tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post3084630104994426179..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Song Of A Mad GirlFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44815562285917107992012-09-22T11:50:08.278-04:002012-09-22T11:50:08.278-04:00I can see this girl, hear her sing-song chant. I b...I can see this girl, hear her sing-song chant. I believe.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76079825238435003352012-09-22T10:18:48.941-04:002012-09-22T10:18:48.941-04:00A-fucking-mazing, Shay. Makes me want to head for...A-fucking-mazing, Shay. Makes me want to head for the swamp across the street in the woods and hypnotize the water snakes. ;-) xoMarionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81760200570684831672012-09-22T07:41:01.376-04:002012-09-22T07:41:01.376-04:00Oooo! Love them tarantula babies in the hair - wou...Oooo! Love them tarantula babies in the hair - would't want them to drown!<br /><br />The call and response is very effective - I can imagine the response being sing-song demented.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67674860326084743112012-09-22T04:30:04.880-04:002012-09-22T04:30:04.880-04:00{{{shivers}}}
♥{{{shivers}}}<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88964571194845766132012-09-21T21:52:24.667-04:002012-09-21T21:52:24.667-04:00This is shivery good. The imagery is incredibly v...This is shivery good. The imagery is incredibly visceral.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87928412839359678082012-09-21T20:29:17.074-04:002012-09-21T20:29:17.074-04:00Lulled by the rhythm, but snapped up at the end an...Lulled by the rhythm, but snapped up at the end and left dangling...at the end of a rope.<br /><br />Wow, Shay.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20185319624157521562012-09-21T19:53:33.717-04:002012-09-21T19:53:33.717-04:00Well, at least we find out at the end why she'...Well, at least we find out at the end why she's in the swamp.<br />Doesn't sound mad to me<br />RickFar Beyond The Ridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05854741339081490896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38412021838411306182012-09-21T19:22:51.752-04:002012-09-21T19:22:51.752-04:00I read this twice--once out loud--and it really se...I read this twice--once out loud--and it really seems steeped in a madness that is as deceptively smooth as the beautiful blue of the water in that picture--one can feel that there just have to be bodies under there--the calm of the question-answer sequence which seems so structured and orderly(not to mention the cadence and rhyme) only serves to make the gooseflesh crawl the more. hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27359270708704570062012-09-21T18:55:07.593-04:002012-09-21T18:55:07.593-04:00cuh-ree-pee!
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'arms of the devil going by&...cuh-ree-pee!<br /><br />:)<br /><br />'arms of the devil going by' was my fave.TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.com