tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post3304441900702389962..comments2024-03-28T19:48:05.247-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): BabyFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9820295459642347792011-02-11T16:30:56.633-05:002011-02-11T16:30:56.633-05:00Intimate, loving, het-up work. Effective.Intimate, loving, het-up work. Effective.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36243331982024378192011-02-11T15:04:21.855-05:002011-02-11T15:04:21.855-05:00Aahh... romantic and intense... I hear ya, lady!! ...Aahh... romantic and intense... I hear ya, lady!! I hear ya! <br />Been there myself... Infact, I'm still there!! :))<br /><br />A lovely and passionate one shot!! Much enjoyed!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27344414050531836272011-02-10T19:56:20.280-05:002011-02-10T19:56:20.280-05:00Now this was purrfectly sublime. I love just layi...Now this was purrfectly sublime. I love just laying there with a lover and you made me want one for the night lol. xoxo NithTanithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16084245673297662649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16610588095460108562011-02-10T14:56:56.726-05:002011-02-10T14:56:56.726-05:00Shay -- I'll say this you are definitely a wom...Shay -- I'll say this you are definitely a woman who can write a love poem:~) <br /><br />I loved this one and I sighed at the last line, "To think of nothing, but the sound of your breathing/With hours still left, for doing that."<br /><br />Sweet words and gentle thoughts:~)Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66563572080754644602011-02-10T13:23:40.730-05:002011-02-10T13:23:40.730-05:00To me, this feels almost like a lullaby. Beautifu...To me, this feels almost like a lullaby. Beautiful.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56506230846469196302011-02-10T10:21:07.880-05:002011-02-10T10:21:07.880-05:00Maybe this is a weird take, but the title figure I...Maybe this is a weird take, but the title figure I read between your lines as alternately and child and lover, or both, during those moments when there is not a single barrier between the lover and beloved. It's a uterine place, oceanically free, a place which feels like eternity and is a chilly death to wake from, starting the next ding dong day. Lovers have an intensity for satiated bliss in each others arms the same way a mother could hold her baby forever. Anyway, sure made me want to go home and take my wife by the hand upstairs to bed for a rainy-day-long nap.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74607672064658816922011-02-10T10:18:15.220-05:002011-02-10T10:18:15.220-05:00I want you for your beauty and your flaws as well-...<i>I want you for your beauty and your flaws as well--</i><br /><br />For better or worseDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85035649649855319062011-02-10T05:34:43.267-05:002011-02-10T05:34:43.267-05:00The long hours. Beautiful.The long hours. Beautiful.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4013247574940001072011-02-10T04:25:32.580-05:002011-02-10T04:25:32.580-05:00Ah, a romantic one! Nice! I can really hear this p...Ah, a romantic one! Nice! I can really hear this poem. Sounds like a spoken word piece to me. It'd be cool to hear you read it.Ami Mattisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391930163467566669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70956343339876585942011-02-10T00:07:26.235-05:002011-02-10T00:07:26.235-05:00This ALMOST makes me appreciate winter more. :)This ALMOST makes me appreciate winter more. :)TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60796050771820706162011-02-09T22:11:44.309-05:002011-02-09T22:11:44.309-05:00The thing with hours? They sretch into days, then ...The thing with hours? They sretch into days, then weeks, then years. <br /><br /><br />Yeah, this one is kind of hot.machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55463795066694312502011-02-09T21:51:17.239-05:002011-02-09T21:51:17.239-05:00smiles. sensual, love filled...just want to sigh.....smiles. sensual, love filled...just want to sigh...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72993237491554605102011-02-09T20:04:33.720-05:002011-02-09T20:04:33.720-05:00ahhhh and to melt into those flaws ...
hot one Sh...ahhhh and to melt into those flaws ...<br /><br />hot one Shay<br /><br />One Shot perfection<br /><br />M :)moondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49940785915265091942011-02-09T19:43:38.817-05:002011-02-09T19:43:38.817-05:00What passion in this one! Damn, I need a cigarette...What passion in this one! Damn, I need a cigarette after reading this post...and I don't even smoke!Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29910256039982237462011-02-09T17:44:33.016-05:002011-02-09T17:44:33.016-05:00Sigh. Incredibly romantic and tender. I love the r...Sigh. Incredibly romantic and tender. I love the repeated line, "and hours still left, for doing that." One feels the lazy slow long hours...........got my dose of romance for the day! Just beautiful.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13578556361982402162011-02-09T17:41:30.822-05:002011-02-09T17:41:30.822-05:00This feels like it ought to be a sonnet, something...This feels like it ought to be a sonnet, something read on a sunny Renaissance afternoon in Verona or Provence, from one lover to another. But its equally eloquent as just your usual fine free verse, lighting up the dull American winter hours that are still left, and are no longer quite so dreary.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87243243153854414902011-02-09T17:15:59.428-05:002011-02-09T17:15:59.428-05:00You're such a romantic, Shay. :)
(Love the p...You're such a romantic, Shay. :)<br /><br />(Love the pics you find, too!)Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.com