tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post432397806838714520..comments2024-03-28T05:18:54.680-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): DidoFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74474710967689736372018-01-09T19:59:20.472-05:002018-01-09T19:59:20.472-05:00Your imagination went wild with this one. Outstan...Your imagination went wild with this one. Outstanding, and fantastical!purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21066915787889978202018-01-07T11:38:01.728-05:002018-01-07T11:38:01.728-05:00Someone get that kid outta there before it's t...Someone get that kid outta there before it's too late!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82918282620726523672018-01-07T09:56:34.570-05:002018-01-07T09:56:34.570-05:00I know someone close to this... Bjorn is right - i...I know someone close to this... Bjorn is right - it leads to breakdown.Debi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47269588956850483922018-01-07T09:53:08.790-05:002018-01-07T09:53:08.790-05:00Too many ace lines to quote here, but the overall ...Too many ace lines to quote here, but the overall message remains understated and subtle--who is she? I wonder if she isn't me, or a million others I've passed by the way, fishing that diamond out and using it like a shamanic monocle. The word play and the imagery are miles high, Shay. Just an excellent piece.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62863455029395354892018-01-07T07:05:22.321-05:002018-01-07T07:05:22.321-05:00Flies solo, at altitudes and attitudes that ever a...Flies solo, at altitudes and attitudes that ever astonish.Brendanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983584155125369291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65907456012618734382018-01-07T04:45:12.871-05:002018-01-07T04:45:12.871-05:00'Who else would wear diadems and diaphanous go...'Who else would wear diadems and diaphanous gowns to do a load of colors?'.. this alone is so powerful! The imagery in this poem has cutting edge to it. Beautifully done, Shay!💞Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20375471844601004852018-01-07T02:13:20.046-05:002018-01-07T02:13:20.046-05:00Brilliant, Shay: 'Who else would wear diadems ...Brilliant, Shay: 'Who else would wear diadems and diaphanous gowns to do a load of colors?'<br />Poor old Pecky, 'more fascinated with millet than prophecy', with 'the rattling furnace is as close to a tree as he'll ever get'. Free Pecky! <br /><br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68472918955459262072018-01-06T19:55:37.452-05:002018-01-06T19:55:37.452-05:00Yeppers. That deadly air inside a party ballon. I ...Yeppers. That deadly air inside a party ballon. I knew a woman like this in university. Her kid's diapers always sagging. I kidnapped her car though and took her home with me in another state. My parents were horrified but fell in love with the cat whom they re-christened Annie. She was so pretty and sweet in appearance, like a fragile little fairy. But mean. tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35000458678055748892018-01-06T16:50:52.749-05:002018-01-06T16:50:52.749-05:00I think she will crack... keeping up appearance is...I think she will crack... keeping up appearance is one thing, finding meaning is another.<br />Made me think of Lucy Jordan a bit....brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5053648309433967372018-01-06T16:20:54.279-05:002018-01-06T16:20:54.279-05:00"now I have to pick up her slack while she la..."now I have to pick up her slack while she la-dee-dah's around <br />like a brain damaged nymph"<br /><br />You are killing me!!! So dang hilario.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66774182570653372392018-01-06T16:12:03.763-05:002018-01-06T16:12:03.763-05:00A woman who knows her own mind. Basements, basins,...A woman who knows her own mind. Basements, basins, blinks and all! Angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413074557542736813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63386483491038521952018-01-06T16:06:10.870-05:002018-01-06T16:06:10.870-05:00Oh my goodness! You took me there. I wanted to res...Oh my goodness! You took me there. I wanted to rescue the parrot,("more fascinated with millet than prophecy". Wow!) and the dog, and take them into the sun. The diamond in the eye got my attention. How you do tell a tale. Glad I dont live in that house!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5525876656870987312018-01-06T16:04:07.175-05:002018-01-06T16:04:07.175-05:00Such great timing in this tale, Shay. I love how y...Such great timing in this tale, Shay. I love how you blend the magical realism with the prosaic narrative. This provides insight which is both humorous and astute.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com