tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5116182494725913688..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): The BabyFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27014447526539085122011-09-12T23:58:53.305-04:002011-09-12T23:58:53.305-04:00i couldn't respond to the dVerse prompt. it IS...i couldn't respond to the dVerse prompt. it IS too private. thank you for expressing that, Shay.<br />♥ dAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13840228968113626742011-09-12T04:02:37.349-04:002011-09-12T04:02:37.349-04:00Zing!
word veri: pidebratZing! <br /><br /><br />word veri: pidebratLydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62724417064864679682011-09-11T21:14:05.097-04:002011-09-11T21:14:05.097-04:00Too true.Too true.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72037264614532562102011-09-11T20:34:07.659-04:002011-09-11T20:34:07.659-04:00Amen, lady.Amen, lady.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63415605851936519592011-09-11T17:09:29.374-04:002011-09-11T17:09:29.374-04:00Yes.Yes.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72242117631263688122011-09-11T16:22:33.682-04:002011-09-11T16:22:33.682-04:00spot on ~ or rather on the money with this one Sha...spot on ~ or rather on the money with this one Shay ~ voyeuristic pourings sells ~ media ~ news ~ but 'grief should be private' and 'blood buried' ~ great write ~ Liblibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87984888135381484312011-09-11T14:37:09.586-04:002011-09-11T14:37:09.586-04:00WOW this is so strong real blood spilled across th...WOW this is so strong real blood spilled across the lands. This is what war and so much other sorrows leave behind. thank you for sharing<br />http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/11/the-sorrow-of-our-times/Ann LeFlorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09421100825301270608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-431967091322895182011-09-11T13:34:58.589-04:002011-09-11T13:34:58.589-04:00Love these lines:
Real blood
should be buried.
Re...Love these lines:<br /><br />Real blood<br />should be buried.<br />Real grief<br />Should be private.<br /><br />True ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56300635812590554562011-09-11T09:54:14.894-04:002011-09-11T09:54:14.894-04:00As is the nature of a technological world, everyth...As is the nature of a technological world, everything becomes a media event, even the things that should be held private and personal. Well done.<br /><br />BethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49394634323470226302011-09-11T09:24:59.023-04:002011-09-11T09:24:59.023-04:00Loved the tone of privacy in your grief piece.Loved the tone of privacy in your grief piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53835594149680395902011-09-11T09:19:30.640-04:002011-09-11T09:19:30.640-04:00incredible, truthful take on this prompt...incredible, truthful take on this prompt...Patriciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00991524097486901864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31099349713070333922011-09-11T07:36:51.354-04:002011-09-11T07:36:51.354-04:00Real grief is private. We just don't know the ...Real grief is private. We just don't know the difference any more. Good poem.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57916474334026716452011-09-11T04:16:25.990-04:002011-09-11T04:16:25.990-04:00yes.yes.Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56478839097233533882011-09-10T19:58:47.995-04:002011-09-10T19:58:47.995-04:00true...true.true...true.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22853054563256405072011-09-10T19:25:44.515-04:002011-09-10T19:25:44.515-04:00Imagine if there had been a draft for the subseque...Imagine if there had been a draft for the subsequent wars in Iraq and Afghanistan. Real blood on my block would have meant end of war in one year. I wrote about this yesterday the other way in "Usury."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-92212994530082818952011-09-10T19:01:31.421-04:002011-09-10T19:01:31.421-04:00Ellen nailed it - media as vampire. And so did you...Ellen nailed it - media as vampire. And so did you!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8634822169878460802011-09-10T18:36:05.669-04:002011-09-10T18:36:05.669-04:00media as vampire.media as vampire.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56738826122862330952011-09-10T18:29:38.196-04:002011-09-10T18:29:38.196-04:00But we don't see the real blood. People became...But we don't see the real blood. People became outraged over Vietnam because the news actually reported what was happening. We've got tens of thousands dead, maimed and screwed up. It's not reported. We don't see the blood.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75663219278883095922011-09-10T17:52:03.993-04:002011-09-10T17:52:03.993-04:00this is a pretty awesome poem
cuts to the quick -...this is a pretty awesome poem<br />cuts to the quick - amen alsoArron Shillinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17989854352644796752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-50468909802115819812011-09-10T17:44:50.554-04:002011-09-10T17:44:50.554-04:00AMEN!AMEN!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14569079292444740832011-09-10T16:45:28.917-04:002011-09-10T16:45:28.917-04:00The sad part is that the blood is all too real, an...The sad part is that the blood is all too real, and the jam is what's not, yet what do we see? Maybe we can't deal with that much reality--or maybe that much reality doesn't sell corn flakes as well. A stony eye that sees clearly in this one.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19181784936586302412011-09-10T16:28:23.905-04:002011-09-10T16:28:23.905-04:00Wow, very succinct and powerful. Those opening lin...Wow, very succinct and powerful. Those opening lines are incredible, and each line furthers the point here. Incredible.Uneven Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14081631496158407509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-80491099071138083172011-09-10T16:28:02.768-04:002011-09-10T16:28:02.768-04:00true that shay....true that...
vivid in its hard ...true that shay....true that...<br /><br />vivid in its hard truth...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com