tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post477649472524117071..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): 2 pretty girlsFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70607977661510763832012-03-21T03:48:11.672-04:002012-03-21T03:48:11.672-04:00A wonderful story poem, leaves us wanting more.A wonderful story poem, leaves us wanting more.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76554053487215908882012-03-19T15:02:51.914-04:002012-03-19T15:02:51.914-04:00What a perfect mystery you wove, Shay. It's so...What a perfect mystery you wove, Shay. It's so hard to resist walking where you hadn't ought to.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5272726306607264452012-03-19T10:16:59.817-04:002012-03-19T10:16:59.817-04:00A tasty tease, thatA tasty tease, thatDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72085000930273196182012-03-18T17:53:13.377-04:002012-03-18T17:53:13.377-04:00What indeed happened...do tell us a tale ~
Happy ...What indeed happened...do tell us a tale ~<br /><br />Happy Sunday ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55465195448221322902012-03-18T15:42:40.930-04:002012-03-18T15:42:40.930-04:00Oooh, Shay, a mystery, or a horror. Scary. So much...Oooh, Shay, a mystery, or a horror. Scary. So much implied when so little is actually said here. Very well done.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18588101458310437012012-03-18T14:40:51.923-04:002012-03-18T14:40:51.923-04:00He does have an appetite for pretty girls.
rosema...He does have an appetite for pretty girls.<br /><br />rosemarymint.wordpress.com✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89524539439639265872012-03-18T09:56:41.083-04:002012-03-18T09:56:41.083-04:00you know, Matthew Shepard was the first image i sa...you know, Matthew Shepard was the first image i saw when i looked at Shanyn's gorgeous photo. but then i went in another direction. i'm glad you went this way and like that you haven't explained a thing.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6283192480326615672012-03-18T09:44:49.176-04:002012-03-18T09:44:49.176-04:00This grabs hold from the first line and kept me da...This grabs hold from the first line and kept me dangling long after one I read it! This writing fits the photo like a glove - just perfect!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88774983062675071632012-03-18T09:37:45.232-04:002012-03-18T09:37:45.232-04:00So cool...and Devil's Tail fits that line of f...So cool...and Devil's Tail fits that line of fence perfectly, it gave me a little nip yesterday that bled like crazy! My war painted leg and your poem seem to have a connection! Great write!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8126706071013243782012-03-18T09:34:52.066-04:002012-03-18T09:34:52.066-04:00Oooh.....good stuff. Page 1 of a big book....Oooh.....good stuff. Page 1 of a big book....Hannah Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63424404497238620532012-03-18T08:15:04.540-04:002012-03-18T08:15:04.540-04:00Oh... that chills and intrigues all at once! Very...Oh... that chills and intrigues all at once! Very nicely done.Zoehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16929674746784140738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47187145140844494032012-03-18T03:46:12.529-04:002012-03-18T03:46:12.529-04:00Haha! Laughing at Corey's comment! But I know ...Haha! Laughing at Corey's comment! But I know what he means.. you have tantalized us with these lines: an entire story is suggested and left to our imaginations to complete. What was lurking in the woods?Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23084740547451186132012-03-18T01:43:53.186-04:002012-03-18T01:43:53.186-04:00Yes, I can see a story in this one. That is what i...Yes, I can see a story in this one. That is what is great about this piece...it leaves you with questions for your imagination to answer and begs to ask for moreSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83444272103379566852012-03-18T01:33:09.190-04:002012-03-18T01:33:09.190-04:00Maybe because its St. Patty's day, I can see a...Maybe because its St. Patty's day, I can see an old timer nodding towards a mysterious woman in the corner of the pub. He leans over his pint and whispers these lines to a wide eyed tourist.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59896355300769024502012-03-18T00:18:33.954-04:002012-03-18T00:18:33.954-04:00ooooooh! you could expand on the fairy tale behind...ooooooh! you could expand on the fairy tale behind this for dVerse Poetics Saturday prompt!<br /><br />even if you leave it just as it is, this is brilliant!<br /><br />"Walking where they hadn't ought to go--"<br /><br />LOVE it!<br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47699406617456069192012-03-17T23:03:48.257-04:002012-03-17T23:03:48.257-04:00Love, love, love!!! The story between the lines o...Love, love, love!!! The story between the lines of this poem sends shivers up my spine.Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30141474710074768882012-03-17T22:10:16.165-04:002012-03-17T22:10:16.165-04:00Tell me more, tell me more!Tell me more, tell me more!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4375043368872718142012-03-17T21:57:46.540-04:002012-03-17T21:57:46.540-04:00When they beg for more, you have definitely done y...When they beg for more, you have definitely done your job. This is craaaazzzyyyy cool. I love it, I want to have ten thousand of its babies. Carry on.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85911228310695776102012-03-17T21:54:41.031-04:002012-03-17T21:54:41.031-04:00More, more!More, more!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78534264248074664242012-03-17T21:40:55.161-04:002012-03-17T21:40:55.161-04:00Like my incubus always says--never turn your back ...Like my incubus always says--never turn your back on The Tail. I believe that's one walk I'll skip.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-18135866919104624632012-03-17T20:55:57.224-04:002012-03-17T20:55:57.224-04:00This conjures up all kinds of thoughts, none of th...This conjures up all kinds of thoughts, none of them good. (Shiver)Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17381666336218695932012-03-17T20:12:44.979-04:002012-03-17T20:12:44.979-04:00Whoa! You can tell a story, kiddo, in very few wor...Whoa! You can tell a story, kiddo, in very few words. I especially loved "lifted morning's veil"......Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56814864851448682602012-03-17T20:06:32.446-04:002012-03-17T20:06:32.446-04:00Yikes! Eerie, leaves so much to the imagination; ...Yikes! Eerie, leaves so much to the imagination; and I don't want to go there....Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29011008447293843922012-03-17T20:00:01.043-04:002012-03-17T20:00:01.043-04:00That just summons up all sorts of imaginings.That just summons up all sorts of imaginings.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11472464181332048372012-03-17T19:52:08.183-04:002012-03-17T19:52:08.183-04:00wow now that begs a story...wow now that begs a story...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com