tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5039909021811970157..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): He's Dead, JimFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82428536755808713182009-05-02T19:52:00.000-04:002009-05-02T19:52:00.000-04:00Fantastic writing. Brilliant insights. Well done.Fantastic writing. Brilliant insights. Well done.Thumbelinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16797968670320215838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9192896593507911342009-05-01T08:24:00.000-04:002009-05-01T08:24:00.000-04:00#1 POTD! Congrats - you deserve it.#1 POTD! Congrats - you deserve it.Susan English Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05661766173970296173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22204695609514623662009-05-01T07:21:00.000-04:002009-05-01T07:21:00.000-04:00Congrats on winning David's POTD. Your poem stirre...Congrats on winning David's POTD. Your poem stirred me.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16813508472498593787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56453110819542559592009-05-01T06:12:00.000-04:002009-05-01T06:12:00.000-04:00Congratulations on winning David's Authorblog Post...Congratulations on winning David's Authorblog Post of the Day award for this poignant memoir-poem. <br />Good luck to you and your son,<br />M.Merisihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781937797213521146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81006305449966487392009-05-01T03:49:00.000-04:002009-05-01T03:49:00.000-04:00Outstanding! No wonder David picked this for his ...Outstanding! No wonder David picked this for his post of the day.<br /><br />I spent 14 years married to an alcoholic -- and 10 years getting over it. Most days now I am sane. I seldom drink. Even my occasional glass of wine with dinner rarely gets finished.<br /><br />quilldancer.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49731420824406438252009-04-29T23:36:00.000-04:002009-04-29T23:36:00.000-04:00Fantastic. It's funny how a little thing like dist...Fantastic. It's funny how a little thing like distilled potatos can overtake our world. You should be so proud to have won that one!<br /><br />Love the Star Trek references!!!listen for azurehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04300428777385011211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48261474711273654602009-04-29T23:30:00.000-04:002009-04-29T23:30:00.000-04:00Oh geez, Mama Zen is the French judge! ;-)Oh geez, Mama Zen is the French judge! ;-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37808545085157435912009-04-29T19:50:00.000-04:002009-04-29T19:50:00.000-04:00My jury is still out on the "enough chocolate" thi...My jury is still out on the "enough chocolate" thing . . .Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72952750233987410962009-04-29T19:16:00.000-04:002009-04-29T19:16:00.000-04:00Great work, Shay.Great work, Shay.david mcmahonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18009095220051075552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-52113691670112950562009-04-29T16:20:00.000-04:002009-04-29T16:20:00.000-04:00Very well-written this one!!!Very well-written this one!!!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11613205501613760392009-04-29T14:43:00.000-04:002009-04-29T14:43:00.000-04:00Shay, I have come to the conclusion, you can write...Shay, I have come to the conclusion, you can write about absolutely anything, and it is always brilliant!! Just BRILLIANT! You wow me every time!Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06089318003200939942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-48129275622857609362009-04-29T13:59:00.000-04:002009-04-29T13:59:00.000-04:00Wow. Again.Wow. Again.Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16570111809480630032009-04-29T13:50:00.000-04:002009-04-29T13:50:00.000-04:00Fireblossom...
Holy shit can you ever write!!!
Wha...Fireblossom...<br />Holy shit can you ever write!!!<br />What a masterpiece.<br />Say...On Fridays the gang and I have a little fun with only 55 words. You need a central character, a plot, and EXACTLY 55 words to tell your story.<br />Although there are no real rules, and some folks just do poetry. <br />Think about it...Please?<br />You are truely a treasure, thanks for sharing a little of your brilliance with us....GG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60380059513614944632009-04-29T12:04:00.000-04:002009-04-29T12:04:00.000-04:00Only you could get all those references rolled int...Only you could get all those references rolled into one perfect poem ... and make me feel itDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89819299257504970752009-04-29T11:16:00.000-04:002009-04-29T11:16:00.000-04:00I really enjoyed this one.
I'm still rolling it a...I really enjoyed this one.<br /><br />I'm still rolling it around my mind.<br /><br />It bought to mind a particularlly controlling ex-boyfriend. The kind of guy I'm thankful dumped me before I became someone I hate.<br /><br />(I'm married to a Jim, but thankfull he's wonderful.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25712056843142001142009-04-29T10:25:00.000-04:002009-04-29T10:25:00.000-04:00Thanks, Kristin. I am really glad that my son has ...Thanks, Kristin. I am really glad that my son has never once had to see me drunk. That's important, a gift I have been able to give him. <br /><br />Thanks, Shadow! Makin' me smile here. Hey, who else do you know who could rip off, er, I mean reference, Star Trek, Shelly Fabares, T.S Eliot, Andrew Marvell, John Lennon and Leon Russell, all in one poem? ;-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38264388935630560122009-04-29T09:58:00.000-04:002009-04-29T09:58:00.000-04:00have you touched a string... excellent writing gir...have you touched a string... excellent writing girlie girl!Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54166769056506644592009-04-29T09:06:00.000-04:002009-04-29T09:06:00.000-04:00"I have raised a child without him"
I love that p..."I have raised a child without him"<br /><br />I love that part.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com