tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post480408036554917502..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): If I Were A FoxFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53582437767287103472011-06-11T05:37:31.317-04:002011-06-11T05:37:31.317-04:00Wow! What a wonderful read.
Anna :o]Wow! What a wonderful read.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15894403364637668312011-06-10T14:59:53.200-04:002011-06-10T14:59:53.200-04:00Exquisitely sensuous and filled with self-knowledg...Exquisitely sensuous and filled with self-knowledge. Another favourite.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-816743055894714342011-06-10T08:04:45.947-04:002011-06-10T08:04:45.947-04:00I love it!I love it!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9840635886150509312011-06-10T06:19:45.357-04:002011-06-10T06:19:45.357-04:00Nice fox tail, Basil, Renard and kitsNice fox tail, Basil, Renard and kitsIsabel Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66951493629015322922011-06-10T04:27:24.984-04:002011-06-10T04:27:24.984-04:00Wonderful. :-)Wonderful. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45652371578882832922011-06-10T00:43:24.658-04:002011-06-10T00:43:24.658-04:00This is my first experience of your poems and I am...This is my first experience of your poems and I am mesmerized.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16567470494995213573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1033890974531697792011-06-09T07:51:03.283-04:002011-06-09T07:51:03.283-04:00I really like this. The rhythm is smooth and the &...I really like this. The rhythm is smooth and the "fox" metaphor delightful!<br /><br />Pat<br />www.critteralley.blogspot.comPat Wahlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01138619912065680084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20756317296417978592011-06-08T17:44:22.203-04:002011-06-08T17:44:22.203-04:00I love that last line!I love that last line!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85132867599234454362011-06-08T16:15:19.375-04:002011-06-08T16:15:19.375-04:00Like "hedgewitch," I read this several t...Like "hedgewitch," I read this several times just because it's fun to read. I like the first lines in the second and fourth verse...<br /><br />"I know you"<br />"When you come to yourself,"Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71466573271432152342011-06-08T14:57:49.905-04:002011-06-08T14:57:49.905-04:00But you're not. Or are you? xjBut you're not. Or are you? xjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80458448877960741262011-06-08T14:02:33.567-04:002011-06-08T14:02:33.567-04:00"I know that you
Steal out to kiss the night,..."I know that you<br />Steal out to kiss the night,<br />Like a somnambulist,<br />Hardly knowing that you do, or why."<br />Simply brilliant! I loved the whole experience of reading this skilfully crafted poem. Also love the photo. Wish I'd taken it.<br />Thanks so much for sharing. James.James Rainsfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12981399551842327691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13441038587326151352011-06-08T13:51:57.976-04:002011-06-08T13:51:57.976-04:00The lure of the wild ginger haired, the glitter th...The lure of the wild ginger haired, the glitter there of green in the eye, the wildness that seeks the word in her fur. Bait is strong, she should be wary of your trap.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54389087620391794052011-06-08T13:24:49.467-04:002011-06-08T13:24:49.467-04:00love this love this foxy lady!love this love this foxy lady!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86136158184606553922011-06-08T12:00:45.157-04:002011-06-08T12:00:45.157-04:00You're stiring up some myths here - totally co...You're stiring up some myths here - totally cool poem - a gem.Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63760722242859421112011-06-08T11:23:52.760-04:002011-06-08T11:23:52.760-04:00This "feral girl" trope is such a magnif...This "feral girl" trope is such a magnificent myth -- it gives you the template of an entire wilderness to lay over everyday life. It also reminds me that we are much, much more the animal of appetite and survival and procreation than out mommies and daddies tried to civilize out of us. I always tread respectfully round the edges of your poems, wary of straying too close to your attention. Shhhhh. - BrendanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8393528672182749742011-06-08T11:20:01.253-04:002011-06-08T11:20:01.253-04:00"You know you're a cute little heartbreak..."You know you're a cute little heartbreaker, foxy..."Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38579052259304016892011-06-08T10:07:45.273-04:002011-06-08T10:07:45.273-04:00You are my favourite trickster. Love this one - F...You are my favourite trickster. Love this one - Fox, or not...Poets Unitedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14470198264008339228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87551457183547001142011-06-08T10:06:46.029-04:002011-06-08T10:06:46.029-04:00I've been trying to trick the morning for year...I've been trying to trick the morning for years ...Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42835195634445593622011-06-08T03:32:43.343-04:002011-06-08T03:32:43.343-04:00Ahhhh that fox so adept at ...
Shay you got that ...Ahhhh that fox so adept at ...<br /><br />Shay you got that word thing going - all I see is red!moondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64608690613107747462011-06-08T03:03:05.027-04:002011-06-08T03:03:05.027-04:00A real pleasure to read..enjoyed it very much! :)A real pleasure to read..enjoyed it very much! :)Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19386574587194786712011-06-07T23:45:54.004-04:002011-06-07T23:45:54.004-04:00LOL... I had to look it up too Herman. Such a fan...LOL... I had to look it up too Herman. Such a fancy word for something so simple... man I love words:-) Great write!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17792036091186754290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68337100606041947722011-06-07T23:34:52.610-04:002011-06-07T23:34:52.610-04:00I'll admit that I had to look up the word &quo...I'll admit that I had to look up the word "somnambulist". <br /><br />...was I the only one?HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20671350335222648272011-06-07T23:18:48.464-04:002011-06-07T23:18:48.464-04:00Ileana stole my comment !
What do you mean "...Ileana stole my comment !<br /><br />What do you mean "IF"?<br />If you were a fox, <br />you'd be called Shay :-)machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56704745468725123322011-06-07T22:12:00.069-04:002011-06-07T22:12:00.069-04:00especially beyond laws.<i>especially</i> beyond laws.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1727268810347420992011-06-07T21:51:59.990-04:002011-06-07T21:51:59.990-04:00Gorgeous redhead as a sleek fox in a beautiful poe...Gorgeous redhead as a sleek fox in a beautiful poem. I love it!Ann Grenierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13501522748426995035noreply@blogger.com