652011-04-04T19:52:07.146-04:002011-04-04T19:52:07.146-04:00going out is afterall over rated!!
Love ya Shay o...going out is afterall over rated!!<br /><br />Love ya Shay on any ole rainy daymoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58919467123733921892011-04-04T18:02:05.641-04:002011-04-04T18:02:05.641-04:00love those soaked church gloves! This is breezy, s...love those soaked church gloves! This is breezy, sensual and delicious!Words A Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04423263654771820182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26837383415069930082011-04-04T17:22:14.167-04:002011-04-04T17:22:14.167-04:00"I am older than late afternoon,
And as plain..."I am older than late afternoon,<br />And as plain as garden mud."<br />...<br />But the wisdom acquired by fully living those pre-noon and early afternoon hours add the wonder and glory to the wild women who embraces the onset of dusk. <br />...<br />Just sayin'Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16959024990944684322011-04-04T16:15:27.006-04:002011-04-04T16:15:27.006-04:00Just beautiful and inspiring write.
Enjoyed it :) ...Just beautiful and inspiring write.<br />Enjoyed it :) <br /><a href="http://marinelareka.com/" rel="nofollow">Short Poems</a>M. Rekahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12178807956502786062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7893186908864407692011-04-04T14:53:13.358-04:002011-04-04T14:53:13.358-04:00You? Plain as mud? If you are soil, Shay, then you...You? Plain as mud? If you are soil, Shay, then you are the beautiful rich dark soil that feeds and nutures.<br /><br />This was as Mama Zen said - sultry, sensual and perfect.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22133547903812468982011-04-04T14:02:00.555-04:002011-04-04T14:02:00.555-04:00My, my, my! Could this be more sultry, more sensu...My, my, my! Could this be more sultry, more sensual, more perfect?Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3911044027836268462011-04-04T13:37:33.827-04:002011-04-04T13:37:33.827-04:00Your poem created desire in the first line and fil...Your poem created desire in the first line and filled in the colors with each new brushstroke. Wonderful free expression!Ann Grenierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13501522748426995035noreply@blogger.com