tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post533630515412703956..comments2024-03-29T07:11:54.743-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Rain LightFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51518783764648063502014-01-31T19:13:00.813-05:002014-01-31T19:13:00.813-05:00shouldn't always be so …shouldn't always be so …<br />Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13164783282911519572014-01-31T19:12:36.661-05:002014-01-31T19:12:36.661-05:00Did you write this after Obama's State of the ...Did you write this after Obama's State of the Union Address? … sorry (couldn't help myself) Forgive me. And never take anything off "because it's so angry". People don't have to read AND poetry should always be so sappy (like mine:)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27392015209652371432014-01-30T23:38:05.437-05:002014-01-30T23:38:05.437-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20092868572757532122014-01-30T22:26:01.288-05:002014-01-30T22:26:01.288-05:00I cannot think of another human who does anger as ...I cannot think of another human who does anger as well! Riveting simply riveting.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21244894545064888492014-01-30T22:25:30.617-05:002014-01-30T22:25:30.617-05:00Come in, crap out, call da cops!
ALOHA from Honol...Come in, crap out, call da cops!<br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> > < } } ( ° ><br />Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-77526075852816939932014-01-30T18:26:13.381-05:002014-01-30T18:26:13.381-05:00This has edge to spare! I love it.This has edge to spare! I love it.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91473932190438213482014-01-30T16:31:59.830-05:002014-01-30T16:31:59.830-05:00You call THAT angry?
Awwwww, you so sweet!You call THAT angry?<br />Awwwww, you so sweet!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64691263277245737592014-01-30T16:29:04.233-05:002014-01-30T16:29:04.233-05:00*Very* glad to see it back. It is way too good to ...*Very* glad to see it back. It is way too good to lose.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82984063523788150042014-01-30T16:21:38.058-05:002014-01-30T16:21:38.058-05:004 comments were lost. here they are:
Sara said.....4 comments were lost. here they are:<br /><br /><br />Sara said...<br /><br /> Whoa, lady!!! As you know, I always read your poetry out loud. This was quite the challenge.<br /><br /> It has the feeling of a rap poem. I can see you in a smokey room with a microphone and husky voice reading this one. The audience would be nodding their heads to rhythm of your voice:~)<br /><br /><br /> January 29, 2014 at 5:48 PM <br />hedgewitch said...<br /><br /> There's an indictment, a plea, and a prayer in here, fused in a howl that jabs the eardrums and ruptures the brain--the irony of the chorus is a dull throb counterpoint, and the dark beat, o yes--it does go on. Best keep some distance from this one, before it explodes and broken glass does what broken glass will do.<br /><br /><br /> January 29, 2014 at 6:05 PM <br />Cloudia said...<br /><br /> all the grit and incident we love in our earthy march through the shit<br /><br /><br /><br /> ALOHA from Honolulu<br /> Comfort Spiral<br /> > < } } ( ° ><br /><br /><br /> January 29, 2014 at 7:19 PM <br />grapeling said...<br /><br /> all that plastic, outside and in, and not a drop of clean water in sight ~<br /> Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.com