tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post6194648425600393582..comments2024-03-29T03:09:23.361-04:00Comments on Shay's Word Garden (Poetry & Such Like): Ghost moonFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-74040321603773207572011-03-12T19:07:31.645-05:002011-03-12T19:07:31.645-05:00Oh. Shay. this is possibly one of the best things...Oh. Shay. this is possibly one of the best things you have ever done and you girl, are awesome. I read that first stanza and immediately had to read it again and I read it like I was reading it out loud. I totally see this being spoken out loud on a stage.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-91316642509711890912011-03-12T11:18:11.569-05:002011-03-12T11:18:11.569-05:00scary hot!scary hot!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-40821501756493527832011-03-12T00:28:42.736-05:002011-03-12T00:28:42.736-05:00Creepy Good!Creepy Good!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-45088507519694858262011-03-12T00:22:11.992-05:002011-03-12T00:22:11.992-05:00This is exquisite! My kinda ghost story. I especia...This is exquisite! My kinda ghost story. I especially adored the second stanza. *claps furiously* Bravo!Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03290572009221670011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-33828882316416922952011-03-11T21:26:19.150-05:002011-03-11T21:26:19.150-05:00Oh yes, very sensual and sexy and deep and vulnera...Oh yes, very sensual and sexy and deep and vulnerable ... all at the same time.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-60754981270717133072011-03-11T20:55:30.561-05:002011-03-11T20:55:30.561-05:00Kinda scary.
Very sexy!Kinda scary.<br />Very sexy!machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04073782907747032366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-12211111375440436982011-03-11T20:12:43.065-05:002011-03-11T20:12:43.065-05:00Fireblossom,
A wonderful surreal image from readi...Fireblossom,<br /><br />A wonderful surreal image from reading your words.<br />Great atmospheric poem.<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36243072325688512492011-03-11T18:42:33.404-05:002011-03-11T18:42:33.404-05:00So evocative. Good job!
Mad KaneSo evocative. Good job!<br /><a href="http://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/" rel="nofollow">Mad Kane</a>Madeleine Begun Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12290268300271622956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-82921922467154883552011-03-11T16:10:29.916-05:002011-03-11T16:10:29.916-05:00I loved how this ended, Shay...
Your imagery is a...I loved how this ended, Shay...<br /><br />Your imagery is always so stellar - it unfolds like a beautiful fan.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-30282426283961863382011-03-11T15:24:13.499-05:002011-03-11T15:24:13.499-05:00Sleeping with ghosts makes for bad dreams. A perfe...Sleeping with ghosts makes for bad dreams. A perfect journey--from first line to last, one dark metaphor to the next, from the lunatic in the mud, to the dead birds dropping, to the moon embodied--a trip to somewhere/thing beautiful,dark and frightening you can't turn away from.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-37626052534348624892011-03-11T14:37:15.183-05:002011-03-11T14:37:15.183-05:00Scary! I like this very much!Scary! I like this very much!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-44555942377617590322011-03-11T14:34:50.717-05:002011-03-11T14:34:50.717-05:00"leeching the love from my bones"
I can ..."leeching the love from my bones"<br />I can relate to that one.<br />Chilling write.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-27659484691627028032011-03-11T13:19:20.606-05:002011-03-11T13:19:20.606-05:00I love the ending. Very chilling.I love the ending. Very chilling.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-28887497776824451552011-03-11T11:26:11.510-05:002011-03-11T11:26:11.510-05:00oooooh, how wonderful! Especially the "ghost ...oooooh, how wonderful! Especially the "ghost moon"....and the water falling "like birds dropping" - oh my God! so good! "leeching the love from my bones" is brilliant. And then the waking, and the bold-eyed apparition. Fabulous poem, kiddo!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20272294943633780052011-03-11T11:00:21.937-05:002011-03-11T11:00:21.937-05:00Ghosts or reflection of inner self ...Ghosts or reflection of inner self ...Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-20390498215349243052011-03-11T08:37:22.115-05:002011-03-11T08:37:22.115-05:00Those moments between dreaming and wakefulness - s...Those moments between dreaming and wakefulness - so eerie.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-38605847794586861092011-03-11T08:23:13.323-05:002011-03-11T08:23:13.323-05:00haunting dream, well penned.
:)haunting dream, well penned.<br />:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-73893309422328106802011-03-11T08:12:43.659-05:002011-03-11T08:12:43.659-05:00Vivid dream, here, Shay. Imagery is amazing.Vivid dream, here, Shay. Imagery is amazing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-67850761149809572582011-03-11T08:03:11.309-05:002011-03-11T08:03:11.309-05:00What a vision. You have true skill FB.What a vision. You have true skill FB.Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-25344127996888573142011-03-11T07:28:34.214-05:002011-03-11T07:28:34.214-05:00Passionate sleeper, was it a dream or not? I like ...Passionate sleeper, was it a dream or not? I like that she's there at the end, real or not. Very nice visuals in this one, Shay. :)Ileanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200869126695231050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-36239254980103810102011-03-11T00:38:17.172-05:002011-03-11T00:38:17.172-05:00Love how you've blurred the lines between slee...Love how you've blurred the lines between sleep and wakefulness, fantasy and reality! Walking those lines makes life interesting...:)<br /><br />Lynette<br /><br />http://imaginationlane.blogspot.com/2011/02/my-first-microfiction-monday.htmlLynette Killamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13747902602019771481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-23976974182303678302011-03-10T23:30:19.025-05:002011-03-10T23:30:19.025-05:00so its just naked and alone...?
this was not scar...so its just naked and alone...?<br /><br />this was not scary at all...but then again i guess not all ghosts are...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3107838361391025851.post-26589290115466797432011-03-10T23:07:45.889-05:002011-03-10T23:07:45.889-05:00Came up from the water, a Ghost Moon....nice ghost...Came up from the water, a Ghost Moon....nice ghost story...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.com