tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5624351894121678938..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): November Love SongFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-772485953784008322010-07-15T09:28:26.818-04:002010-07-15T09:28:26.818-04:00your imagergy, the flow and construction...loved i...your imagergy, the flow and construction...loved it.<br /><br />smiles,Jessiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11173809658342411265noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51961126688197916382010-07-15T04:53:04.363-04:002010-07-15T04:53:04.363-04:00Captivating, kept my interest through the seasons,...Captivating, kept my interest through the seasons, and wanted to hear more of your poetry. <br /><br />Joanny<br /><br />came by one stop poetry, hope your computer gets fixed, nothing worse for a writer then a bad computer.joannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-49533896809637411382010-07-14T21:29:29.211-04:002010-07-14T21:29:29.211-04:00I really enjoyed the captivity of this poem! enjoy...I really enjoyed the captivity of this poem! enjoyed the passage through the seasonsCatyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-13287515765427787182010-07-14T18:17:06.606-04:002010-07-14T18:17:06.606-04:00Very nice trip through the seasons of love, but I ...Very nice trip through the seasons of love, but I too wonder about Spring. Must be that Spring was the love one wants to forget.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38968487874846614212010-07-14T16:30:18.042-04:002010-07-14T16:30:18.042-04:00My my my!!! What fantabulous imagery and awesome w...My my my!!! What fantabulous imagery and awesome words to go with it!<br /><br />Now I am in love with your blog... <br /><br />I now have a brown-eyed love<br />In the heart of monsoon, we'd meet;<br />Blooming flora spread across our bed,<br />And splashy puddles beneath.<br />Those tuneful songs that make me sigh--<br />My brown-eyed love and I... :)<br /><br />Good God.. I LOVED YOUR POEM! <br />Very soulful... and oozing with style!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-330633147862460432010-07-14T14:49:53.999-04:002010-07-14T14:49:53.999-04:00makes me anticipate spring..your writing is beauti...makes me anticipate spring..your writing is beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-364183654817946212010-07-14T13:54:01.412-04:002010-07-14T13:54:01.412-04:00Kind readers--I am trying to get around to all of ...Kind readers--I am trying to get around to all of your blogs, but my old comp has decided to play Carnival Of Error Messages and so I am having difficulties. Please bear with me. I appreciate all of your comments! :-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-51338915867075777482010-07-14T13:31:13.586-04:002010-07-14T13:31:13.586-04:00Ahhh - the love of the seasons - so nicely written...Ahhh - the love of the seasons - so nicely written -so well put!<br />ClaudiaClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-715969793847183102010-07-14T12:18:28.331-04:002010-07-14T12:18:28.331-04:00Oh yeah - Ingrid Michaelson would do a GREAT job s...Oh yeah - Ingrid Michaelson would do a GREAT job singing this!<br /><br />I was going to ask about spring too. Maybe that's the one that stayed...The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17603933148486687542010-07-14T12:14:43.583-04:002010-07-14T12:14:43.583-04:00I like this one a lot. I see it and feel it. I cou...I like this one a lot. I see it and feel it. I could almost hear Ingrid Michelson singing it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-34192200009368536632010-07-14T11:04:59.630-04:002010-07-14T11:04:59.630-04:00Such a fascinating writing. I love the eye color f...Such a fascinating writing. I love the eye color flowing different kinds of love in the seasons. Well written, beautiful! ~AprilAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-7647139926701306722010-07-14T10:15:35.284-04:002010-07-14T10:15:35.284-04:00funny how we can't hold on to any season but m...funny how we can't hold on to any season but must submit to the next one<br />interesting poem<br />loved the construction tooSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-65526625407893566642010-07-14T10:11:53.277-04:002010-07-14T10:11:53.277-04:00Saaaayyyy, isn't that DHC from Danny's?
B...Saaaayyyy, isn't that DHC from Danny's?<br /><br />Bittersweet memories, dearie?Mojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03498213932233245032noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45244354539222211092010-07-14T09:18:10.208-04:002010-07-14T09:18:10.208-04:00You say so much about life through this form and s...You say so much about life through this form and symbolism. Very well written. Thanks. <br /><br />Also, appreciate you being a part of One Shot Wednesday!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-84652309940888805552010-07-14T05:59:00.818-04:002010-07-14T05:59:00.818-04:00Always good. Always spicy :)Always good. Always spicy :)Tabitha Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08196816108272065974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30445993531866722092010-07-14T04:20:45.520-04:002010-07-14T04:20:45.520-04:00i think i feel in love with every season!!! but th...i think i feel in love with every season!!! but that season that kept me warm when i wanted it most most surely have been my black eyed love...now theres some memories...thanks for sharing with One Shot..cheers PeteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64471016311844295972010-07-14T02:54:03.064-04:002010-07-14T02:54:03.064-04:00Black wings upon
an angle dark
Three lovers
did ...Black wings upon <br />an angle dark<br />Three lovers <br />did you see<br />leaden skies<br />unforgiving July<br />that lives nor dies<br />across the bed with thēdesk49https://www.blogger.com/profile/05795159954019523527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-17428580895163404392010-07-14T00:02:17.569-04:002010-07-14T00:02:17.569-04:00And what of Spring? She would have to be the hazel...And what of Spring? She would have to be the hazel eyes, I think ;).<br /><br />The flow between the seasons, the colors and the accompaniement of all things natural is just beautiful, Shay.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-64361259057810950562010-07-13T23:31:44.862-04:002010-07-13T23:31:44.862-04:00you good
Aloha from Waikiki
Comfort Spira...you good<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Aloha from Waikiki <br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-679477484934025002010-07-13T22:33:52.644-04:002010-07-13T22:33:52.644-04:00Fabulous piece Fireblossom, I love the transition ...Fabulous piece Fireblossom, I love the transition between the color of eyes and their correlation to the seasons of love...bkm<br /><br />happy to see you added to the Poet's United rolls...signed...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16456315348006345592010-07-13T21:47:27.617-04:002010-07-13T21:47:27.617-04:00I hear medieval music with this. Gorgeous, gorgeo...I hear medieval music with this. Gorgeous, gorgeous writing.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47893032745593207332010-07-13T20:49:19.678-04:002010-07-13T20:49:19.678-04:00That is just beautifully written.That is just beautifully written.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61305678326696258762010-07-13T19:47:04.098-04:002010-07-13T19:47:04.098-04:00Oh sweetie, shivers.Oh sweetie, shivers.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6126955241267179752010-07-13T19:29:39.664-04:002010-07-13T19:29:39.664-04:00This read in my head as a song. I love the differe...This read in my head as a song. I love the different portrayals of the loves!Kira Stannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07085044018165228069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-16033888512800495212010-07-13T19:26:06.976-04:002010-07-13T19:26:06.976-04:00Us hazel-eyed girls need love, too!Us hazel-eyed girls need love, too!Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.com