tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5371148652724449153..comments2024-03-28T09:11:04.513-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): EclipseFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82334201669677800822012-12-02T16:33:28.207-05:002012-12-02T16:33:28.207-05:00MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-383139217052128212012-12-01T00:29:35.175-05:002012-12-01T00:29:35.175-05:00*new* level...duh!*new* level...duh!Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-62909232031563278202012-12-01T00:29:05.223-05:002012-12-01T00:29:05.223-05:00I love the listing of parts, as if each one has be...I love the listing of parts, as if each one has betrayed its owner by consistently yearning for the one beloved she may not have. I'm a sucker for poems about unrequited love but this takes the idea to a knew level in the last four lines.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3745936819786065782012-11-30T21:00:56.553-05:002012-11-30T21:00:56.553-05:00This is so good that I'm not even sure how to ...This is so good that I'm not even sure how to begin to comment. This is perfect.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13173109593621557242012-11-30T17:51:26.473-05:002012-11-30T17:51:26.473-05:00Please pardon the last three lines being bolder. I...Please pardon the last three lines being bolder. I was trying to get them indented, and it isn't easy, or I don't know how.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-31603943962377088712012-11-30T13:34:12.846-05:002012-11-30T13:34:12.846-05:00Love every line.....pain and loss so beautifully e...Love every line.....pain and loss so beautifully expressed here Shay! Certainly a new favorite for me!!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-21202948487455178202012-11-30T11:56:39.464-05:002012-11-30T11:56:39.464-05:00Wow. This is stark and stunning and sooooo moving....Wow. This is stark and stunning and sooooo moving. Brilliant writing.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29042214685524395082012-11-30T07:28:22.088-05:002012-11-30T07:28:22.088-05:00I love the last 6 lines as well, along with the &q...I love the last 6 lines as well, along with the "You are vapor in a sieve held by a ghost." <br /><br />If this is bitter stuff, bring a whole bottle to me. I'll gladly guzzle some down...Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11965766078166518812012-11-29T23:11:15.849-05:002012-11-29T23:11:15.849-05:00I especially love your last six lines. This is a p...I especially love your last six lines. This is a powerful piece that gives voice to silent pain, longing, and sorrow.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5540106681838856972012-11-29T22:09:42.491-05:002012-11-29T22:09:42.491-05:00"You are vapor in a sieve held by a ghost.&qu..."You are vapor in a sieve held by a ghost."<br /><br />That's genius on a cracker, that bit!HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74988212138978823982012-11-29T20:15:00.536-05:002012-11-29T20:15:00.536-05:00The Muse is a harsh mistress, or is that, the mist...The Muse is a harsh mistress, or is that, the mistress is a harsh Muse? Words can't touch this one, so I'll just say, your bitter wine was my medicine of choice tonight.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com