tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post4610488150068131557..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): PlumFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74438817771382266732012-08-15T11:38:13.973-04:002012-08-15T11:38:13.973-04:00"Take this silver blade--
Slide it under my s..."Take this silver blade--<br />Slide it under my skin, let yourself in" ... Sheesh. THAT is an invitation! Like a letter opener to an envelope.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4291969674313122722008-04-16T13:56:00.000-04:002008-04-16T13:56:00.000-04:00Thanks you, WW. I have to be in a certain space to...Thanks you, WW. I have to be in a certain space to write this kind of poem, but they seem to turn out well. I'm glad you found it so.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38783581968301457572008-04-16T12:37:00.000-04:002008-04-16T12:37:00.000-04:00Darkly magnificent.Darkly magnificent.writerwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82911153820231848682008-04-08T19:38:00.000-04:002008-04-08T19:38:00.000-04:00Thank you, ladies. I normally only post poems here...Thank you, ladies. I normally only post poems here that I have lived with for a while, but this one I just wrote last night. I'm glad you like it!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3837308026864784662008-04-08T19:14:00.000-04:002008-04-08T19:14:00.000-04:00Very lovely poem Shay, sweetand seductive and the ...Very lovely poem Shay, sweet<BR/>and seductive and the erotic<BR/>image you have here is perfect.Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10598169309616545734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45314491428237579432008-04-08T16:09:00.000-04:002008-04-08T16:09:00.000-04:00simple, yet effective, the first stanza makes this...simple, yet effective, the first stanza makes this poem, as then the use of the word 'heart' makes literal and metaphorical sense.Kelly https://www.blogger.com/profile/16136234174682473917noreply@blogger.com