tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post5986450536481877077..comments2024-03-28T21:52:15.546-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Versions Of HeavenFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-63989838878240609352015-04-29T22:54:11.862-04:002015-04-29T22:54:11.862-04:00gorgeous, Shay ~gorgeous, Shay ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-85101054226236689572015-04-29T15:57:59.788-04:002015-04-29T15:57:59.788-04:00I agree...this is one of your bests. There are so ...I agree...this is one of your bests. There are so many descriptive phrases that made sigh, but I really loved this one:<br /><br />"How hammock-easy were my dreams."<br /><br />Now this is romantic!<br /><br />You'd better put this one in the next book!Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-47933845609456823032015-04-27T17:35:45.950-04:002015-04-27T17:35:45.950-04:00I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke; you...I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke; your poem, however, did. Thanks Shay La LABuddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-9915078265098581832015-04-27T10:15:09.805-04:002015-04-27T10:15:09.805-04:00Incredible. Shay, this is just so good.Incredible. Shay, this is just so good.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14154076448149575592015-04-26T23:46:28.080-04:002015-04-26T23:46:28.080-04:00How is it possible for your to be getting even bet...How is it possible for your to be getting even better?!<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu,<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">ComfortSpiral</a><br /> =^..^=Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-90717461587501407442015-04-26T23:01:33.003-04:002015-04-26T23:01:33.003-04:00WOW:
"How hammock-easy were my dreams.
How c...WOW: <br />"How hammock-easy were my dreams.<br />How contented were my cat-sounds in the jewelry box of her arms."<br /><br />ANd she didn't take you to pieces! To be whole in the morning! To have dreams that wholesome and colorful!<br /><br />Bravo on capturing this--or creating this--in words. ANd the music works too, but not as well as the words.<br />Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60417896514641937062015-04-26T18:12:59.452-04:002015-04-26T18:12:59.452-04:00I think this is the most incredibly beautiful and ...I think this is the most incredibly beautiful and sensuous thing I ever read!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-19072337120706428972015-04-26T16:25:19.636-04:002015-04-26T16:25:19.636-04:00Yes, lovely. I agree with Hedge re starfish line....Yes, lovely. I agree with Hedge re starfish line. Thanks. k.Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-6977847644416098382015-04-26T15:00:51.427-04:002015-04-26T15:00:51.427-04:00Such a rich and luscious love poem, Shay. That thi...Such a rich and luscious love poem, Shay. That third stanza is a marvel all its own.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28645627394790820622015-04-26T14:42:20.666-04:002015-04-26T14:42:20.666-04:00As always you find the fresh language, the unique ...As always you find the fresh language, the unique image, the one that no one else could think of or see, here deliciously sweet, transformative, and also, not something possibly one would want to meet in a dark alley, but under the pink dawn light, purring, just perfect. Beautiful, evocative, and very rich. My favorite line(besides the clover-honey molasses) is "...I lay on my side in the sand, hoping she would take my teeth for starfish arms...." (!!)hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23048981992104835362015-04-26T12:16:56.388-04:002015-04-26T12:16:56.388-04:00This is absolutely breath-taking :D
Bravo! Enjoyed...This is absolutely breath-taking :D<br />Bravo! Enjoyed it :D<br />xoxoSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73790741434214642332015-04-26T12:15:30.299-04:002015-04-26T12:15:30.299-04:00divine, sublime, true Fireblossom storytelling! lo...divine, sublime, true Fireblossom storytelling! love this!<br /><br />"spill the wine take that pearl"<br /><br />god, i haven't heard that song in AGES!<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13629303520695044479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40877405602331266592015-04-26T10:21:44.354-04:002015-04-26T10:21:44.354-04:00beautiful.beautiful.TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-68380510989379798112015-04-26T10:09:45.823-04:002015-04-26T10:09:45.823-04:00Its a beautiful read, well done!Its a beautiful read, well done!Blogorattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86435564028384930082015-04-26T09:32:18.329-04:002015-04-26T09:32:18.329-04:00Shay--This is beyond sensual. God! It's gorgeo...Shay--This is beyond sensual. God! It's gorgeous.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.com