tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5168700889532304679..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): You Have One New MessageFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54089236642862768552013-04-21T01:46:42.348-04:002013-04-21T01:46:42.348-04:00"worm-ass"
LOVE that!
♥"worm-ass"<br /><br />LOVE that!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47668493277135199392013-04-10T17:22:49.285-04:002013-04-10T17:22:49.285-04:00Shay, you are the QUEEN. Or whatever title you ch...Shay, you are the QUEEN. Or whatever title you choose. I don't curtsy either, ha ha ha.<br /><br />Love how you take a delicate illustration and just have a smackdown with it. You rock, my friend. "Sports shit," indeed!<br /><br />You DO deserve a butterfly, as long as you let it fly free. As if you'd have it any other way... Love, AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21261354563072174712013-04-10T13:17:13.513-04:002013-04-10T13:17:13.513-04:00love this. at first i thought it said "sports...love this. at first i thought it said "sports shirt," but "sports shit" is so much more apt. !Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57437684089105243342013-04-10T12:26:51.272-04:002013-04-10T12:26:51.272-04:00Oh now, this is just a brilliant line break:
&quo...Oh now, this is just a brilliant line break:<br /><br />"you'd know what I want.<br />I wouldn't have to"<br /><br />What you're hiding here is that not only are you expecting the reader to know what you want, but you're expecting her to know what you want in spite of the fact that you don't even know. That was masterful, my dear.<br /><br />And then also, that well-planned line break feeds right into your list, organizing it and controlling the way it is read and emphasized.<br /><br />These are fantastic:<br />"get out the hand puppets"<br />"dressed in sports shit"<br /><br />I feel like you're also hiding something sensual here:<br />"you'd lay the world at my feet" ... particularly if you are "the world," which is what you're saying you want to be to the reader (if worthy, which clearly he/she is not) ... I think you're embedding (ha!) the fact that you want all your desires, needs, pleasures met/served-up on an altar right at your "feet," so to speak.<br /><br />The last stanza is priceless.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-92182033812850304122013-04-10T11:25:47.877-04:002013-04-10T11:25:47.877-04:00When Mama Zen exploded her 'Boom'! I could...When Mama Zen exploded her 'Boom'! I could feel it over here.<br /><br />Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56128317505262539092013-04-10T10:12:56.929-04:002013-04-10T10:12:56.929-04:00Hehehehe!
If only all worms could be put in their...Hehehehe!<br /><br />If only all worms could be put in their place so well!Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25689598944444706352013-04-10T09:16:39.306-04:002013-04-10T09:16:39.306-04:00i am savoring this onei am savoring this oneDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-24018304285367342062013-04-10T03:22:01.928-04:002013-04-10T03:22:01.928-04:00Ohoh Yeah!Ohoh Yeah!Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-8044674696650348722013-04-09T22:30:21.236-04:002013-04-09T22:30:21.236-04:00AwwwYeah! That's the way to roll. Mind if I ...AwwwYeah! That's the way to roll. Mind if I borrow this attitude for a few minutes?HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31677190009210714622013-04-09T21:54:54.204-04:002013-04-09T21:54:54.204-04:00Wicked good, Shay.
You do long nicely, and you sl...Wicked good, Shay.<br /><br />You do long nicely, and you slay with the short.<br /><br />Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9899982252993450682013-04-09T21:04:38.586-04:002013-04-09T21:04:38.586-04:00Boom! This is the coolest take ever.Boom! This is the coolest take ever.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65456079864570587402013-04-09T21:04:18.796-04:002013-04-09T21:04:18.796-04:00Oh, Shay, if this is indeed heartbreak, I'm so...Oh, Shay, if this is indeed heartbreak, I'm sorry, because it made me laugh. I love "I wouldn't have to...get out the hand puppets" and the last stanza is fabulous. You are definitely a butterfly!<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42745388762560201872013-04-09T20:36:48.095-04:002013-04-09T20:36:48.095-04:00Hallmark needs to print this for Mouse's hubby...Hallmark needs to print this for Mouse's hubby ~~ and all the hardheaded goofs out there!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37869325811783197992013-04-09T20:34:28.632-04:002013-04-09T20:34:28.632-04:00i love it!i love it!TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-55618081521216644572013-04-09T20:20:55.748-04:002013-04-09T20:20:55.748-04:00I'd love to print this out and give it to my h...I'd love to print this out and give it to my hardheaded husband right about now! Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53994759271466517902013-04-09T20:12:42.436-04:002013-04-09T20:12:42.436-04:00Oh, yes!!! This bitter disappointment!! You spell ...Oh, yes!!! This bitter disappointment!! You spell it out so clearly and make your reader feel...thank you!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84747635703502105902013-04-09T19:57:14.762-04:002013-04-09T19:57:14.762-04:00Ha. Fire blossom is pretty fantastic too!! Perfec...Ha. Fire blossom is pretty fantastic too!! Perfect wrap up ... I wondered how you were going to tie the image in. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.com