tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post3293371511344160171..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): SeedsFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88529348107687514492014-01-14T16:08:43.618-05:002014-01-14T16:08:43.618-05:00"I will strew lilies to guide you, as sweetly..."I will strew lilies to guide you, as sweetly as an easy death."<br /><br /><br />That is just stunning.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7117658937174033082014-01-14T14:15:29.410-05:002014-01-14T14:15:29.410-05:00… a love letter is alluring - this one tells me to...… a love letter is alluring - this one tells me to RUN the other way - lies and all. <br /><br />The video was fun - I can't understand all the words - but how many good ol' rock n roll songs have I been singing incorrectly all these years :P<br /><br />Thanks for playing - glad you peered into the orbs and saw something uniquely Shay.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4698640620697729812014-01-13T05:30:22.680-05:002014-01-13T05:30:22.680-05:00Oh my!Oh my!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81450186329942048452014-01-13T01:21:19.077-05:002014-01-13T01:21:19.077-05:00Ouch..."scorched"...the way this poem ma...Ouch..."scorched"...the way this poem makes me feel...touched by something hotter than fire.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31807930129151168852014-01-13T01:20:37.591-05:002014-01-13T01:20:37.591-05:00this is my new favorite!
"those hard smooth ...this is my new favorite!<br /><br />"those hard smooth stairs pressed from prayers that could not be granted"<br /><br />how do you come up with such fan-fucking-tastic phrases?<br /><br />(go back to work! if you're starting your vacation with this level of poetry, i won't survive the next month as you continue to outdo yourself!)<br /><br />loved the video!<br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13881502116414916222014-01-12T21:35:46.128-05:002014-01-12T21:35:46.128-05:00As (nearly) always, that was starkly beautiful. T...As (nearly) always, that was starkly beautiful. True north, here I come!<br /><br />And that video you posted was interesting. I watched it all the way through simply because the soundtrack was so unexpected but it fit so well.HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25408020950226865962014-01-12T17:51:56.592-05:002014-01-12T17:51:56.592-05:00two birds. an owl. hmmm.
no one writes anti-love ...two birds. an owl. hmmm.<br /><br />no one writes anti-love better than Fireblossom. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49482417914963768932014-01-12T14:18:58.171-05:002014-01-12T14:18:58.171-05:00Wow. Blew me away. The twin birds with half a song...Wow. Blew me away. The twin birds with half a song. And the feet that are magnets and you true north. Fantastic writing!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20293500937471797042014-01-12T11:00:29.042-05:002014-01-12T11:00:29.042-05:00Phew! What a rush!
Those last lines deliver a pal...Phew! What a rush!<br /><br />Those last lines deliver a palpable punch to the gut... That'll teach her.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54954357308327595382014-01-12T10:19:47.895-05:002014-01-12T10:19:47.895-05:00I imagine this song on the wires of the wind late ...I imagine this song on the wires of the wind late at night reaching far to where the departed lover sleeps, inserting this dream, this curse, this sour-mash forever feathering love song.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71310691491016110462014-01-12T10:18:02.525-05:002014-01-12T10:18:02.525-05:00'twin birds each with half a song' :)'twin birds each with half a song' :)TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89527290579705422702014-01-12T09:58:21.482-05:002014-01-12T09:58:21.482-05:00Yeah, what hedgewitch said.
sorry but I couldn'...Yeah, what hedgewitch said.<br />sorry but I couldn't have said it better<br /><br />like always, i enjoy your creative word sense<br /><br />gracias mi amigaMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19445911645128505032014-01-12T09:57:48.391-05:002014-01-12T09:57:48.391-05:00Like a scavenger hunt .. the map is detailed, show...Like a scavenger hunt .. the map is detailed, showing me the way .. but there will be no winner.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59562746494924580692014-01-12T09:39:36.625-05:002014-01-12T09:39:36.625-05:00Shay--This poem was like dry ice. Alluring, and so...Shay--This poem was like dry ice. Alluring, and so cold it burned...Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27260413430990568642014-01-12T09:10:28.928-05:002014-01-12T09:10:28.928-05:00Why is it when the sweetest juice turns sour it st...Why is it when the sweetest juice turns sour it still makes a better drink than water? The image of a straight and simple course turning into a diffuse and incomprehensible labyrinth really is the one that hits me hardest, and which seems to tell truths usually unable to be articulated. The vid is fascinating(of course I can't understand a word of it) and the way the men have chosen to both disguise and present their sexuality with gesture instead of form is very effective as both style and substance.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com