tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post4825403115365547411..comments2024-03-28T05:18:54.680-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): NydiaFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64940129005636864482014-10-25T20:41:57.823-04:002014-10-25T20:41:57.823-04:00This is brilliant, and I love the turn you gave to...This is brilliant, and I love the turn you gave to Lydia's story.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51636941576484202322014-10-20T02:11:31.758-04:002014-10-20T02:11:31.758-04:00sly and strong, Shay ~sly and strong, Shay ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78234146358817622962014-10-19T20:21:42.745-04:002014-10-19T20:21:42.745-04:00Thanks for coming over to my place...I liked this ...Thanks for coming over to my place...I liked this poem...and I like the fact that it was inspired by another historical fiction, double fiction<br /><br /><br />WanderWanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12384347526625976847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33116353794936010172014-10-19T08:10:10.120-04:002014-10-19T08:10:10.120-04:00It has a definite dark and stormy night feel to it...It has a definite dark and stormy night feel to it. Awesome!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51349612577100687972014-10-18T15:32:01.728-04:002014-10-18T15:32:01.728-04:00Brought to the present time brilliantly! Song acce...Brought to the present time brilliantly! Song accentuate the urgency to say the truth. Cool.humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90999052141605637192014-10-18T13:58:32.202-04:002014-10-18T13:58:32.202-04:00Told as only you can tell it.Told as only you can tell it.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51241920812416295332014-10-18T13:24:05.423-04:002014-10-18T13:24:05.423-04:00History repeats itself? How many Nydia's have...History repeats itself? How many Nydia's have their been? Blind and deaf in one way or another? Great twist - like that you brought it up to modern times with the beginning of the second stanza. Clever.<br />Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3297299083980009822014-10-18T10:56:28.493-04:002014-10-18T10:56:28.493-04:00Really a sense of immediacy to this, and a period ...Really a sense of immediacy to this, and a period feel, very genuine, in the style, but the rather subtle snark is pure Fireblossom. You turn the cliche back on the hand that wields it always, and here, despite the formal flow, you use it to cut to the truth and pin it open on the dissection table. hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53443145205532091982014-10-18T10:44:32.869-04:002014-10-18T10:44:32.869-04:00Wow! I'm glad I didn't read yours before i...Wow! I'm glad I didn't read yours before i wrote mine.<br /><br />Excellent POV, and such an accurate portrayal of folly that seems unattached to any historical era.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40539763309911576342014-10-18T09:12:06.369-04:002014-10-18T09:12:06.369-04:00hmmmm. sadness, peril, a feeling of helplessness. ...hmmmm. sadness, peril, a feeling of helplessness. *sigh*TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39286889653843329612014-10-17T23:42:45.445-04:002014-10-17T23:42:45.445-04:00This takes such a unique situation and creates suc...This takes such a unique situation and creates such a powerful image—how excellent!Matt Dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09276531398959895160noreply@blogger.com