tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post4546245225100889130..comments2024-03-28T17:44:41.989-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Can Anybody See Us?Fireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25277649673718354212011-01-09T22:38:00.641-05:002011-01-09T22:38:00.641-05:00Wow, this is so true. So many just don't see, ...Wow, this is so true. So many just don't see, or refuse to see.Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06089318003200939942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80744892030435164222010-12-18T12:18:17.893-05:002010-12-18T12:18:17.893-05:00Let the children be who they are, a good reminder,...Let the children be who they are, a good reminder, Shay.<br /><br />They will grow up and away, might as well have them do so with approbation for who they ARE.<br /><br />Us "grown-ups" too, a lonely road as Talon and Tony say. But not so lonely when we remember we are made of love.<br /><br />And isn't that Rob in the first photo? The guy who sang with Santana about being a "hot one, like 7 inches from the midday sun?" Just a hunch.<br /><br />xoxoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11988114353617431682010-12-14T14:18:07.099-05:002010-12-14T14:18:07.099-05:00Stark, striking work. One of my three favorite 1S...Stark, striking work. One of my three favorite 1SW poems posted in this week's offerings (out of the 130 that preceded this) - the other two, btw, were #55 (Kenis Cris) and #60 (mel).Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24295205550133946992010-12-11T12:17:05.316-05:002010-12-11T12:17:05.316-05:00this was a great one shot, Shay. More people need...this was a great one shot, Shay. More people need to open up their minds and their eyes...Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18360411208224167572010-12-10T21:46:32.573-05:002010-12-10T21:46:32.573-05:00Incredibly sad. It is amazing how parents refuse t...Incredibly sad. It is amazing how parents refuse to see the truth of their children. Powerful piece, Tiger-friend!<br />xoxo<br />WFLa Belette Rougehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05686717070120116918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72990805148243932052010-12-10T14:53:27.180-05:002010-12-10T14:53:27.180-05:00What a punch in the gut! I believe.What a punch in the gut! I believe.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34633213821908359912010-12-10T03:10:30.919-05:002010-12-10T03:10:30.919-05:00sounds like a rock 'n' roll song Doll !!
...sounds like a rock 'n' roll song Doll !! <br /><br />always so lyrical !!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02687020216039527521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86272502250868306152010-12-09T23:03:31.949-05:002010-12-09T23:03:31.949-05:00Great message, stunning photos... well done.Great message, stunning photos... well done.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68376043648549556852010-12-09T20:45:43.237-05:002010-12-09T20:45:43.237-05:00Such a sad reality, young people crumbling under t...Such a sad reality, young people crumbling under the expectations of their adults. I wish parents could read this.<br /><br />My one shot:<br />http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/07/rediscovery-a-random-word-poem-for-jingles-poetry-potluck/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50407120481165262002010-12-09T17:06:21.695-05:002010-12-09T17:06:21.695-05:00very well expressed....keeping true to yourself.. ...very well expressed....keeping true to yourself.. stubbornness..where does the line get drawn...a great write...peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18329828860025100922010-12-09T13:42:42.871-05:002010-12-09T13:42:42.871-05:00I'm with Tess. I couldn't agree more. Love...I'm with Tess. I couldn't agree more. Love and Light, SenderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16438224711414834332010-12-09T11:47:04.272-05:002010-12-09T11:47:04.272-05:00These would make excellent lyrics. This one's ...These would make excellent lyrics. This one's crying out for music!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42349973535465632822010-12-09T08:28:49.512-05:002010-12-09T08:28:49.512-05:00sad you know..again i feel the caged lioness in th...sad you know..again i feel the caged lioness in this one...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9464777264240741762010-12-09T01:10:07.891-05:002010-12-09T01:10:07.891-05:00Nice job Shay-- The photos match perfectly with y...Nice job Shay-- The photos match perfectly with your thought-provoking writing.<br />xo jjJoanna Jenkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10836376588710862173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10494351591385044552010-12-09T00:00:08.275-05:002010-12-09T00:00:08.275-05:00You have to be who you are...self is all we have.....You have to be who you are...self is all we have...thanks Shay...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4817688786656615232010-12-08T23:24:14.397-05:002010-12-08T23:24:14.397-05:00Down the road with their thmbs out...
Thinking fr...Down the road with their thmbs out...<br /><br />Thinking free<br />to be ME !machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52077886274744847072010-12-08T22:54:52.885-05:002010-12-08T22:54:52.885-05:00Wow, this one's amazing! Who knows us better t...Wow, this one's amazing! Who knows us better than ourselves, Chica?? No one, that's who.Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67116503387140125512010-12-08T22:31:26.985-05:002010-12-08T22:31:26.985-05:00Aloha from Waikiki!
Sorry I haven't been aroun...Aloha from Waikiki!<br />Sorry I haven't been around for a while, but if you read my post on Tuesday I'm sure you understand. Wishing you all the best! <br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /><br />><}}(°>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64595191446743242132010-12-08T21:06:19.066-05:002010-12-08T21:06:19.066-05:00It's sobering the boxes that kids are put into...It's sobering the boxes that kids are put into. Suicide comes up as an option out of that box.<br /><br /><br />thanks Shay<br /><br />Always going up the down escalator<br /><br />MoonsmilesOne Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artistshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07020684469937853500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65373072892289300332010-12-08T20:40:42.097-05:002010-12-08T20:40:42.097-05:00These feel like song lyrics to me...These feel like song lyrics to me...Hannah Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49963066488756426542010-12-08T20:40:28.789-05:002010-12-08T20:40:28.789-05:00I agree with Talon's assessment. Being yoursel...I agree with Talon's assessment. Being yourself can be a terribly lonesome road to take. I guess that's why we try to hitch a ride?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20957684781142563192010-12-08T18:50:14.084-05:002010-12-08T18:50:14.084-05:00Perfect.Perfect.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88424245309231033762010-12-08T18:40:04.089-05:002010-12-08T18:40:04.089-05:00Thanks. This needs to be said, and it's not al...Thanks. This needs to be said, and it's not always teens and young adults who realize they're being compressed into a space that eliminates everything they are. <br /><br />Here is to living awake instead of asleep!<br /><br />--And thanks so much for laughing at my plastic candy&diet joke! I so rarely manage to be funny on purpose. :PAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02241614773022487007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1748579091789075882010-12-08T16:29:40.856-05:002010-12-08T16:29:40.856-05:00The aloneness definitely comes through - anyplace ...The aloneness definitely comes through - anyplace but here...Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67560421970235455142010-12-08T16:22:43.012-05:002010-12-08T16:22:43.012-05:00Powerful write. I love your work so much. Everyt...Powerful write. I love your work so much. Everything you write blows me away! This was so tactile and immediate and yes, heartbreaking.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.com