tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5120565692999545663..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): CuriousFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36321418666105639192013-10-03T18:09:39.301-04:002013-10-03T18:09:39.301-04:00I love that I want to know how your skin feels, pa...I love that I want to know how your skin feels, palm to heartbeat- the rhythm of it, the sensuality of it, the gorgeous uniqueness of palm to heartbeat. I can feel the love.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70020051146296672722013-10-03T14:17:58.079-04:002013-10-03T14:17:58.079-04:00I love the first verse. It made me smile.
Also, ...I love the first verse. It made me smile. <br /><br />Also, the words "palm to heartbeat"...now that's sexy:~) <br /><br />Sometimes your tags crack me up, especially "Cheetahs always prosper" and "close encounters of the curious kind" This last should be the title of poem or short story.Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4897526916967000272013-10-03T11:40:46.535-04:002013-10-03T11:40:46.535-04:00Gorgeous!Gorgeous!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-4637194128185450892013-10-02T15:14:58.377-04:002013-10-02T15:14:58.377-04:00This is structured so beautifully. It really sink...This is structured so beautifully. It really sinks into your skin.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68663931453364216122013-10-02T14:09:58.246-04:002013-10-02T14:09:58.246-04:00I really like the first two stanzas.I really like the first two stanzas.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-451579062636504222013-10-02T00:53:38.433-04:002013-10-02T00:53:38.433-04:00This poem is very Shay... danger and sensuality mi...This poem is very Shay... danger and sensuality mixed to perfection! Love how unafraid you are to tackle these themes. The cheetah definitely looks curious, so I'd watch my step... ha ha AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8678166967604373962013-10-01T19:31:57.617-04:002013-10-01T19:31:57.617-04:00the pull of the moon... and oh, the danger of secr...the pull of the moon... and oh, the danger of secrets... yes... and those darn ponies - you never know what will happen :)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27479600502583750572013-10-01T19:21:49.394-04:002013-10-01T19:21:49.394-04:00That middle stanza is so beautiful. The whole pie...That middle stanza is so beautiful. The whole piece is full of allure.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68547506094278059212013-10-01T18:50:09.958-04:002013-10-01T18:50:09.958-04:00I especially love the wild paint pony in the tall ...I especially love the wild paint pony in the tall grass at sunrise. Wow.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16908040345747490012013-10-01T17:47:26.819-04:002013-10-01T17:47:26.819-04:00I love this. Beautiful in every detail.I love this. Beautiful in every detail.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43206492719532991822013-10-01T15:09:09.042-04:002013-10-01T15:09:09.042-04:00oh, watch out kittyoh, watch out kittyDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30576004296668877802013-10-01T10:18:31.566-04:002013-10-01T10:18:31.566-04:00Loving is all about how two do or do not complemen...Loving is all about how two do or do not complement each other--each trait brings out another--both congruences and contrasts. Secrecy does indeed call for curiosity, safety calls for risk, and isolation the comfort of company--yet each trait exists independently also.There is a dance that calls for these things to be perpetual questions, and who knows how to find the answers--maybe the pleasure lies in simply trying. A beautiful, tender poem, as always when you write of love, Shay.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85541097810976673162013-10-01T10:09:01.035-04:002013-10-01T10:09:01.035-04:00.....AND DANGEROUS!!!!.....AND DANGEROUS!!!!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75842208826098156422013-10-01T09:54:14.281-04:002013-10-01T09:54:14.281-04:00I suppose I shouldn't say "Curiosity kill...I suppose I shouldn't say "Curiosity killed the cat" so I'll just think it.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11713848508352412982013-10-01T06:01:41.485-04:002013-10-01T06:01:41.485-04:00Dark and inviting. A very compact work, but so we...Dark and inviting. A very compact work, but so well developed and balanced. Nice job.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91893645002888654542013-10-01T02:43:30.241-04:002013-10-01T02:43:30.241-04:00Oh, Shay, I had a nice solemn poetry-perfect comme...Oh, Shay, I had a nice solemn poetry-perfect comment and then I saw your Labels: cheetahs always prosper, so how can I think straight after that.<br />Know what I think? I think the final stanza, although lacking gorgeous phrases like "restless under the pull of a full moon" and "smooth and wild and ready as a paint pony"...I think it is the most important stanza.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23436473248197985522013-09-30T21:48:31.002-04:002013-09-30T21:48:31.002-04:00Curiosity might have killed the cat, but at least ...Curiosity might have killed the cat, but at least s/he died knowing the truth. Awesome piece!HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-69807164219556299282013-09-30T21:27:12.371-04:002013-09-30T21:27:12.371-04:00sultry in a wonderful way... :)sultry in a wonderful way... :)revelationshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07184644795582553870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42167393759137949932013-09-30T21:00:53.656-04:002013-09-30T21:00:53.656-04:00bring on the little warm death. :-)bring on the little warm death. :-)LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82811592457619322552013-09-30T20:39:24.819-04:002013-09-30T20:39:24.819-04:00and also perfect for the Wilde quote.and also perfect for the Wilde quote.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76570100822908410832013-09-30T20:37:55.305-04:002013-09-30T20:37:55.305-04:00beautiful and hot...beautiful and hot...TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.com