tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5517573625597401025..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): ArtificeFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-43007208775208476032015-12-28T18:53:29.299-05:002015-12-28T18:53:29.299-05:00Like a kite in the wind and as fragile.....wanderi...Like a kite in the wind and as fragile.....wandering hearts always are. Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19625074510951321802015-12-26T14:56:16.030-05:002015-12-26T14:56:16.030-05:00Perfectly titled! Perfectly titled! Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18372015226222285350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-79838732111362424312015-12-25T22:35:56.406-05:002015-12-25T22:35:56.406-05:00I enjoyed this song. I've heard Waylon Jenning...I enjoyed this song. I've heard Waylon Jennings' version of this song. Both are great. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29224658021591503422015-12-25T22:29:27.728-05:002015-12-25T22:29:27.728-05:00This is amazing in the way it relates each person&...This is amazing in the way it relates each person's different thoughts as they share the same moment. Lovely and sad.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76218378885156307022015-12-25T21:00:06.176-05:002015-12-25T21:00:06.176-05:00That closing line just crushes.That closing line just crushes.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85588666874320944322015-12-24T08:59:09.449-05:002015-12-24T08:59:09.449-05:00love the opening, and "I'll make you laug...love the opening, and "I'll make you laugh and feel good,<br />all without risking anything, because I won't feel more than fondness." is refreshingly honest in its bite. Ostensible Truthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08775793995809226782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-89484818586627858892015-12-22T22:15:43.006-05:002015-12-22T22:15:43.006-05:00"gone, like a kite in the wind....." Lov..."gone, like a kite in the wind....." Love that. I agree with Bjorn, kites are less fragile than they look!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-81719429530729290692015-12-22T19:37:26.665-05:002015-12-22T19:37:26.665-05:00I accept, as my shoulders are broad, and my love f...I accept, as my shoulders are broad, and my love for you, unquestioned! Always la la now and in the coming year, Moskowitz the HumbleBuddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15835089930366666212015-12-22T18:16:04.261-05:002015-12-22T18:16:04.261-05:00lovely poem. I like your take on the photo.lovely poem. I like your take on the photo.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23711697311545265572015-12-21T19:35:29.011-05:002015-12-21T19:35:29.011-05:00Each word choice; Each line;
PerfectEach word choice; Each line;<br />PerfectCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87512677060377778122015-12-21T12:24:30.898-05:002015-12-21T12:24:30.898-05:00Love the title, love the last line and everything ...Love the title, love the last line and everything in between is certainly food for thought.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45497600323722619682015-12-21T04:29:57.399-05:002015-12-21T04:29:57.399-05:00I think kites are good at finding their way... Usu...I think kites are good at finding their way... Usually less fragile than they look.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68093651677160054132015-12-20T23:16:27.391-05:002015-12-20T23:16:27.391-05:00I've never heard that Gordon Lightfoot song, b...I've never heard that Gordon Lightfoot song, but it's a perfect companion for your poem.<br /><br />Your last is tear-worthy... beyond brilliant.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7185153490503096732015-12-20T23:09:16.458-05:002015-12-20T23:09:16.458-05:00Well done elevator feelings. Thanks for Gordon!Well done elevator feelings. Thanks for Gordon!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15331821203739679562015-12-20T21:26:41.700-05:002015-12-20T21:26:41.700-05:00nice comparisons- well done!nice comparisons- well done!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27682833119518305192015-12-20T19:14:25.998-05:002015-12-20T19:14:25.998-05:00Lord I haven't heard that song in years--love ...Lord I haven't heard that song in years--love it, and his voice. This poem speaks the language of contradictions fluently--how we idealize and then discard the imperfect reality, even if it is one within ourselves more than the other. I think you've captured a lot of the way we are when young and fragile here too, caught between insecurity and the inability to settle.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com