tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post4864663662837265822..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): GiftFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35689196622254593332013-06-01T00:21:30.582-04:002013-06-01T00:21:30.582-04:0053 very impressive words!
Nice job.
xo jj53 very impressive words!<br />Nice job.<br />xo jjJoanna Jenkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10836376588710862173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62238148814865277652013-05-30T15:04:06.711-04:002013-05-30T15:04:06.711-04:00I like your idea of safe being a person rather tha...I like your idea of safe being a person rather than a place, and love your images!Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44237317000777171212013-05-30T14:22:07.303-04:002013-05-30T14:22:07.303-04:00LOVE your safest place, SP!
♥LOVE your safest place, SP!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-78280422414193488682013-05-30T13:27:33.713-04:002013-05-30T13:27:33.713-04:00How much safer can it get than "soothed me sw...How much safer can it get than "soothed me sweet, a mother for the mother-hungry" ?<br />But I love the description of her voice, and "new car fur-cuffs fine" made me smile. Delightful, Shay!<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62485071684998778402013-05-30T13:23:29.326-04:002013-05-30T13:23:29.326-04:00Woohoo! FB!Woohoo! FB!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31202818175137394502013-05-30T11:16:30.646-04:002013-05-30T11:16:30.646-04:00i can see/feel that unforgetablenessi can see/feel that unforgetablenessDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36778236479785294182013-05-30T10:43:16.787-04:002013-05-30T10:43:16.787-04:00Another one hit out of the ballpark, Shay! Perfect...Another one hit out of the ballpark, Shay! Perfection.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77257870289797770802013-05-30T09:06:52.119-04:002013-05-30T09:06:52.119-04:00I love the way the vowels resound in these lines -...I love the way the vowels resound in these lines - gives an underlying poetic sound to your words. Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51711396297921669872013-05-30T06:56:23.009-04:002013-05-30T06:56:23.009-04:00This is a lovely piece!!This is a lovely piece!!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33984853007189873772013-05-30T06:03:08.324-04:002013-05-30T06:03:08.324-04:00She's too fine to pair with soothing- motherin...She's too fine to pair with soothing- mothering...you see my heart's conflicted but that's personal...it doesn't lessen the gift or the giver or your poetic rendering which is fabulous, (as always), Shay. :) Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-467044125303317912013-05-30T05:30:10.247-04:002013-05-30T05:30:10.247-04:00New-car fine - what a great word choice! Gets so m...New-car fine - what a great word choice! Gets so many of the senses right there - sight, touch, smell!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-2546556549969375672013-05-30T04:21:42.893-04:002013-05-30T04:21:42.893-04:00Ah, the uniquely amazing thing great sex can do. S...Ah, the uniquely amazing thing great sex can do. She was a gem.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24731079260388738832013-05-30T04:16:08.244-04:002013-05-30T04:16:08.244-04:00Very sexy love it!Very sexy love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19116718032936775772013-05-30T01:42:49.420-04:002013-05-30T01:42:49.420-04:00:)beautiful meaning at the end!!:)beautiful meaning at the end!!Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82850858675639334212013-05-30T01:35:33.770-04:002013-05-30T01:35:33.770-04:00Shay, this is so sexy, sensual... and I can see ho...Shay, this is so sexy, sensual... and I can see how this would be your perfect safe place. AND you can play there, too!! Hotcha! AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55120947140816549882013-05-29T23:32:47.264-04:002013-05-29T23:32:47.264-04:00Just freakin' perfect.Just freakin' perfect.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31502201151073855002013-05-29T22:10:00.011-04:002013-05-29T22:10:00.011-04:00Fantastic job! Anything that can make concubines ...Fantastic job! Anything that can make concubines cry is a-okay in my book. Heh... <br /><br />I need to find a site that has fiction writing challenges. Have you ever seen such a website?HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67773064758940583462013-05-29T21:14:40.521-04:002013-05-29T21:14:40.521-04:00It's amazing what an entity in itself a voice ...It's amazing what an entity in itself a voice can be--some are truly remarkable vehicles for the soul who is carried by them--here we have voice and soul and comfort, and perhaps something a bit hotter as well, all in the same smooth limosine. Lovely, Shay.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62254762489193656282013-05-29T21:09:27.477-04:002013-05-29T21:09:27.477-04:00Oh yes!! Add two words and give it to the G-Man t...Oh yes!! Add two words and give it to the G-Man tomorrow night! What a gift. Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39754105674380975862013-05-29T20:33:38.029-04:002013-05-29T20:33:38.029-04:00Pure awesomeness! The words flowed into each other...Pure awesomeness! The words flowed into each other from the first to the last.Kittenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18124188553463117063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63582659195391675172013-05-29T19:26:37.482-04:002013-05-29T19:26:37.482-04:00Brilliant. Perfection. Sigh. "a mother for th...Brilliant. Perfection. Sigh. "a mother for the mother-hungry". So good.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35453458808739740752013-05-29T19:22:21.869-04:002013-05-29T19:22:21.869-04:00Wowza!Wowza!Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41380388301608539842013-05-29T19:06:29.151-04:002013-05-29T19:06:29.151-04:00From amazing opening gambit, good no great, to the...From amazing opening gambit, good no great, to the last drop.<br /><br /><br />AlohaCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-41515394406082363912013-05-29T19:05:40.542-04:002013-05-29T19:05:40.542-04:00wooo-whee!wooo-whee!TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.com