tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5148467001156778936..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): On Leaving Pennyfarthing-Sevier'sFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21650469645426431902012-06-03T08:21:09.684-04:002012-06-03T08:21:09.684-04:00The story continues...Ah, the confines of stays an...The story continues...Ah, the confines of stays and corsets could never hold in what lies in the heart. It's truths will always find a way to break free...as they did even in the Victorian era. <br /><br />Both of these poems were fun to read. You know me it's all about listening to the words. I missed visiting here:~)Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47123838617585707492012-06-01T09:05:35.389-04:002012-06-01T09:05:35.389-04:00The Victorian era was all about subjugating sexual...The Victorian era was all about subjugating sexuality - no wonder it gave rise to rippers and jeckyll-hydes. You have shown that no matter how tightly one tries to keep passion under wraps, people will find means to its self-expression.<br /><br />This is a wonderful companion piece to your first.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6424949219876793812012-06-01T09:05:33.043-04:002012-06-01T09:05:33.043-04:00Smokin' hot, Shay. I see a volume of "Sha...Smokin' hot, Shay. I see a volume of "Shay's Near-Pornographic Pioneer Poems" coming out soon. The images, the explanation of what was going on under those corsets...Amazing (as usual).Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44759331617664686292012-06-01T08:09:57.201-04:002012-06-01T08:09:57.201-04:00you never disappoint ... this is one sexy poemyou never disappoint ... this is one sexy poemDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13124057601211107852012-06-01T07:44:38.716-04:002012-06-01T07:44:38.716-04:00so beautiful and lyrical. I too am impressed with ...so beautiful and lyrical. I too am impressed with not only your wonderful and skillful use of your metaphors but your ability to make me, a male, feel the underlying constraints portrayed making me want to burst out of my clothes and leave them on the walk behind me. Did I just say that aloud? My feminine side coming out. ?-)<br /><br />Once again, Love, love love your mind and soulMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19618977222207489592012-05-31T22:40:28.395-04:002012-05-31T22:40:28.395-04:00Love the opening stanza and these:
"two rose...Love the opening stanza and these:<br /><br />"two roses rise<br />As if caressed with ice"<br /><br />"I'm ever the faint and feminine thing"✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33918305755725489512012-05-31T21:38:13.398-04:002012-05-31T21:38:13.398-04:00Delightful, my dear friend.Delightful, my dear friend.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56135447476074813142012-05-31T21:10:38.840-04:002012-05-31T21:10:38.840-04:00I would love to sing this. I can hear it.I would love to sing this. I can hear it.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13425548889601878852012-05-31T20:56:00.311-04:002012-05-31T20:56:00.311-04:00All it needs is the music. You've written a l...All it needs is the music. You've written a lyrically fine work here!Mary Ann Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859843676283396203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29008720302950283692012-05-31T20:19:15.948-04:002012-05-31T20:19:15.948-04:00Oh this is a lovely lilting thing. Love the "...Oh this is a lovely lilting thing. Love the "will not have me parched". How do you DO it??? Loved it.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-39840109204552021362012-05-31T18:14:54.813-04:002012-05-31T18:14:54.813-04:00the things women do to be beautiful... or sexy......the things women do to be beautiful... or sexy....<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40803874742765361452012-05-31T17:05:28.316-04:002012-05-31T17:05:28.316-04:00.. it's like you lived in another lifetime ........ it's like you lived in another lifetime ... on another planet! And it's all wonderful .........Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-75772637890469864692012-05-31T16:53:59.752-04:002012-05-31T16:53:59.752-04:00I love the feeling of a secret life under the conf...I love the feeling of a secret life under the confines of society's straitjacket-(-perfect sequel on what was done to the poor be-corsetted waif behind the third door yesterday--)only on a much more serious and lyric level. I am pulling hairs over that third stanza, but it all sings.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com