tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post4253826436216382472..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Morning SongFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45567927043980575012012-08-15T11:16:51.920-04:002012-08-15T11:16:51.920-04:00"My skin is lonely"
"while your th..."My skin is lonely"<br /><br />"while your thigh won the wet from me"<br /><br />"He knows nothing<br />Or everything ... that lonesome idiot bird"<br /><br />Excellent.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3611093795090161162008-12-01T15:09:00.000-05:002008-12-01T15:09:00.000-05:00"Idiot Bird" - Exactly as I feel. So loved this. ..."Idiot Bird" - Exactly as I feel. So loved this. Wish I could express myself the way you do. Please chase these poems of yours to an agent. Shay, they will be gobbled up.Shrinkyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18401403773851253351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38449433465078636152008-04-30T18:56:00.000-04:002008-04-30T18:56:00.000-04:00Ok, I'm officially starstruck! Thank you for comin...Ok, I'm officially starstruck! Thank you for coming by and commenting!<BR/><BR/>Your novella "A Fish Out Of Water" is the BEST.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7239118025301510192008-04-30T17:57:00.000-04:002008-04-30T17:57:00.000-04:00Hi Shay - I haven't much time to read, but your po...Hi Shay - I haven't much time to read, but your poetry is evocative and thoughtful and yet quick, like a needle, if that makes sense. Thank you for sharing it.Karin Kallmakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10041583256615549971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77705414687460621702008-04-30T17:35:00.000-04:002008-04-30T17:35:00.000-04:00Thank you, Cynthia. I was listening to Luz Casal o...Thank you, Cynthia. I was listening to Luz Casal one night, and I put "Piensa En Mi" on repeat play and wrote both this poem and "Maricela Mexicana." Yes, there was a real Maricela. Sigh.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81512039945471355832008-04-30T07:57:00.000-04:002008-04-30T07:57:00.000-04:00This poem of yours Shay is sobeautifully melanchol...This poem of yours Shay is so<BR/>beautifully melancholy, LOVE!<BR/>The repetition lends to the longing<BR/>emotions, delicately written.Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10598169309616545734noreply@blogger.com