tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post6088912220999668422..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): In A Strange CityFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-70905281315377777262014-01-26T12:03:49.752-05:002014-01-26T12:03:49.752-05:00Gorgeous imagery. The last verse broke my heart.....Gorgeous imagery. The last verse broke my heart..."less blue..." It is life distilled. xoMarionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74419642130600373272014-01-25T12:58:28.260-05:002014-01-25T12:58:28.260-05:00Hedge already quoted my favorite line. This evoke...Hedge already quoted my favorite line. This evokes such a tender, sensual mood. It almost feels too fragile to touch.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-1597169632010957902014-01-24T22:32:03.502-05:002014-01-24T22:32:03.502-05:00The elegance and exquisite beauty given its proper...The elegance and exquisite beauty given its proper treatment. Swans are of regal bearing, that's why! Nicely Shay!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-15098330945242060602014-01-23T22:21:51.170-05:002014-01-23T22:21:51.170-05:00blue is my favorite color...
your words are my fa...blue is my favorite color...<br /><br />your words are my favorite poetry...<br /><br />you are my favorite SP!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25719568928971169942014-01-23T22:12:26.587-05:002014-01-23T22:12:26.587-05:00Swan Police - gonna remember that!
ALOHA from...Swan Police - gonna remember that!<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> > < } } ( ° >Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-57185505105124827022014-01-23T21:37:40.287-05:002014-01-23T21:37:40.287-05:00"I packed the swans carefully, like sleeping ..."I packed the swans carefully, like sleeping babies,<br />more beautiful and less blue than even the day before"<br /><br />Ahh, the small tokens of unforgettable moments. Love it!HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45141578223107729012014-01-23T15:36:00.544-05:002014-01-23T15:36:00.544-05:00All just so beautiful and amazingly well-written, ...All just so beautiful and amazingly well-written, but I love the stanza beginning "No dealer...". It is a little poem in its own right and produces that remarkable shift from the first to the second movement of the poem.<br /><br />I think you may just have created a demand for blue swans carved of azurite.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-87498163731368206302014-01-23T15:25:21.537-05:002014-01-23T15:25:21.537-05:00I also love the sensory image of these words "...I also love the sensory image of these words "where the local language sounds like gravel poured from a wine glass." I have heard language like this.<br /><br />Wow. This one was lovingly tender, especially with the swans. My favorite line was "No occupying army ever met less resistance." That made me giggle:~)Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82240957313883710292014-01-23T14:32:21.332-05:002014-01-23T14:32:21.332-05:00completely off topic, but spirituous and spiritual...completely off topic, but spirituous and spiritual are connected right at the altar every time a priest drinks the modified blood. so anyways, I just added two words to my post for Brendan's prompt, to satisfy the actual definition (and not the one I was guilty of initially using) and though it modifies the sense, it fits anyways.<br /><br />back to your pen, you're a mage, but you knew that ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-58278566902724440092014-01-23T14:24:59.120-05:002014-01-23T14:24:59.120-05:00Love the swan imagery.Love the swan imagery.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33897071045891393522014-01-23T12:25:13.915-05:002014-01-23T12:25:13.915-05:00You let her "Hit For The Cycle" on day O...You let her "Hit For The Cycle" on day ONE? She must have been hot!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-76292754379297198062014-01-23T11:36:19.094-05:002014-01-23T11:36:19.094-05:00'gravel poured from a wine glass' love it!...'gravel poured from a wine glass' love it!TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26530146910332294302014-01-23T10:24:51.979-05:002014-01-23T10:24:51.979-05:00The sense of the fragility of things being commens...The sense of the fragility of things being commensurate with their worth seems to glow at the bright heart of this dark lantern of a poem, softly sensual, as always sharply observant--ultimately in its fading blue, just beautiful--my favorite line is: "..No occupying army ever met less resistance..."hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com