tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post3748769551046768972..comments2024-03-28T15:32:26.808-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): StillFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43538216105330590632010-10-20T06:24:21.519-04:002010-10-20T06:24:21.519-04:00My heart had a happy little romp with this one. Wh...My heart had a happy little romp with this one. Whee!Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37237384852535035862010-10-18T12:09:47.445-04:002010-10-18T12:09:47.445-04:00What gorgeous, perfect rhythm and structure!What gorgeous, perfect rhythm and structure!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9846986175536360252010-10-18T02:35:31.610-04:002010-10-18T02:35:31.610-04:00reminds me of those old books that had pictures th...reminds me of those old books that had pictures that you flipped quickly to see the figures move - with one exception - the speaker is stationary<br /><br />this is exceptional<br /><br />Moonie Smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59890570012895396212010-10-17T21:01:02.075-04:002010-10-17T21:01:02.075-04:00This was so fresh and so pretty...This was so fresh and so pretty...TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50653056275740701882010-10-17T19:30:41.413-04:002010-10-17T19:30:41.413-04:00Another one I'd like to hear set to music. :)...Another one I'd like to hear set to music. :)cinderkeyshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01578961959712679966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43606410086017264202010-10-17T17:52:14.382-04:002010-10-17T17:52:14.382-04:00this is great - very catchy too...three beating he...this is great - very catchy too...three beating hearts, two fading stars....dreamlike actually!Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17770013944671340961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79749759164802896742010-10-17T10:35:33.742-04:002010-10-17T10:35:33.742-04:00I know that feeling.I know that feeling.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89076139098341201102010-10-17T05:59:07.675-04:002010-10-17T05:59:07.675-04:00Three beating hearts. I loved this.Three beating hearts. I loved this.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28179092241187638472010-10-17T02:45:11.043-04:002010-10-17T02:45:11.043-04:00I want to stand still and notice the movement arou...I want to stand still and notice the movement around me :) Wonderful! Thank you xxLisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05321514984426181181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71186405667566249862010-10-16T21:55:35.906-04:002010-10-16T21:55:35.906-04:00So much movement and yet so much stillness. Love h...So much movement and yet so much stillness. Love how you turn paradox into poetry.<br />xo<br />Weasel-friendLa Belette Rougehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05686717070120116918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45758320015419374622010-10-16T15:52:48.078-04:002010-10-16T15:52:48.078-04:00I love it. :-)I love it. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15278378317227375722010-10-16T15:40:13.313-04:002010-10-16T15:40:13.313-04:00Sweet and lovely.
And I like the poem too!!
xoSweet and lovely.<br /><br />And I like the poem too!!<br /><br />xoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29151671789492881462010-10-16T14:06:40.843-04:002010-10-16T14:06:40.843-04:00It's when you stand still you notice everythin...It's when you stand still you notice everything around you...Loved this reverie.Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75781095714557763822010-10-16T13:31:18.322-04:002010-10-16T13:31:18.322-04:00That totally creates a picture to be visualized. E...That totally creates a picture to be visualized. Even if I am not up that early!Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37430772709244270662010-10-16T11:22:41.390-04:002010-10-16T11:22:41.390-04:00I think my vertigo's back...but I love this on...I think my vertigo's back...but I love this one, Chica! It has so much movement.Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37059695947325652422010-10-16T10:52:57.068-04:002010-10-16T10:52:57.068-04:00I LOVE this one! It has critters in it - imagery i...I LOVE this one! It has critters in it - imagery is wonderful, I can see it all, round earth, orange cat, spotted dog - and the "I am standing still" really has impact, and makes me feel still, too. This is wonderful writing!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56357900491315581132010-10-16T09:41:45.528-04:002010-10-16T09:41:45.528-04:00the whole thing terrific with the first stanza my ...the whole thing terrific with the first stanza my favorite!Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79960981388558538572010-10-16T08:36:02.988-04:002010-10-16T08:36:02.988-04:00smiles. keep standing tall shay...this was an enjo...smiles. keep standing tall shay...this was an enjoyable piece...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28097630934287492022010-10-16T08:26:36.432-04:002010-10-16T08:26:36.432-04:00I seem to be standing still
a lot lately.I seem to be standing still<br />a lot lately.fayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07673468419383240363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22987608756364952522010-10-16T08:12:08.226-04:002010-10-16T08:12:08.226-04:00This one just sings.This one just sings.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14843459906469325667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61456768017439110962010-10-16T08:07:28.193-04:002010-10-16T08:07:28.193-04:00Holly....wow , full impact on the senses, I love i...Holly....wow , full impact on the senses, I love it, FbLorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.com