tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5239629544214480330..comments2024-03-28T19:48:05.247-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Hologram Family RobinsonFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-53377224910022744152018-06-24T13:09:32.208-04:002018-06-24T13:09:32.208-04:00most apropos - and wonderful expansion - I'm g...most apropos - and wonderful expansion - I'm glad you picked up on the unspoken, undercurrent in my words and ran with it into the realms of absolute precision for the illusions, and projections (holograms are so totally weird) ... this is first rate! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59309974033302805772018-06-23T11:22:07.898-04:002018-06-23T11:22:07.898-04:00"You're projecting!!" cried the assh..."You're projecting!!" cried the asshole. Yeah, I've had enough of that for sure.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47259487991902562782018-06-22T14:30:42.864-04:002018-06-22T14:30:42.864-04:00Oh damn the reptiles and their snapping discourse!...Oh damn the reptiles and their snapping discourse!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6723805545088370282018-06-22T14:06:13.576-04:002018-06-22T14:06:13.576-04:00This is such a clever response to these times in w...This is such a clever response to these times in which we live - on point and irony which verges on tragedy.. the last image is most telling of all.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-72835643040997776922018-06-22T10:52:24.099-04:002018-06-22T10:52:24.099-04:00I think you nailed it on this one!!!I think you nailed it on this one!!!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81384969902702954382018-06-22T09:35:24.520-04:002018-06-22T09:35:24.520-04:00and like love
good advice
or last night's dinn...and like love<br />good advice<br />or last night's dinner,<br />everything goes right through them.<br />"Hail, signalman!" they cry, larynxless<br />like insects in the rotting ear of a dead man.<br /><br />I especially love those last six lines, and had to smile over the "last night's dinner" line.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61514999406865054432018-06-22T08:03:14.972-04:002018-06-22T08:03:14.972-04:00Way too many like this out there--though they are ...Way too many like this out there--though they are neither as picturesque nor as poetic perhaps, as your example. I particularly like "auto-tuned assholes." That seems to say it all. And sadly, I don;t think there's any cure for assholery.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-10078341683262155632018-06-22T00:11:21.678-04:002018-06-22T00:11:21.678-04:00Wowzers. This sizzles. There is a lot of reptilian...Wowzers. This sizzles. There is a lot of reptilian consciousness in evidence these days. Nailed it.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71888599567708735482018-06-21T22:07:42.771-04:002018-06-21T22:07:42.771-04:00Wow. You rocked this one Shay. Right on.Wow. You rocked this one Shay. Right on.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.com