tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post3113830743026729146..comments2024-03-28T19:48:05.247-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Keeping TigersFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46365318288824451182012-07-05T22:17:35.749-04:002012-07-05T22:17:35.749-04:00So glad I didn't miss this one. It's epic....So glad I didn't miss this one. It's epic. It was already hot in the room when I started reading this, and now I'm even sweatier! So many lines I love, I can't even begin to write them all. Sometimes you make me question my sexual preference, girl!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24895919591152259872012-07-04T17:13:59.355-04:002012-07-04T17:13:59.355-04:00LOL, Sara. This is me:
"there are those who ...LOL, Sara. This is me:<br /><br />"there are those who dig into it with their fingers and tongue, eating it messy, but loving it"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56728885465595535922012-07-03T23:19:39.712-04:002012-07-03T23:19:39.712-04:00whew! i was afraid you were gonna feed her to your...whew! i was afraid you were gonna feed her to your tigers!<br /><br />i won't be trying to write for awhile ~ just going to curl up in a ball and sob. <br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13629303520695044479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25715221738869186512012-07-03T20:13:33.987-04:002012-07-03T20:13:33.987-04:00My goodness, you may have outdone yourself here. T...My goodness, you may have outdone yourself here. This had an inherent drama and vivid imagery that came to a quietly satisfying conclusion. Loved it, love you, el MoskBuddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46788416696961795922012-07-03T19:13:46.735-04:002012-07-03T19:13:46.735-04:00Wow! I love the tigers, the story of the bird, and...Wow! I love the tigers, the story of the bird, and the poor, unsuspecting beauty across the street." Beauty should never lower its guard around Appetite" -- says it all!<br /><br />I'be read some of your work, and I think it is pretty amazing!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83130940816410711482012-07-03T13:05:53.925-04:002012-07-03T13:05:53.925-04:00I see myself in this one. What a metaphoric feast...I see myself in this one. What a metaphoric feast. You might find that a saucer of wine will calm the kitties. Some times it makes them more ravenous though, shredding drapes and gnawing on leather boots. I found.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82173589934773486432012-07-03T11:05:08.305-04:002012-07-03T11:05:08.305-04:00I love to read the comments once you put up a poem...I love to read the comments once you put up a poem. Some people sip it like a fine wine and describe how it tastes on the tongue, others eat it as if they were sampling a new and unknown delicacy and then, there are those who dig into it with their fingers and tongue, eating it messy, but loving it.<br /><br />This makes me think of Eve Merriam and her poem, How to Eat a Poem. <br /><br />I hope your summer is going well, Shay:~)Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34062816624411775392012-07-03T06:17:55.879-04:002012-07-03T06:17:55.879-04:00I will have to re-read that all over...great writi...I will have to re-read that all over...great writing!Blogorattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90366324559566058622012-07-03T05:55:12.412-04:002012-07-03T05:55:12.412-04:00Wow!Wow!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38993357978026971782012-07-03T03:06:43.447-04:002012-07-03T03:06:43.447-04:00Kewl kewl write not sure I want a tiger nowKewl kewl write not sure I want a tiger nowAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17957913294364310380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64045497239253798612012-07-03T00:56:26.859-04:002012-07-03T00:56:26.859-04:00Just amazing and very tense poem. I guess tigers ...Just amazing and very tense poem. I guess tigers always are a bit on edge :)<br /><br />I just loved, LOVED....]<br /><br /> and turn her over<br />like a page of religious textMargarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39079649818840863972012-07-03T00:47:36.592-04:002012-07-03T00:47:36.592-04:00Really powerful and intense!
Madeleine Begun KaneReally powerful and intense!<br /><a href="http://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/" rel="nofollow">Madeleine Begun Kane</a>Madeleine Begun Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12290268300271622956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68769828424925555942012-07-02T23:18:39.754-04:002012-07-02T23:18:39.754-04:00Your tigers! how expressive and right!
heart like...Your tigers! how expressive and right!<br /><br />heart like an Aztec. . . <br /><br />You blow me away, Shay<br /><br /><br /><br /> Aloha from Waikiki<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> > < } } ( ° >Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61027412741665158962012-07-02T20:46:18.520-04:002012-07-02T20:46:18.520-04:00I would be remiss as myself if I did not mention h...I would be remiss as myself if I did not mention how hot that picture is...I could have stopped there and said bravo Miss....I like your line of thinking. But then I would have missed one of the coolest things I have ever read. Those analogies and the expression of the uncontrollability of gut lust never sounded quite as amazing. We have to remember no matter how warm and cuddly it is...its still a wild animal, take care. This may be my have of yours so far...and thats saying a lot.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79458995820385861512012-07-02T18:35:19.975-04:002012-07-02T18:35:19.975-04:00Oh, my, this is quite a tale. I'm not sure who...Oh, my, this is quite a tale. I'm not sure who will come to a worse end, the unsuspecting girl or you and your tigers.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91377664728625344932012-07-02T13:12:08.088-04:002012-07-02T13:12:08.088-04:00Here is where I knew exactly what you were talking...Here is where I knew exactly what you were talking about: "I have a service"<br /><br />In light of THAT, this is hilarious:<br />"I can feel their rage vibrating"<br /><br />"My tigers dream of high grasses,<br />dizzy with unending heat" ... Still chuckling at your metaphors. :)<br /><br />"Differentiation only arrives with occupancy" ... This is a really great line. It kind of makes me think of people as houses. If no one's "home" upstairs, a person tends to blend in with all the rest. But when she thinks and truly occupies her body, then she can be different and unique.<br /><br />"and over one" ... Perfect. This might also mean she's recently over someone (divorced perhaps) and is available.<br /><br />"I long to deliver myself into her" ... Ha! Just like the service you have "delivered" to your own house. :)<br /><br />"She sometimes comes out, Queen of the Green Lawn" ... Oh wow. She can't make up her mind.<br /><br />"When the bird disappeared, the girl reached her china-fine hand into the empty cage,<br />and slammed the metal door on herself<br />until she was bleeding so badly that paramedics had to be called" ... What else can you do when you lose a bird-girl like that, along with all the music you've ever heard, the music you didn't know existed until you met her?<br /><br />"it was my tigers who murdered her bird" ... You and your tiger(s) are dangerous. :)<br /><br />"Beauty should never lower its guard around Appetite" ... Thank goodness you have a service to help feed that appetite a bit.<br /><br />"I kiss the key" ... Love this.<br /><br />"My neighbor is inside her house, mixing calm with catkins,<br />like batter with a finger." ... My favorite. She doesn't even know how her calm drives you mad.<br /><br />"I stand there like a little innocent bird" ... Love that you went back to the bird, only pretending, knowing full well you were all tiger.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61464167826052567152012-07-02T12:47:05.138-04:002012-07-02T12:47:05.138-04:00loved it from the opening line to the last, and no...loved it from the opening line to the last, and none in between disappointed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42953889444685913492012-07-02T12:47:02.689-04:002012-07-02T12:47:02.689-04:00loved it from the opening line to the last, and no...loved it from the opening line to the last, and none in between disappointed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49394247766273016722012-07-02T12:45:56.845-04:002012-07-02T12:45:56.845-04:00Beauty should never lower its guard around Appetit...Beauty should never lower its guard around Appetite.<br /><br />I kiss her hip, and turn her over<br />like a page of religious text, and I the ecstatic ecclesiastic.<br /><br />These lines and expressions are especially awesome in a poem which is uncannily brilliant.this is the best of your recent shares.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63761923392066933302012-07-02T12:05:59.546-04:002012-07-02T12:05:59.546-04:00Beautiful and sensual, Shay.
"china-fine han...Beautiful and sensual, Shay.<br /><br />"china-fine hand" - what pictures you paint!<br /><br />So far, today, I'm not having issues with Google. I'm hoping its benevolent mood continues :)TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41978138829799618352012-07-02T11:08:33.089-04:002012-07-02T11:08:33.089-04:00"Lack of music." Damn."Lack of music." Damn.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75917017444914487652012-07-02T10:02:10.536-04:002012-07-02T10:02:10.536-04:00and .. does she take it or do the tigers devour he...and .. does she take it or do the tigers devour her?Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7619244543371544642012-07-02T09:57:18.006-04:002012-07-02T09:57:18.006-04:00.. tigers are not meant to be kept at bay... tigers are not meant to be kept at bay.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82673568130309959952012-07-02T03:24:13.425-04:002012-07-02T03:24:13.425-04:00This was a week's worth of reading in one go, ...This was a week's worth of reading in one go, like the most delicious three course meal of exotic flavours.<br /><br />Beauty should never lower its guard around Appetite...<br /><br />These lines should be tattooed across every little girls' heart at birth!Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86260102706827749962012-07-02T02:14:59.974-04:002012-07-02T02:14:59.974-04:00Sigh. I feel replete after reading this. I loved b...Sigh. I feel replete after reading this. I loved best the two lines Sioux quotes, which I am too tired to type. Staggering off to bed. This was the best bedtime story ever!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com