tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post6077518213890477233..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): In The House Of NeverFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-61959598505963657832018-07-31T19:38:41.020-04:002018-07-31T19:38:41.020-04:00Catching up on reading. In last comment I said
You...Catching up on reading. In last comment I said<br />You create mood better than anyone else I know, but here your vision of place shines (through glass). Is there any angle to a poem which you cannot corner the market? Angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413074557542736813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-35769235154869795962018-07-10T12:34:15.672-04:002018-07-10T12:34:15.672-04:00This so aptly describes the daily struggle of livi...This so aptly describes the daily struggle of living life with anxiety.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-32495151284949909022018-07-10T08:14:32.516-04:002018-07-10T08:14:32.516-04:00"What regrets to horn out of our shoes?"..."What regrets to horn out of our shoes?"<br /><br />Simply gorgeous. Doesn't the heat ever get to your head, and you end up writing crap?Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-3582707840527272002018-07-10T01:17:29.099-04:002018-07-10T01:17:29.099-04:00What to do with morning? Afternoon?
Parceled into ...What to do with morning? Afternoon?<br />Parceled into minutes by panes of glass?<br /><br />parceled into minutes ... and boxed into, or not - neat compartments, as worn as lacy sleeves <br /><br />this is rich for the counterpanes - the duality of nature, nurture, fostering an easiness that is neither simple, nor sparse - but embroidered, textured -<br /><br />a fine interpretation of the image Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25278303059712954522018-07-09T22:47:49.765-04:002018-07-09T22:47:49.765-04:00I love the floor, made of tired ships which rolled...I love the floor, made of tired ships which rolled and died here.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-29687648018990001352018-07-09T18:21:33.650-04:002018-07-09T18:21:33.650-04:00the girl who *appears* not to listenthe girl who *appears* not to listen✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-56224640832534145412018-07-09T16:17:10.261-04:002018-07-09T16:17:10.261-04:00This feels like it brushes against the tips of you...This feels like it brushes against the tips of your finger. It's lovely and more than just lovely.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-66364736183021961902018-07-09T15:51:06.808-04:002018-07-09T15:51:06.808-04:00You could tease a novel out of the threads in this...You could tease a novel out of the threads in this. Love the way the questions brace up a sense of things passed and passing.C. Sandlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15616902831506982429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-14758593142852964432018-07-09T14:27:41.232-04:002018-07-09T14:27:41.232-04:00Love all the questions in this Shay. It really ad...Love all the questions in this Shay. It really adds to the mystery of it. I especially love the line, "What to do with the floor? Made of tired ships which rolled and died here?"and "what to do with morning?Afternoon? Parceled into minutes by panes of glass?" It makes me think of how with some people or things it does not matter what we do, they are not going to really soak in what we are saying, it will be on deaf ears. Always a delight to read your words Shay, and thank you for participating at the Sunday Muse! Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-86386447727588020762018-07-09T14:00:45.848-04:002018-07-09T14:00:45.848-04:00Wow. I love the references to the sea in this. The...Wow. I love the references to the sea in this. The girl who doesn't listen is a mystery.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12299970145155468689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36986471570303960742018-07-09T12:54:04.686-04:002018-07-09T12:54:04.686-04:00That is terrific. Like everyone else, don't k...That is terrific. Like everyone else, don't know how you do it.qbithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08373768695201177514noreply@blogger.com