tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5441422480696329412..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): ProverbFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25810169630374933712010-09-20T15:45:10.924-04:002010-09-20T15:45:10.924-04:00Oooh I love the imagery in this!Oooh I love the imagery in this!Mojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03498213932233245032noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-42911970825634588252010-09-20T13:00:21.840-04:002010-09-20T13:00:21.840-04:00a bird in dirty water...sings just as beautifully....a bird in dirty water...sings just as beautifully...i think that will become my new favourite proverb....<br /><br />this was a great poem that i ma glad i had the opportunity to read...<br /><br />cheers PeteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90649570480594212062010-09-19T17:57:25.664-04:002010-09-19T17:57:25.664-04:00Ah this is certainly beautiful. I especially love ...Ah this is certainly beautiful. I especially love the imagery you've created of "Red and yellow leaves collect there,<br />Making a strange dark tea."<br /><br />The title is befitting, it provides a connection to the last two lines wonderfully. A great one shot :)<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by and commenting on mine. Appreciate it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25882865709506017962010-09-16T23:58:03.187-04:002010-09-16T23:58:03.187-04:00The music is always beautiful - each instrument ha...The music is always beautiful - each instrument has it's own song<br /><br />Oh Shay you always hit the right chord<br /><br />moon smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88601425179168833632010-09-16T22:59:06.403-04:002010-09-16T22:59:06.403-04:00Found this wry, clever, ironic. Tender start to a ...Found this wry, clever, ironic. Tender start to a tart ending. Enjoyed it very much. Thank you.<br />Gay (@beachanny)Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-12708299180395434882010-09-16T19:00:59.348-04:002010-09-16T19:00:59.348-04:00Beautiful poetry, Shay. Always love when irony sin...Beautiful poetry, Shay. Always love when irony sings an inspired song of understanding poetic muse. You rock!dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91517326623849317272010-09-16T11:50:42.676-04:002010-09-16T11:50:42.676-04:00well played.well played.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15902079796253561062010-09-16T10:59:53.378-04:002010-09-16T10:59:53.378-04:00This has to be one of my favorites.This has to be one of my favorites.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22080509838686468012010-09-16T10:37:22.667-04:002010-09-16T10:37:22.667-04:00Lovely words and I love those last two lines...Lovely words and I love those last two lines...Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-46748688453484732542010-09-16T10:22:10.207-04:002010-09-16T10:22:10.207-04:00Beautiful word picture, Shay!! Blessings!Beautiful word picture, Shay!! Blessings!Marionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36813144126152078022010-09-16T09:37:42.970-04:002010-09-16T09:37:42.970-04:00I think that might deserve a pillow or a t-shirt!I think that might deserve a pillow or a t-shirt!Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-88453436505883383062010-09-16T07:12:00.258-04:002010-09-16T07:12:00.258-04:00Beautiful nostalgic piece.Beautiful nostalgic piece.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14843459906469325667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-59320963090602580732010-09-16T07:04:03.163-04:002010-09-16T07:04:03.163-04:00This one's for the birds - LOL!
I really like...This one's for the birds - LOL!<br /><br />I really liked the line about the 'strange dark tea' from the decaying leaves in the basin. I've often thought murky water looked like tea.<br /><br />(And sometimes my tea looks like murky water)Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70215550055195160192010-09-16T05:31:53.380-04:002010-09-16T05:31:53.380-04:00Gorgeous poem!Gorgeous poem!Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51140040651858365992010-09-16T02:32:29.991-04:002010-09-16T02:32:29.991-04:00Time to listen to the birds in the garden.Time to listen to the birds in the garden.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-22276078734501637642010-09-16T02:00:33.370-04:002010-09-16T02:00:33.370-04:00Sweet.Sweet.Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73990720103740370812010-09-16T00:34:55.970-04:002010-09-16T00:34:55.970-04:00haha.. i don't know if it possible, but this s...haha.. i don't know if it possible, but this sings straight to my heart it sounds like:<br /><br />'this is one of my favorites, but wait! would I be cheating on all the others??? read it again! do it again! see what happens...'<br /><br />I know, I know.... a bit out of tune, but I hear that's how you like it ;)Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36857032286439771542010-09-16T00:29:20.071-04:002010-09-16T00:29:20.071-04:00Worth my love and then moved on to say, a bird in ...Worth my love and then moved on to say, a bird in dirty water sings as beautifully.. liked it so much...<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya.Shashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33024577097921401682010-09-16T00:11:44.665-04:002010-09-16T00:11:44.665-04:00I had to giggle (which might seem inappropriate) b...I had to giggle (which might seem inappropriate) because my Mom uses "dirty bird" when someone does something uncouth. <br /><br />I love the leaf tea bringing a person to mind...<br /><br />As always, Shay, I completely enjoyed :)TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-71746330106280292542010-09-15T23:52:18.482-04:002010-09-15T23:52:18.482-04:00Yes a dirty bird sings just as beautifully... perh...Yes a dirty bird sings just as beautifully... perhaps even more so.Hollandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12837549668818746188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-11004895485499714612010-09-15T23:30:19.189-04:002010-09-15T23:30:19.189-04:00This is wonderful. I must say, I truly love the e...This is wonderful. I must say, I truly love the ending. So glad you shared this.<br /><br />TeresaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-5720024849888213322010-09-15T22:32:25.131-04:002010-09-15T22:32:25.131-04:00I agree with Cloudia - you are the lovely singing ...I agree with Cloudia - you are the lovely singing bird.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63262485839032275802010-09-15T22:17:42.827-04:002010-09-15T22:17:42.827-04:00Wonderful piece, Shay. I have two of those basins ...Wonderful piece, Shay. I have two of those basins just about to brew some strange dark tea.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44730283052143263232010-09-15T21:52:33.673-04:002010-09-15T21:52:33.673-04:00Wow! Bring on the dirty swamp water! This is wonde...Wow! Bring on the dirty swamp water! This is wonderful, Shay.Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-54006065515996199612010-09-15T21:43:06.790-04:002010-09-15T21:43:06.790-04:00this was marvelous...especially the last two lines...this was marvelous...especially the last two lines :)Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.com