tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post4618979742058895784..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): WeekendFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63980408668951279452009-01-20T22:00:00.000-05:002009-01-20T22:00:00.000-05:00oops, I meant to type so "dry" not day. ughhoops, I meant to type so "dry" not day. ughhSusan English Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05661766173970296173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53846385629684355992009-01-20T21:57:00.000-05:002009-01-20T21:57:00.000-05:00I have a habit of saying that Sundays are "pollute...I have a habit of saying that Sundays are "polluted," but you say it so much better!<BR/><BR/>bone fruit so day it shrivels the tongue...skull candy<BR/><BR/>Right on.Susan English Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05661766173970296173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24757640896520047792008-12-01T19:57:00.000-05:002008-12-01T19:57:00.000-05:00I admire this. The emotion is (and does come off a...I admire this. The emotion is (and does come off as) real, and the expression thereof is not raw (not a direct 'tell'). Impressive wordplay and imagery. Cheers. (I hope you are doing better now, with peace.)S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77169652104820660702008-12-01T18:24:00.000-05:002008-12-01T18:24:00.000-05:00There is probably something twisted about writing ...There is probably something twisted about writing something born of pain and then going, oh, good line! But i did, I liked that troika near the end. I should probably be taken out and shot. Please.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75813694846863392182008-12-01T12:05:00.000-05:002008-12-01T12:05:00.000-05:00skull candydream rotfire blossomdrifting on the wi...skull candy<BR/>dream rot<BR/>fire blossom<BR/><BR/>drifting on the wind of your words...Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68726345373983188442008-11-30T19:46:00.000-05:002008-11-30T19:46:00.000-05:00Thank you all for commenting, ladies.Thank you all for commenting, ladies.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85295779786108238762008-11-30T14:41:00.000-05:002008-11-30T14:41:00.000-05:00So sad.So sad.Shrinkyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18401403773851253351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5917764163995045442008-11-30T10:16:00.000-05:002008-11-30T10:16:00.000-05:00loved it.......loved it.......Vodka Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04734323418017847775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5375227819542029972008-11-30T10:12:00.000-05:002008-11-30T10:12:00.000-05:00My God, this is . . . well, it just is. And, I ad...My God, this is . . . well, it just is. And, I adore it!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com