tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5019276733063162894..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Orphan Bus In The UnderworldFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3617391389015871682017-11-04T11:12:22.038-04:002017-11-04T11:12:22.038-04:00Your ability to create a space or setting which sh...Your ability to create a space or setting which shrieks authenticity, no matter how fantastical it may be, is a skill I admire and envy. This is such a rollicking ride.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9116958905020160242017-11-03T20:25:00.593-04:002017-11-03T20:25:00.593-04:00Promise me, power comes to the innocent. I am with...Promise me, power comes to the innocent. I am without hope ~~~ is it time for Spring Training to begin ??Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46196892978450999702017-11-03T02:34:27.324-04:002017-11-03T02:34:27.324-04:00Powerfully written with a few unsettling images th...Powerfully written with a few unsettling images thrown in for good measure!Namrathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459190888629470886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-83218299751633527322017-11-02T17:22:46.903-04:002017-11-02T17:22:46.903-04:00Oh, I needed this. I feel like one of those orphan...Oh, I needed this. I feel like one of those orphans.. Cast out by word peddlers and philosophy pushers I can't abide anymore. Great writing as always!!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40092137142026125972017-11-02T16:41:31.338-04:002017-11-02T16:41:31.338-04:00Those orphans means business... the fishtank and t...Those orphans means business... the fishtank and the pencil in the eye is unsettling, but worth every extra wordbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63938545146373324692017-11-02T14:45:23.831-04:002017-11-02T14:45:23.831-04:00My goodness this is powerful! Especially like; &qu...My goodness this is powerful! Especially like; "Then, a pencil in the eye for every perved-out fat man, and their scion sons putrefying inside local dance clubs." Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76921332302363659882017-11-02T14:43:19.711-04:002017-11-02T14:43:19.711-04:00Well. This is tremendously satisfying. Thank you!Well. This is tremendously satisfying. Thank you!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88102876721324876462017-11-02T14:36:39.507-04:002017-11-02T14:36:39.507-04:00These orphans are serious! Nice one.These orphans are serious! Nice one.Vivian Zemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09588008375525403964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74546271594398295322017-11-02T14:28:42.955-04:002017-11-02T14:28:42.955-04:00"Power comes to the innocent. The Virgin sees..."Power comes to the innocent. The Virgin sees to this." I love this. Too much, the Orphan Bus....Every day I get on the bus....this is so good. I love those orphans!<br />tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80854362237395320862017-11-02T13:17:45.897-04:002017-11-02T13:17:45.897-04:00106. 106? It's allowed only because '6...106. 106? It's allowed only because '6' used to be my favorite. And I can't do without 'Virgin, Church, Unhappy Meals, fucked, or gooshy.' Those 6 must remain. So glad you can be amazing with such simple word lists. I've got an orphan pencil sitting right on my desk that's begging me to do something amazing too...but after reading yours, I think I'd rather just fade out into a sunspot! Thanks Shay. Happy early Friyay.Angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413074557542736813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35980338657859977372017-11-02T13:14:19.352-04:002017-11-02T13:14:19.352-04:00You are slaying me here, Shay. I am seeing a very ...You are slaying me here, Shay. I am seeing a very fat, very orange...er, Premier--trailing through the swamp-like interior of a scummy fishbowl, and hailing the Orphans, who obviously are the only ones who see what's what and don't owe anyone anything. I love the way you make the bitterest chocolate sarcasm so eminently digestible.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61543759680529225702017-11-02T12:14:03.878-04:002017-11-02T12:14:03.878-04:00Greetings from the UK.
Thank you. Love love, Andr...Greetings from the UK.<br /><br />Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.WordsPoeticallyWorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05932809387878012226noreply@blogger.com