tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post4114706950419302503..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): ThreeFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13761030718162882122011-11-04T11:51:23.364-04:002011-11-04T11:51:23.364-04:00I think we all think what we think of our own poem...I think we all think what we think of our own poems. But once you give the poem away, we get to think what we think. I know this is stating the obvious, but I loved this poem. I thought it was masterful and complete and lovely and evocative. <br /><br />Thank youAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88252079122454131612011-11-02T13:05:13.781-04:002011-11-02T13:05:13.781-04:00oh, I love dreams like that. I had one the other ...oh, I love dreams like that. I had one the other night only it was two guys and me. we touched finger tips and admired the young man's naked body and shivered.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84867571825225590002011-10-31T07:52:12.250-04:002011-10-31T07:52:12.250-04:00Often the hardest thing a poet faces is trying to ...Often the hardest thing a poet faces is trying to encapsulate a particular feeling... words can fail to clearly focus the picture we want to paint. But sometimes we have to settle for close enough.<br /><br />That being said (or typed), I think you gave it one hell of a swipe here. If it's not what you were shooting for, it must have been pretty darned close.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6616670122252485722011-10-31T07:29:35.196-04:002011-10-31T07:29:35.196-04:00It's often true that the characters in our dre...It's often true that the characters in our dreams represent parts of ourselves or aspects of our personalities that are undeveloped. We should pay attention to the dream selves because they may tell us something important. (That will be $100, thank you.)Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45088477456337110242011-10-31T05:58:56.007-04:002011-10-31T05:58:56.007-04:00Dreams can be so wonderful.Dreams can be so wonderful.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35072836763934395822011-10-30T23:45:51.473-04:002011-10-30T23:45:51.473-04:00this too is a true part of SHAY
Aloha from Hono...this too is a true part of SHAY<br /><br /><br /><br />Aloha from Honolulu<br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> <br /> > < } } ( ° >Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43377304502331440632011-10-30T22:10:26.903-04:002011-10-30T22:10:26.903-04:00You're being much too hard on yourself. That ...You're being much too hard on yourself. That was great! I especially loved the last stanza. Good way to sum up the entire experience!HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50537851362299436662011-10-30T17:10:10.662-04:002011-10-30T17:10:10.662-04:00LOVE "unironically seventeen" "a li...LOVE "unironically seventeen" "a little constellation of three" ~ NOT a crap poem, missy!<br /><br />i forget that the stars light isn't really there ~ i don't want to remember.<br /><br />i'm a fool cuz i believe it's true...<br /><br />hadn't heard that CSN&Y in forever ~ love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84905749560126162352011-10-30T13:31:23.034-04:002011-10-30T13:31:23.034-04:00It must have been hard to wake up from such a beau...It must have been hard to wake up from such a beautiful dream.......love the poem, and the people in it! And you!(while I'm at it!)Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7417587128499996962011-10-30T13:10:28.113-04:002011-10-30T13:10:28.113-04:00nice...why cant i dream in threes...nice wrap from...nice...why cant i dream in threes...nice wrap from front to back...i rather like it...and think it quite and interesting dream...a little more rhymie than your usual voice...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63272013128616704212011-10-30T10:23:01.824-04:002011-10-30T10:23:01.824-04:00I so can relate Dreams can be all you have,sometim...I so can relate Dreams can be all you have,sometimes, and they often represent situations of complexity to the point of absurdity, yet remain extremely comforting. Far from being 'a crap poem' this one picks up that feeling of inevitability, balance and perfect harmony of dream love well, and the stanza about the star light made me a bit teary. If only we didn't have to wake up...hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33847945953539136732011-10-30T10:15:51.325-04:002011-10-30T10:15:51.325-04:00Love your 'unironic' curiosities and then ...Love your 'unironic' curiosities and then subsequent acceptance of gender inclusiveness. <br /><br />your wonderful in what you speak of and in keeping us grounded.<br /><br />Love it!Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86644789781071163722011-10-30T09:58:30.773-04:002011-10-30T09:58:30.773-04:00Some people have the best dreams!
"unironica...Some people have the best dreams!<br /><br />"unironically seventeen"<br /><br />I love that.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51428645577095330542011-10-30T09:39:29.671-04:002011-10-30T09:39:29.671-04:00Shay--I love love love the full-circle-with-a-twis...Shay--I love love love the full-circle-with-a-twist beginning and end. The bits of internal rhyme. And the unexpected chance to listen to CSN&Y on a Sunday morning is always welcome.<br /><br />Crap? Definitely not!Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34148854928182387662011-10-30T09:11:58.258-04:002011-10-30T09:11:58.258-04:00Readers: please pardon the irrelevant Christmas me...Readers: please pardon the irrelevant Christmas message at the end of the second video.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.com