tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post3915618426010399099..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): PipesFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45584701850664317562012-10-05T21:34:59.802-04:002012-10-05T21:34:59.802-04:00I finally wrote for your prompt, Shay! I cheated a...I finally wrote for your prompt, Shay! I cheated a little and paired it with mine...<br /><br />WOW...this IS a spooky siren song...the lilting magic of this makes it truly a joy to read!<br /><br />I love the lye soap and strychnine tea!! <br /><br />Poe WOULD be proud! :)Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57143124723253922162012-10-03T12:00:40.900-04:002012-10-03T12:00:40.900-04:00Love it! Sea shanties for sirens!Love it! Sea shanties for sirens!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63283123198478491522012-10-01T20:04:42.498-04:002012-10-01T20:04:42.498-04:00so fun and...wicked! so fun and...wicked! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66350447836255845532012-09-30T11:28:36.760-04:002012-09-30T11:28:36.760-04:00The cadence of this is absolutely perfect. There&#...The cadence of this is absolutely perfect. There's a lilting loveliness here, with an evil edge underneath. Perfect siren song, in other words. Love this, especially: "then when I sing, my cunning will bring<br />the doomed from out the sea." <br /><br />de <br />whimsygizmo.wordpress.comDe Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5896870107181693412012-09-29T12:54:40.554-04:002012-09-29T12:54:40.554-04:00This is excellent. But I don't know why anyone...This is excellent. But I don't know why anyone would really want to be a siren. What a lonely life that would be. I love the mention of the lorelei.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58576675655302533942012-09-29T05:37:51.914-04:002012-09-29T05:37:51.914-04:00"I've the desire to be wicked,
and so wi..."I've the desire to be wicked,<br /> and so wicked shall I be,"<br /><br />and so you shall, SP, so you shall! {smile}<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6285317983147291282012-09-28T22:48:01.115-04:002012-09-28T22:48:01.115-04:00"to ask and bow and find out how..."
I ..."to ask and bow and find out how..."<br /><br />I love the rhythm and rhyme of this, and I wanna be, too!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23040804540154219332012-09-28T20:26:42.626-04:002012-09-28T20:26:42.626-04:00Ah....one thing about magic, if you are the magici...Ah....one thing about magic, if you are the magician you can be whatever you want to be!!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54510086280739377482012-09-28T19:28:42.305-04:002012-09-28T19:28:42.305-04:00I remember the desire to be wicked. I no longer ha...I remember the desire to be wicked. I no longer have it, of course, because it was a trifle exhausting. <br />I love the rhythm of "to ask and bow and find out how"...so simple but so effective here.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44110358464141459142012-09-28T18:25:43.347-04:002012-09-28T18:25:43.347-04:00this is wicked good ;Dthis is wicked good ;DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53663533698851222922012-09-28T17:28:51.438-04:002012-09-28T17:28:51.438-04:00I've the desire to be wicked,
and so wicked sh...I've the desire to be wicked,<br />and so wicked shall I be....love that line. I think there is a bit of the wicked in me. :)Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74692556223482368602012-09-28T14:20:26.749-04:002012-09-28T14:20:26.749-04:00Lyrical!
And the lustful fear of all pirates!
Bea...Lyrical!<br />And the lustful fear of all pirates!<br /><br />Beautiful!<br /><br />Mimi Foxmortonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13572725659728049534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64158834625807758692012-09-28T13:48:38.584-04:002012-09-28T13:48:38.584-04:00double-dog dare ya! double-dog dare ya! Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74398290684468996862012-09-28T13:36:35.623-04:002012-09-28T13:36:35.623-04:00Wicked! And clever.Wicked! And clever.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34901778258992084362012-09-28T13:13:45.108-04:002012-09-28T13:13:45.108-04:00She proclaims it thus ........She proclaims it thus ........Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43264226722232796732012-09-28T12:33:40.516-04:002012-09-28T12:33:40.516-04:00I love the Try and Stop Me, too. You are Unstoppab...I love the Try and Stop Me, too. You are Unstoppable! And that makes me so happy!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7197774263344614792012-09-28T11:54:35.954-04:002012-09-28T11:54:35.954-04:00you clever girl!you clever girl!TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46616263191368608762012-09-28T11:36:35.282-04:002012-09-28T11:36:35.282-04:00I love that this feisty siren-song is labeled unde...I love that this feisty siren-song is labeled under "Try and Stop Me".Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19583452759414581592012-09-28T11:20:11.792-04:002012-09-28T11:20:11.792-04:00You will create another myth with the power of thi...You will create another myth with the power of this telling! A myth of an Ur-siren with no throat or voice who "sings" by sucking "the doomed from out the sea." Singularly indeed! What pipes! Beautiful!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2854285124554609872012-09-28T10:32:48.000-04:002012-09-28T10:32:48.000-04:00I'm with Mama Zen--if this doesn't put the...I'm with Mama Zen--if this doesn't put the ship on the rocks, I don't know what will. I especially like the last line/word, and it's sounded-out syllables.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44553402921625175092012-09-28T10:23:45.423-04:002012-09-28T10:23:45.423-04:00This definitely sings!This definitely sings!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37391994181049268032012-09-28T10:07:00.144-04:002012-09-28T10:07:00.144-04:00this is sing-song wonderful this is sing-song wonderful Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.com